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mere sabhi dosto ko meraa pyaar bharaa namaskaar.........aaj mai apnii nayii rachnaa ke saath ayii huu asaa kartii hu ye aaplogo ke dil me thorii sii jagah banaalegii......hamesaa kii tarah aap mere kamiyoo ko zarur bataiyegaa..mughe aaplogoo ke reply kaa intzar rahegaa......


tumne jo choraa haath merii shaashe hii tham gayii
jaise ye jindagii chalte chalte thahr gayii....

dekhaa thaa jo sapnaa wo sapnaa bikhar gayaa
tere jaane se har lamhaa thahr gayaa...

bastii thii jin aakho me terii pyarii sii muurat
aaj jamayaa hai aasuuoo ne wahaa Deraa....

abb iss jindagii ko kyo mai jiitii huu
kyo har roz ek nayii maut martii huu....

tujhe kiyaa thaa wadaa bass isliye hastii hu
warnaa abb to mai har shaash pe hii martii hu


aapki dost
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4th June 2007, 12:22 PM

Nice words Saloni... Accha likha hai aapne... Zara shabdon ke uccharan ko saaf rakhiye, aapki kavita aur khoobsurat lagegi... Eg.. Saans in place of Shaansh....

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mere sabhi dosto ko meraa pyaar bharaa namaskaar.........aaj mai apnii nayii rachnaa ke saath ayii huu asaa kartii hu ye aaplogo ke dil me thorii sii jagah banaalegii......hamesaa kii tarah aap mere kamiyoo ko zarur bataiyegaa..mughe aaplogoo ke reply kaa intzar rahegaa......


tumne jo choraa haath merii shaashe hii tham gayii
jaise ye jindagii chalte chalte thahr gayii....

dekhaa thaa jo sapnaa wo sapnaa bikhar gayaa
tere jaane se har lamhaa thahr gayaa...

bastii thii jin aakho me terii pyarii sii muurat
aaj jamayaa hai aasuuoo ne wahaa Deraa....

abb iss jindagii ko kyo mai jiitii huu
kyo har roz ek nayii maut martii huu....

tujhe kiyaa thaa wadaa bass isliye hastii hu
warnaa abb to mai har shaash pe hii martii hu


aapki dost
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saloni ji achi koshish hai bas mehnat karti rahe khuda kare aap or acha likhe........raj......


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4th June 2007, 01:51 PM

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mere sabhi dosto ko meraa pyaar bharaa namaskaar.........aaj mai apnii nayii rachnaa ke saath ayii huu asaa kartii hu ye aaplogo ke dil me thorii sii jagah banaalegii......hamesaa kii tarah aap mere kamiyoo ko zarur bataiyegaa..mughe aaplogoo ke reply kaa intzar rahegaa......


tumne jo choraa haath merii shaashe [saaNse] hii tham gayii
jaise ye jindagii chalte chalte thahr gayii....

dekhaa thaa jo sapnaa wo sapnaa bikhar gayaa
tere jaane se har lamhaa thahr gayaa...

bastii thii jin aakho me terii pyarii sii muurat
aaj jamayaa hai aasuuoo ne wahaa Deraa....

abb iss jindagii ko kyo mai jiitii huu
kyo har roz ek nayii maut martii huu....

tujhe kiyaa thaa wadaa bass isliye hastii hu
warnaa abb to mai har shaash [saaNs] pe hii martii hu


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baRii achHii kosiSh kii hai aapne..aor aap mehnat bhii kartii hai apnii teHreer ko beHterin banaane ke liYe.. baRii khuShii huii..yuuNhii liKhte raheN aage bhii...khuSh raheN..apnaa khayaal raKheN..duaoN ke saath ijaazaT

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Nice words Saloni... Accha likha hai aapne... Zara shabdon ke uccharan ko saaf rakhiye, aapki kavita aur khoobsurat lagegi... Eg.. Saans in place of Shaansh....

TC...
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sabse pahle aapko pahlii barr aapne thread pe dekh ke hume bahut khusi hui....aur hume padhne ke liye aur salah dene ke liye bahut bahut sukriya..

mai aapnii galtiyo ko sudharne kii purii koshish karugii...
asa kartii hu aap age bhii humko padhke hume humarii galtiyo ke baare me batate rahege.....
ese hii sath dete rahiyegaa

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4th June 2007, 04:36 PM

dear saloni...accha likha hai, rajveer ji aur pulkit ne jo kaha hai un baato.n ko jarra gaur karna...aap aur behtar likh payengi...yu hi aati rahiye mahfil mei.n

kush rahiye

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Dear Saloni..

Bahut hi khoobsoorti se ehsaason ko pesh kiya hai tumne.. Aise hi apni likhaavat me aur khoobsoorati laati raho..

Khush raho..

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abb iss jindagii ko kyo mai jiitii huu
kyo har roz ek nayii maut martii huu....

tujhe kiyaa thaa wadaa bass isliye hastii hu
warnaa abb to mai har shaash pe hii martii hu



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bohot achchhe khayaal ko aap ne bayaaN kiya hai.. yeh Sher to mujhe pasand aaya.... yuuN hii likhati raheN... aap kii Roman sudhar rahii hai.. lekin abhii safar kaa aaghaaz hii haii Take care

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saloni ji achi koshish hai bas mehnat karti rahe khuda kare aap or acha likhe........raj......
bade bhaiyaa veer jii,
pranaam,
kaise hai aap?....aap ka sath ho to yakinan hum aur achaa likhege..

hum to chal diye in anjani raho pe
tere sahare kii talash me.....

bass aap ese hii mokaa nikal ke hume padhte rahiye...sach me aapke reply ko dekh ke hume bahut khusi hotii hai......

asaa kartii hu aapka saath banaa rahegaa

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mere sabhi dosto ko meraa pyaar bharaa namaskaar.........aaj mai apnii nayii rachnaa ke saath ayii huu asaa kartii hu ye aaplogo ke dil me thorii sii jagah banaalegii......hamesaa kii tarah aap mere kamiyoo ko zarur bataiyegaa..mughe aaplogoo ke reply kaa intzar rahegaa......


tumne jo choraa haath merii shaashe hii tham gayii
jaise ye jindagii chalte chalte thahr gayii....

dekhaa thaa jo sapnaa wo sapnaa bikhar gayaa
tere jaane se har lamhaa thahr gayaa...

bastii thii jin aakho me terii pyarii sii muurat
aaj jamayaa hai aasuuoo ne wahaa Deraa....

abb iss jindagii ko kyo mai jiitii huu
kyo har roz ek nayii maut martii huu....

tujhe kiyaa thaa wadaa bass isliye hastii hu
warnaa abb to mai har shaash pe hii martii hu


aapki dost
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saloni jee namaskaaR:

baRii achHii kosiSh kii hai aapne..aor aap mehnat bhii kartii hai apnii teHreer ko beHterin banaane ke liYe.. baRii khuShii huii..yuuNhii liKhte raheN aage bhii...khuSh raheN..apnaa khayaal raKheN..duaoN ke saath ijaazaT

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mai kaha iss kabil hu wo to aapki nazar hii esii hai...jo aapko ye khubsurat lagaa...aur aapjase dost ho to mahnat to karnaa hii padtaa hai...aap bass ese hii sath dete rahiyegaa..
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mere sabhi dosto ko meraa pyaar bharaa namaskaar.........aaj mai apnii nayii rachnaa ke saath ayii huu asaa kartii hu ye aaplogo ke dil me thorii sii jagah banaalegii......hamesaa kii tarah aap mere kamiyoo ko zarur bataiyegaa..mughe aaplogoo ke reply kaa intzar rahegaa......


tumne jo choraa haath merii shaashe hii tham gayii
jaise ye jindagii chalte chalte thahr gayii....

dekhaa thaa jo sapnaa wo sapnaa bikhar gayaa
tere jaane se har lamhaa thahr gayaa...

bastii thii jin aakho me terii pyarii sii muurat
aaj jamayaa hai aasuuoo ne wahaa Deraa....

abb iss jindagii ko kyo mai jiitii huu
kyo har roz ek nayii maut martii huu....

tujhe kiyaa thaa wadaa bass isliye hastii hu
warnaa abb to mai har shaash pe hii martii hu


aapki dost
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mere sabhi dosto ko meraa pyaar bharaa namaskaar.........aaj mai apnii nayii rachnaa ke saath ayii huu asaa kartii hu ye aaplogo ke dil me thorii sii jagah banaalegii......hamesaa kii tarah aap mere kamiyoo ko zarur bataiyegaa..mughe aaplogoo ke reply kaa intzar rahegaa......


tumne jo choraa haath merii shaashe hii tham gayii
jaise ye jindagii chalte chalte thahr gayii....

dekhaa thaa jo sapnaa wo sapnaa bikhar gayaa
tere jaane se har lamhaa thahr gayaa...

bastii thii jin aakho me terii pyarii sii muurat
aaj jamayaa hai aasuuoo ne wahaa Deraa....

abb iss jindagii ko kyo mai jiitii huu
kyo har roz ek nayii maut martii huu....

tujhe kiyaa thaa wadaa bass isliye hastii hu
warnaa abb to mai har shaash pe hii martii hu


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Aadab saloni ji,
kesi hai aap?
kya baat hain,MASHA ALLAH,

APKI Nazm ka ek_ek ashaar bohot hi umda raha,
is mukammal nazm ke liye,,dilse daad de rahe hain,,kabul kijiyega
khush rahiye.
apna khayal rakhiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ

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Hi Saloni,
Bahot accha likha hai aapne, har sher se dard chhallakta hai,

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dear saloni...accha likha hai, rajveer ji aur pulkit ne jo kaha hai un baato.n ko jarra gaur karna...aap aur behtar likh payengi...yu hi aati rahiye mahfil mei.n

kush rahiye

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kesii hai aap?
aapko aapne thread pe dakh ke hume bahut khusii hui......
aur aapka sath rahe to ham aur achaa likhne kii kosis karte rahege...

aur dii agr aap hume"aap" na kahe to hume bahut achaa lagegaa...aap se risto me durii aajatii hai...aur mai aapne dii se durr nahii jaanaa chaahtii......

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Dear Saloni..

Bahut hi khoobsoorti se ehsaason ko pesh kiya hai tumne.. Aise hi apni likhaavat me aur khoobsoorati laati raho..

Khush raho..

~Priya
priya jii,

sabse pahle aapko bahut bahut sukriyaa jo aapne hume padhaa aur reply kiyaa...hume aapko yahaa dekh ke bahut khusii huii....umid kartii hu aapka ye pyarr bharaa sath hamesaa banaa rahegaa.....aur aap hume aage bhii padhtii rahegiii....

aapna khayal rakhiyegaa
khush rahiyegaa..

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abb iss jindagii ko kyo mai jiitii huu
kyo har roz ek nayii maut martii huu....

tujhe kiyaa thaa wadaa bass isliye hastii hu
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bohot achchhe khayaal ko aap ne bayaaN kiya hai.. yeh Sher to mujhe pasand aaya.... yuuN hii likhati raheN... aap kii Roman sudhar rahii hai.. lekin abhii safar kaa aaghaaz hii haii Take care

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abb kya kahu.......aap ko time mill gaya hume padhne ka ye jaan ke khusii ke saath bahut dher saara aschary bhii hua..hame lagaa hamesaa kii tarah iss barr bhii aap kahege...kii mai bussy thaa...

aapko yahaa dekh ke mai bahut bahut khush hu...........aur aap ese hii meraa hoslaa badhaane ate rahege ..to aur bhi jyadaa khusii hogii.........

aapko pasand ayi to matlab maine kuch to sudhar kii hai....age bhii aur achaa likhne kii koshish karugii...agar aapkaa saath banaa rahe...

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mere sabhi dosto ko meraa pyaar bharaa namaskaar.........aaj mai apnii nayii rachnaa ke saath ayii huu asaa kartii hu ye aaplogo ke dil me thorii sii jagah banaalegii......hamesaa kii tarah aap mere kamiyoo ko zarur bataiyegaa..mughe aaplogoo ke reply kaa intzar rahegaa......


tumne jo choraa haath merii shaashe hii tham gayii
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dekhaa thaa jo sapnaa wo sapnaa bikhar gayaa
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bastii thii jin aakho me terii pyarii sii muurat
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aapke jazbaton ki main kadr kart hoon saloni..dekho ghazal ya kavita wahi hoti hai jo dil se nikle aur dil tak pahuche...mujhe aapke khayalaat behad ache lage hain...alfaaz to likhte likhte aa hi jaaenge ,..words ke adjustment me thoda sudhaar ki zarurat hai ..bas mehnat karo inshallah jald kaamyaab ho jaogi..khush raho..
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hello dear kaisi ho tum?
wah kya baat bhot acha likha ahi tumne dil ko chu ghya

bhot acha lagga padhkar meri daab kabul karna
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kaisii ho tum??
tumko apni post pe dekh kar hamesa ki tarah bahut khushi hui...ese hii sath dete rahna

apna khayal rakhna..
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Aadab saloni ji,
kesi hai aap?
kya baat hain,MASHA ALLAH,

APKI Nazm ka ek_ek ashaar bohot hi umda raha,
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apna khayal rakhiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ

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Hi Saloni,
Bahot accha likha hai aapne, har sher se dard chhallakta hai,

aapki dost
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aapko pahli bar apne post pe dekh ke bahut khushi huii...ese hii humara sath dete rahiyegaa..
aapki dost~
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saloni
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dard bhara kalaam pada dil mein dard ki lahar uthi ek...aur dil ka dard ankho tak pahunch gya

g8t work pe daad

sakhi with love
pyari sakhi,
kaisi hai aap?
bass hum me kaha wo bat hai ,wo to aapki hii nazar hai jo aapko pasand aya...
bass hume uhii padhte rahiyega..
apna khayal rakhiyegaa.
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aapke jazbaton ki main kadr kart hoon saloni..dekho ghazal ya kavita wahi hoti hai jo dil se nikle aur dil tak pahuche...mujhe aapke khayalaat behad ache lage hain...alfaaz to likhte likhte aa hi jaaenge ,..words ke adjustment me thoda sudhaar ki zarurat hai ..bas mehnat karo inshallah jald kaamyaab ho jaogi..khush raho..
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aapko mere khayal pasand aaye hume bahut acha lagaa...
bass aapka sath uhii rahe to yakinan aur achaa hum likhege..
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aapko pahli bar apne post pe dekh ke bahut khushi huii...ese hii humara sath dete rahiyegaa..
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Are Saloni,bahot dino baad yaha nazar aayi, Kaise ho tum? Haa aur ye pahli baar nahi hai,jab maine aapke post par comment diya haa,saath to hamesha deti rahungi...

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Are Saloni,bahot dino baad yaha nazar aayi, Kaise ho tum? Haa aur ye pahli baar nahi hai,jab maine aapke post par comment diya haa,saath to hamesha deti rahungi...

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Reshma,
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bahut bahut shukriya .....bass ese hii sath dete rahiyegaa...darasal mai thoda study me bussy hu..iss liye reply nahi kar paayi..

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