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naa salaam - 20th May 2003, 06:02 PM

na salaam yaad rakhna
na paigaam yaad rakhna
ho sake tho zindagi mein
hamara naam yaad rakhna

Kaun rakhta hai yaad naamo ko,
logh insaan ko bhool jaya karte hai.
tum samandur ke baat karti ho,
logh aankho mein doob jaya karte hai.
   
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hi - 20th May 2003, 11:29 PM

zakhmi ji ,
zaroor naam yaad rakhenge aapka...
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21st May 2003, 11:57 AM

huun..achha likha hai aapne..

Lekin aapke dono sheyr aapas mein hi ek conflict kar rahe hain..
Aur yehi aapke andar chalte conflict ko jata rahen hain..

achha likhta hain aap
likhte rahiye
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