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एक अंजान सफ़र पर निकला - 16th August 2016, 07:23 PM

गज़ल
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एक अंजान सफ़र पर निकला ।
मैं तेरी याद पहन कर निकला ।।

चोट खा खा के दुआएँ लौटीं ।
जिसको पूजा वही पत्थर निकला ।।

पी गया ख़ून पसीना मेरा ।
कितना कमज़र्फ समन्दर निकला ।।

जब भी निकला वो अयादत को मेरी ।
ले के अल्फ़ाज़ के ख़ंजर निकला ।।

मैं तेरी दीद की हसरत ओढ़े ।
जिस्म की क़ैद से बाहर निकला ।।

मेरी मय्यत को लगाया कांधा ।
ग़ैर था आप से बेहतर निकला ।।

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17th August 2016, 01:38 PM

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गज़ल
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एक अंजान सफ़र पर निकला ।
मैं तेरी याद पहन कर निकला ।।

चोट खा खा के दुआएँ लौटीं ।
जिसको पूजा वही पत्थर निकला ।।

पी गया ख़ून पसीना मेरा ।
कितना कमज़र्फ समन्दर निकला ।।

जब भी निकला वो अयादत को मेरी ।
ले के अल्फ़ाज़ के ख़ंजर निकला ।।

मैं तेरी दीद की हसरत ओढ़े ।
जिस्म की क़ैद से बाहर निकला ।।

मेरी मय्यत को लगाया कांधा ।
ग़ैर था आप से बेहतर निकला ।।

-- हातिम जावेद
Bahut khoob...........................



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14th September 2016, 03:44 PM

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गज़ल
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एक अंजान सफ़र पर निकला ।
मैं तेरी याद पहन कर निकला ।।

चोट खा खा के दुआएँ लौटीं ।
जिसको पूजा वही पत्थर निकला ।।

पी गया ख़ून पसीना मेरा ।
कितना कमज़र्फ समन्दर निकला ।।

जब भी निकला वो अयादत को मेरी ।
ले के अल्फ़ाज़ के ख़ंजर निकला ।।

मैं तेरी दीद की हसरत ओढ़े ।
जिस्म की क़ैद से बाहर निकला ।।

मेरी मय्यत को लगाया कांधा ।
ग़ैर था आप से बेहतर निकला ।।

-- हातिम जावेद


Javed ji...bahut khoobsurat ehsaas.

मेरी मय्यत को लगाया कांधा ।
ग़ैर था आप से बेहतर निकला ।।


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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
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