Maazi ki Yaaden ( Qadeertoopchi ) -
19th July 2010, 09:25 PM
ahle bazm aadab o tasleemat .. eak azad nazm ap sub ki nazar umid hai ap log apni ara se nawazenge..
Wo nazar aaj bhi mujhe dhondti hogi !! wo hont aaj bhi khuch kahene ko betab honge !! Wo raaste aaj bhi mera intezaar karte honge !! Wo galiyan wo nukkad mujhe yaad karte honge !!
mai badnaseeb unhe chud aya !! maazi se har rishta tood aya !! ye kab howa , kyun howa , kaise howa !! meri hasraton ka qoon kaise howa !!
kaun hai iska gunhagaar , mai hon ya waqath , ya meri gurbath !!
aksar khud se yahi sawal kiya karta hon !! jawab ka muntazir hon to jiya karta hon !!
magar afsos ke ab tak koi jawab nahi mila !! in ankhon ko fir wo haseen qaub nahi mila !!
ab kissi se shikwa - shikayat kya karen !! haqeeqth yahi hai to haqeeqth se gila kya karen !!
chalo jo howa acha howa !! maazi ki qurbani sahi mustaqbil to acha howa !!
ab wo saari yaden wo manzar dil ke pitare me qaid hain !!
mai hon meri tanha-e- hai .. aur mustaqbil o maazi ke khuch dhundle dhundle se qaub bikhre pade hain .. shayad inhe simet ne me hi zindagi shaam ho jaye .. aur in bechain ankhon ko kabhi na jaagne wali neendh me mubtila kar den !!
ahle bazm aadab o tasleemat .. eak azad nazm ap sub ki nazar umid hai ap log apni ara se nawazenge..
Wo nazar aaj bhi mujhe dhondti hogi !! wo hont aaj bhi khuch kahene ko betab honge !! Wo raaste aaj bhi mera intezaar karte honge !! Wo galiyan wo nukkad mujhe yaad karte honge !!
mai badnaseeb unhe chud aya !! maazi se har rishta tood aya !! ye kab howa , kyun howa , kaise howa !! meri hasraton ka qoon kaise howa !!
kaun hai iska gunhagaar , mai hon ya waqath , ya meri gurbath !!
aksar khud se yahi sawal kiya karta hon !! jawab ka muntazir hon to jiya karta hon !!
magar afsos ke ab tak koi jawab nahi mila !! in ankhon ko fir wo haseen qaub nahi mila !!
ab kissi se shikwa - shikayat kya karen !! haqeeqth yahi hai to haqeeqth se gila kya karen !!
chalo jo howa acha howa !! maazi ki qurbani sahi mustaqbil to acha howa !!
ab wo saari yaden wo manzar dil ke pitare me qaid hain !!
mai hon meri tanha-e- hai .. aur mustaqbil o maazi ke khuch dhundle dhundle se qaub bikhre pade hain .. shayad inhe simet ne me hi zindagi shaam ho jaye .. aur in bechain ankhon ko kabhi na jaagne wali neendh me mubtila kar den !!
Qadeertoopchi
qadeer bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob dil se daad likhte rahen
duaon ke saath
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Mere bhai mujhe aisa mehsoos hua ke jazbaat kuch ulajh kar reh gaye.......aur aksar zindagi ki haqeeqat bayaa.N karne me aisa ho hi jata hai......Kahi aap sawalo ke jawab dhoondte nazar aaye kahi afsos karte kahi shikwa aur gila karne ki mohtajgee..kahi yeh kehna ke jo hua achcha hua ek itminan bhi zahir karna.
aksar khud se yahi sawal kiya karta hon !!
jawab ka muntazir hon to jiya karta hon !!
magar afsos ke ab tak koi jawab nahi mila !! in ankhon ko fir wo haseen qaub nahi mila !!
ab kissi se shikwa - shikayat kya karen !! haqeeqth yahi hai to haqeeqth se gila kya karen !!
chalo jo howa acha howa !! maazi ki qurbani sahi mustaqbil to acha howa !!
Jaisa maine kaha mere bhai Nazm ki koi khata nahi aapne to aam aadmi ke zehan ki kashmakash bayaan karne ki koshish ki hai bas.
Mere bhai mujhe aisa mehsoos hua ke jazbaat kuch ulajh kar reh gaye.......aur aksar zindagi ki haqeeqat bayaa.N karne me aisa ho hi jata hai......Kahi aap sawalo ke jawab dhoondte nazar aaye kahi afsos karte kahi shikwa aur gila karne ki mohtajgee..kahi yeh kehna ke jo hua achcha hua ek itminan bhi zahir karna.
aksar khud se yahi sawal kiya karta hon !! jawab ka muntazir hon to jiya karta hon !!
magar afsos ke ab tak koi jawab nahi mila !! in ankhon ko fir wo haseen qaub nahi mila !!
ab kissi se shikwa - shikayat kya karen !! haqeeqth yahi hai to haqeeqth se gila kya karen !!
chalo jo howa acha howa !! maazi ki qurbani sahi mustaqbil to acha howa !!
Jaisa maine kaha mere bhai Nazm ki koi khata nahi aapne to aam aadmi ke zehan ki kashmakash bayaan karne ki koshish ki hai bas.
janab a mann sajid sahab aadab o tasleemat ,,
nazm pe amuman tabsira nahi hota ,, magar apki sunch o fikar is had tak ameer hai ke app nazm se bhi nahi chuke .. apka behad shukriya ke apne mujhe rahe rausna-e-ata ki .. ab app tahere shansha-e-jazbath danishware hindustan aur mai thahera ahesas -e-kamtari me mubtila insaan.. ab janab agar ap kaanch ki kaani ko hira batayenge to maana hamara farz hai ..
eak do baten ap se jo kaheni thi wo ap tak pahonchane ki jasrath kar raha hon umid hai wazahat ko himaqath nahi samjhenge ...ab agar app ko kahin koi chiz samjh na aai ho to uski wazahat maangna apka haq hai .. aur turjumani karna mera farz.. magar apne sirf bandh ko darj karke .. apna raasta naap liya to hum jaise talib e ilm kya samjhenge .. ap kahen ke kahan galti sarzad howi hai mujhe to mai usko apki sarparasti me durast kar sakonga ....agar mai sahi hon to app ko bhi khuch faida hoga ..
eak baath aur kya app nazm goi ke qawaid pata hain .. kya ap koi dalil de sakte hain ke imle me koi galti sarzad howi ho ..chunke bina kissi dalil ke baath bemaine o bematlab hoti hai ..ab apne is nek kaam ka bida utha hi liya hai to ab please qadam piche na hatayen app .. aur hamari rahenumai karen ..to apki badi maherbani hogi ..
umid hai app zaroor wapas ayenge yahan ..meri koi baath naganwar guzri ho to mazrath ..ghar me bhabi bachon ko salam o dua ..
apka bhai
qadeertoopchi
Last edited by abdulqadeert; 20th July 2010 at 02:24 AM..
nazm pe amuman tabsira nahi hota ,, magar apki sunch o fikar is had tak ameer hai ke app nazm se bhi nahi chuke .. apka behad shukriya ke apne mujhe rahe rausna-e-ata ki .. ab app tahere shansha-e-jazbath danishware hindustan aur mai thahera ahesas -e-kamtari me mubtila insaan.. ab janab agar ap kaanch ki kaani ko hira batayenge to maana hamara farz hai ..
eak do baten ap se jo kaheni thi wo ap tak pahonchane ki jasrath kar raha hon umid hai wazahat ko himaqath nahi samjhenge ...ab agar app ko kahin koi chiz samjh na aai ho to uski wazahat maangna apka haq hai .. aur turjumani karna mera farz.. magar apne sirf bandh ko darj karke .. apna raasta naap liya to hum jaise talib e ilm kya samjhenge .. ap kahen ke kahan galti sarzad howi hai mujhe to mai usko apki sarparasti me durast kar sakonga ....agar mai sahi hon to app ko bhi khuch faida hoga ..
eak baath aur kya app nazm goi ke qawaid pata hain .. kya ap koi dalil de sakte hain ke imle me koi galti sarzad howi ho ..chunke bina kissi dalil ke baath bemaine o bematlab hoti hai ..ab apne is nek kaam ka bida utha hi liya hai to ab please qadam piche na hatayen app .. aur hamari rahenumai karen ..to apki badi maherbani hogi ..
umid hai app zaroor wapas ayenge yahan ..meri koi baath naganwar guzri ho to mazrath ..ghar me bhabi bachon ko salam o dua ..
apka bhai
qadeertoopchi
Hahahahah yaar kya kahu subah subah tumhara yeh jawab dekh kar maza aa gaya.........kya lafzo me lapet kar mara hai zalim ne hahahahah.
Yeh wala mujhe bohat achcha laga..........
ab app tahere shansha-e-jazbath danishware hindustan aur mai thahera ahesas -e-kamtari me mubtila insaan.. ab janab agar ap kaanch ki kaani ko hira batayenge to maana hamara farz hai ..
Itna achcha to maine bhi kabhi apne bare me nahi socha...........hahahahahhahhaha.
Aapka jawab padhkar bohat achcha laga agar aapko mere comments padhkar yeh laga hai ke mere ILM me kuch kami hai to yaqeenan aapne sahi hi socha hoga...............jaha tak adab ki baat hai Haqeeqat to yahi hai ke aapka martaba bohat oocha hai, ha waise beech beech me aap mujhe yuhi chane ke jhad par zaroor chadate rahiye.......shayer hone ka weham baki rahega.
Allah aapko duniya ki tamam khushiya ata kare.........AAMEEN
Qadeer Sahab.... Aadaab ! mujhe aapki Nazm ke ehsaas ...bahut khoob lage....aise hi umdaa kalaam ke saath aate rahen....tahe dil se daad...khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen....
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
Qadeer Sahab.... Aadaab ! mujhe aapki Nazm ke ehsaas ...bahut khoob lage....aise hi umdaa kalaam ke saath aate rahen....tahe dil se daad...khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen....
duaaon ke saath....
naresh sahab walekum aadab ,,
apki mahubbaton ka shukriya ,, dad ke liye mashkoor o mumnon hon ,, allah apko bhi hamesha khush rakhe ..
ahle bazm aadab o tasleemat .. eak azad nazm ap sub ki nazar umid hai ap log apni ara se nawazenge..
Wo nazar aaj bhi mujhe dhondti hogi !! wo hont aaj bhi khuch kahene ko betab honge !! Wo raaste aaj bhi mera intezaar karte honge !! Wo galiyan wo nukkad mujhe yaad karte honge !!
mai badnaseeb unhe chud aya !! maazi se har rishta tood aya !! ye kab howa , kyun howa , kaise howa !! meri hasraton ka qoon kaise howa !!
kaun hai iska gunhagaar , mai hon ya waqath , ya meri gurbath !!
aksar khud se yahi sawal kiya karta hon !! jawab ka muntazir hon to jiya karta hon !!
magar afsos ke ab tak koi jawab nahi mila !! in ankhon ko fir wo haseen qaub nahi mila !!
ab kissi se shikwa - shikayat kya karen !! haqeeqth yahi hai to haqeeqth se gila kya karen !!
chalo jo howa acha howa !! maazi ki qurbani sahi mustaqbil to acha howa !!
ab wo saari yaden wo manzar dil ke pitare me qaid hain !!
mai hon meri tanha-e- hai .. aur mustaqbil o maazi ke khuch dhundle dhundle se qaub bikhre pade hain .. shayad inhe simet ne me hi zindagi shaam ho jaye .. aur in bechain ankhon ko kabhi na jaagne wali neendh me mubtila kar den !!
Qadeertoopchi
qadeer saheb aadaaB...!
maiN kya kahuN ki kaisa likha hai aapne...aapka qalaam khud gawaahi de raha hai...i's nacheez ki daad qubuul kijiyega...
aur, aakhir ke ye chand misre...ek tees si chhod gaye, ek ajeeb sa khule dil ka dard hai inme...
mai hon meri tanha-e- hai .. aur mustaqbil o maazi ke khuch dhundle dhundle se qaub bikhre pade hain .. shayad inhe simet ne me hi zindagi shaam ho jaye .. aur in bechain ankhon ko kabhi na jaagne wali neendh me mubtila kar den !!
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
Aapke is nazm ne shuru se akher talak bandhe rakha ...... Behad achche aur dilfareb khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne....... Dil se daad kabool kijiye...........
Aapki aur sajid sahab ki guftagu se aur aapke jawaab se aisa laga hai ke aap kafi talim e aafta hai........ Ummid hai aap is bazm ko roshan karte rahenge.........
Aapke ilm ki roshni gar sab per padti rahe to yakinan yahaan hum jaise jo is ahel e chaman ke khar hai woh bhi gulo sa muskurana sikh jayenge....
qadeer saheb aadaaB...!
maiN kya kahuN ki kaisa likha hai aapne...aapka qalaam khud gawaahi de raha hai...i's nacheez ki daad qubuul kijiyega...
aur, aakhir ke ye chand misre...ek tees si chhod gaye, ek ajeeb sa khule dil ka dard hai inme...
mai hon meri tanha-e- hai .. aur mustaqbil o maazi ke khuch dhundle dhundle se qaub bikhre pade hain .. shayad inhe simet ne me hi zindagi shaam ho jaye .. aur in bechain ankhon ko kabhi na jaagne wali neendh me mubtila kar den !!
Vikram sahab aadab ..
Ap jaise khush mizaj insaan ki dad pakar dil khush ho gaya ,, umid hai aage bhi issi tarhan hausla afzai karte rahenge ... allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..
Aapke is nazm ne shuru se akher talak bandhe rakha ...... Behad achche aur dilfareb khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne....... Dil se daad kabool kijiye...........
Aapki aur sajid sahab ki guftagu se aur aapke jawaab se aisa laga hai ke aap kafi talim e aafta hai........ Ummid hai aap is bazm ko roshan karte rahenge.........
Aapke ilm ki roshni gar sab per padti rahe to yakinan yahaan hum jaise jo is ahel e chaman ke khar hai woh bhi gulo sa muskurana sikh jayenge....
Nazm ki pazirai ke liye mashkoo o mumnoo hon , Ye sub apki mahubbat baaqi hamari koi Bicaat nahi ,, Mai tashakkur ke liye alfazzon se Qasir hon .. Bus dua.en de sakta hon .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..
Sajid Ghayal sahab Aise hi mujhe aade haath lete rahete hain .. Yehi inki mahubbat hai .. Taluqqath zara be takkaluf hain ...Allah unhe khush rakhe ..