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Shahzaade ki jageer... - 3rd January 2011, 05:07 PM
Duaa jo maaNguN to Hatheli pe, teri Tasveer nazar aati hai,
Mitt gain Lakeeren, ki Gumraah meri Taqdeer nazar aati hai.

Hai Ghamzadaa Tu magar, Gham-shanas main bhi kam nahi,
Khate-Ulfat me Ashqon se bheegi, teri Tahreer nazar aati hai.

Ab Fikr ki zarurat hai, tagaaful chhod de Warna mar jaaunga,
Zindgi ki Surat tabaah yuN hui, goya Akheer nazar aati hai.

Hai Mumkin ki khafaa hoga wo mere laDkhada ke chalne se,
Raks hi Pairon ka dikhe aksar, kahaan Zanjeer nazar aati hai?

Kahtee hai shaayad sach hii ye duniyaa HusnwaloN ko lekar,
Qatl kar deN aankhon se, Surme me Shamsheer nazar aati hai.

Ho gaya khaak me shamil bhi to 'shaad' yahi sukoon bahot hai,
Ke Saari dhartii hii Aaj is Shahzaade kii Jaageer nazar aati hai.


shaad...

Gham Shanaas-- gham ko samajhne waala.
Tagaaful-- Neglect or Negligence.
Raks-- Dance.
Shamsheer-- Sword, Talwaar.

Shaad...
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Duaa jo maaNguN to Hatheli pe, teri Tasveer nazar aati hai,
Mitt gain Lakeeren, ki Gumraah meri Taqdeer nazar aati hai.

Hai Ghamzadaa Tu magar, Gham-shanas main bhi kam nahi,
Khate-Ulfat me Ashqon se bheegi, teri Tahreer nazar aati hai.

Ab Fikr ki zarurat hai, tagaaful chhod de Warna mar jaaunga,
Zindgi ki Surat tabaah yuN hui, goya Akheer nazar aati hai.

Hai Mumkin ki khafaa hoga wo mere laDkhada ke chalne se,
Raks hi Pairon ka dikhe aksar, kahaan Zanjeer nazar aati hai?

Kahtee hai shaayad sach hii ye duniyaa HusnwaloN ko lekar,
Qatl kar deN aankhon se, Surme me Shamsheer nazar aati hai.

Ho gaya khaak me shamil bhi to 'shaad' yahi sukoon bahot hai,
Ke Saari dhartii hii Aaj is Shahzaade kii Jaageer nazar aati hai.


shaad...

Gham Shanaas-- gham ko samajhne waala.
Tagaaful-- Neglect or Negligence.
Raks-- Dance.
Shamsheer-- Sword, Talwaar.

bahot khub Sameer sahab
puri ghazal lajawab hai ji
dil se daad hazir hai qabul kare

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Duaa jo maaNguN to Hatheli pe, teri Tasveer nazar aati hai,
Mitt gain Lakeeren, ki Gumraah meri Taqdeer nazar aati hai.

Hai Ghamzadaa Tu magar, Gham-shanas main bhi kam nahi,
Khate-Ulfat me Ashqon se bheegi, teri Tahreer nazar aati hai.



Bohat khoob sameer sahab....................................



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Duaa jo maaNguN to Hatheli pe, teri Tasveer nazar aati hai,
Mitt gain Lakeeren, ki Gumraah meri Taqdeer nazar aati hai.

Hai Ghamzadaa Tu magar, Gham-shanas main bhi kam nahi,
Khate-Ulfat me Ashqon se bheegi, teri Tahreer nazar aati hai.

Ab Fikr ki zarurat hai, tagaaful chhod de Warna mar jaaunga,
Zindgi ki Surat tabaah yuN hui, goya Akheer nazar aati hai.

Hai Mumkin ki khafaa hoga wo mere laDkhada ke chalne se,
Raks hi Pairon ka dikhe aksar, kahaan Zanjeer nazar aati hai?

Kahtee hai shaayad sach hii ye duniyaa HusnwaloN ko lekar,
Qatl kar deN aankhon se, Surme me Shamsheer nazar aati hai.

Ho gaya khaak me shamil bhi to 'shaad' yahi sukoon bahot hai,
Ke Saari dhartii hii Aaj is Shahzaade kii Jaageer nazar aati hai.


shaad...

Gham Shanaas-- gham ko samajhne waala.
Tagaaful-- Neglect or Negligence.
Raks-- Dance.
Shamsheer-- Sword, Talwaar.
waah shaad bhai ....soz e dil ko nazaakat se pesh karna to waaqayee aap ki jaageer hai ..... har sher maano ek teer ke jaisa ho jo seedhaa padhne waale ke dil ko nishaanaa banaaye baitha ho ... to janaab hum kaise bach paate !! zabardast kalaam rahaa janaab aapkaa .... dheron daad aur duaon ke saath .... zarraa
   
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Hai Mumkin ki khafaa hoga wo mere laDkhada ke chalne se,
Raks hi Pairon ka dikhe aksar, kahaan Zanjeer nazar aati hai?

wah shaad saheb, kya qalaam pesh kiya hai bazm meiN aapne...
padh kar rooh ko taskeen hui aur dil kai ehsaasoN se sarabor ho gaya...
aapka saara qalaam hi behad umda hai lekin jo sher maine uppar likha hai uski tareef ke liye alfaaz kam pad rahe haiN...bahut gehra paith kar ye soch mili hogi...meri mubaraqbaad qubuul kareN is sher ke liye...
daad dil se haazir hai use bhi qubuul kijiyega...

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Duaa jo maaNguN to Hatheli pe, teri Tasveer nazar aati hai,
Mitt gain Lakeeren, ki Gumraah meri Taqdeer nazar aati hai.

Hai Ghamzadaa Tu magar, Gham-shanas main bhi kam nahi,
Khate-Ulfat me Ashqon se bheegi, teri Tahreer nazar aati hai.

Ab Fikr ki zarurat hai, tagaaful chhod de Warna mar jaaunga,
Zindgi ki Surat tabaah yuN hui, goya Akheer nazar aati hai.

Hai Mumkin ki khafaa hoga wo mere laDkhada ke chalne se,
Raks hi Pairon ka dikhe aksar, kahaan Zanjeer nazar aati hai?

Kahtee hai shaayad sach hii ye duniyaa HusnwaloN ko lekar,
Qatl kar deN aankhon se, Surme me Shamsheer nazar aati hai.

Ho gaya khaak me shamil bhi to 'shaad' yahi sukoon bahot hai,
Ke Saari dhartii hii Aaj is Shahzaade kii Jaageer nazar aati hai.


shaad...

Gham Shanaas-- gham ko samajhne waala.
Tagaaful-- Neglect or Negligence.
Raks-- Dance.
Shamsheer-- Sword, Talwaar.
bahut khoob............................................. ......

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Hai Mumkin ki khafaa hoga wo mere laDkhada ke chalne se,
Raks hi Pairon ka dikhe aksar, kahaan Zanjeer nazar aati hai?

Kahtee hai shaayad sach hii ye duniyaa HusnwaloN ko lekar,
Qatl kar deN aankhon se, Surme me Shamsheer nazar aati hai.

Ho gaya khaak me shamil bhi to 'shaad' yahi sukoon bahot hai,
Ke Saari dhartii hii Aaj is Shahzaade kii Jaageer nazar aati hai.

Kyaa baat hai miyaaN .......... bahut khoob gahzal kahi hai......
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Hai Mumkin ki khafaa hoga wo mere laDkhada ke chalne se,
Raks hi Pairon ka dikhe aksar, kahaan Zanjeer nazar aati hai?

Kahtee hai shaayad sach hii ye duniyaa HusnwaloN ko lekar,
Qatl kar deN aankhon se, Surme me Shamsheer nazar aati hai.

Ho gaya khaak me shamil bhi to 'shaad' yahi sukoon bahot hai,
Ke Saari dhartii hii Aaj is Shahzaade kii Jaageer nazar aati hai.

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Shaad Ji .. Aadaab !

Bahut khoobsurat kalaam likha hai aapne ... Ghazal ke sabhi ashaar apni asardaar bayaani aur adaayegi ki kahaani khud hi keh rahe hai .. matlaa meri pehli pasand raha ... in bahut khoob khayaaloN ko pesh karne ke liye ... aapko tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... !

aise hi umdaa khayaaloN ke saath aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
janaab Naresh bhaai aadaab..Har baar ki tarah aapne is baar bhi mera saath yoon nibhaya ki murda jism me mano rooh aa gai ho..Aapne ehsason ko padha uski gahraai me utre aur unhe pasadn kiya meri khush naseebi hai bhai... Guzaarish hai ki yoon hi saath dete rahen.. duaa me yaad rakhen.. khush rahen..

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padh kar rooh ko taskeen hui aur dil kai ehsaasoN se sarabor ho gaya...
aapka saara qalaam hi behad umda hai lekin jo sher maine uppar likha hai uski tareef ke liye alfaaz kam pad rahe haiN...bahut gehra paith kar ye soch mili hogi...meri mubaraqbaad qubuul kareN is sher ke liye...
daad dil se haazir hai use bhi qubuul kijiyega...

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janab Vikram bhai aadaab...bhaai aaapki khuloos ka tahe dil se istaqbaal karta hoon...bhai aap logon ka sath aur daad hi to hai jo likhne ko majboor karti rahti hai... aate rahen bhai hausla afzaai ka ek baar fir se shukriya..

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Kahtee hai shaayad sach hii ye duniyaa HusnwaloN ko lekar,
Qatl kar deN aankhon se, Surme me Shamsheer nazar aati hai.

Ho gaya khaak me shamil bhi to 'shaad' yahi sukoon bahot hai,
Ke Saari dhartii hii Aaj is Shahzaade kii Jaageer nazar aati hai.

Kyaa baat hai miyaaN .......... bahut khoob gahzal kahi hai......

Mere bhai behad khsuhi hui jo aapko yahaan maujod paayaa... mere dil ki duaaen hai bhai aaap hamesha khush rahen aabaad rahen...

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Hai Mumkin ki khafaa hoga wo mere laDkhada ke chalne se,
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Hai Mumkin ki khafaa hoga wo mere laDkhada ke chalne se,
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Kahtee hai shaayad sach hii ye duniyaa HusnwaloN ko lekar,
Qatl kar deN aankhon se, Surme me Shamsheer nazar aati hai.

Ho gaya khaak me shamil bhi to 'shaad' yahi sukoon bahot hai,
Ke Saari dhartii hii Aaj is Shahzaade kii Jaageer nazar aati hai.

Wah wah bohat khoob mere bhai.......khush kar diya aapne.

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Duaa jo maaNguN to Hatheli pe, teri Tasveer nazar aati hai,
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Hai Ghamzadaa Tu magar, Gham-shanas main bhi kam nahi,
Khate-Ulfat me Ashqon se bheegi, teri Tahreer nazar aati hai.

Ab Fikr ki zarurat hai, tagaaful chhod de Warna mar jaaunga,
Zindgi ki Surat tabaah yuN hui, goya Akheer nazar aati hai.

Hai Mumkin ki khafaa hoga wo mere laDkhada ke chalne se,
Raks hi Pairon ka dikhe aksar, kahaan Zanjeer nazar aati hai?

Kahtee hai shaayad sach hii ye duniyaa HusnwaloN ko lekar,
Qatl kar deN aankhon se, Surme me Shamsheer nazar aati hai.

Ho gaya khaak me shamil bhi to 'shaad' yahi sukoon bahot hai,
Ke Saari dhartii hii Aaj is Shahzaade kii Jaageer nazar aati hai.


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Ye gazal maine bahut pehle padhi thi....!! Kisi wazah se reply nhi kar paai .....!!! Chalo der aaye durast aaye.... Aapki sabhi gazal me se ye meri pasandida gazal rahi.....!!! Bahut hi khubsurat....!! Har ek sher apne aap me khubsurat hai....!!! Dher saari duaain aur daad hazir hai...!!! Khush rahein.......!!!
Pyaari kavita jee sabse pahle hamara salaam arz ho aapko, jo aapne itni khubsurti se i bazm me dastak dee aur ise apne alfaazon se nawaaz diyaa.. ye mere liye behad khushi ki baat hai jo aapne ise padha aur reply der se kiya. to koi gal nahi jee hame reason pata hai, wo kasoor aapka nahi mausam hi itna sard hua hai to koi kya kare.. khair kisi shayar ke liye yahi bahot badii baat hai ki koi use padhta hai uske jazbaat samjhta hai.. behad mashkoor hoon aapka... aati rahiyega.. yoonhi saath detii rahiyegaa..
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