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Mere Dastavezo.n Ki Duniya.n - 21st January 2005, 03:55 PM

Doston,

Mere Bhi paas kuchh Dastavez bahoot hi surakshit rakhe hain..Jinaki ek Duniya hai...Kitni Hi jindagiya.N inmen Quid Saans
Le rahi hain....Inhe Kholne ki ek Chhoti si koshis ki hai
Maine....Dekhiye Kaisee ban padi hai.....


MERE DASTAVEZO.N KI DUNIYA.N
------------------------------------------

Baraso.N Se Band Pade
Mere DASTAVEZO.N Ki Duniya
Badi Hi Dilkash Hai..
Ek Umra Ka Anubhav Hai
Iname.N...

Ek Arth-Heen Peeda
Yahna.N Panno.N Main Sans Leti Hai..
Kitani Hi Smritiyo.N Ke
Beej Boye Hai.N Maine
Inake Aangan MAin...

Anubhutio.N Ki Mithas Hai
Auir..
Jeevan Ki Dahakati Huee
Khushiyon Ke.. Gamo.N Ke..
Kitane Hi Kashide
Likhe Hain Maine Iname.N...

Meri Apani Jameen Hai Yaha.N
Ek Bhasha...
Jahan..
Prem, Swapn Auir Prarthna
Ka Jiddipan Hai..
Jo Abhi Abhi Itihaas
Hua Sa Lagata Hai...

Kitani Hi Udaas Shame.N
Guzari Hai Maine
Un Khamosh Timtimate Hue
Sitaro.N Ke Saath...

Meri Vedana Ke Saghan-Van Main
Kitani Paktiya.N....
Jo Sapaat Si Hain
Par Najar NAhin Aati....

Duniya Ko Badal Daalane ki
Dhardaar Abhivyaktiya.N Bhi Hain..
Auir..
Kitane Hi Cheharo.N Ki
Sharafat Main Chhipi Huee
Kutilata Ke Bayaan Bhi....

Mere Antah-karan ki Hook Se
Nikale Hue Woh Tezaabi Shabd
Jiname.N...
Cheekh, Karuna, Bebashi
Auir...
Chetana Ke Viraat Saundarya Se
Dur Le Jaata Andhkaar Hai...

Kitane Hi Panne HaiN Yahan..
Jo Khamosh Rahkar Bhi
Khamosh Nahin HAin...

Haan...
Vyatha Hai..
Mere En DASTAVEZO.N Main
Ek A-Naayak Ki..
Jise...
Apane Hi Ghar Ki Talash Hai...

............................................Vij..
21st Jan 05,1:30 AM..

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Re: Mere Dastavezo.n Ki Duniya.n - 21st January 2005, 11:21 PM

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Doston,

Mere Bhi paas kuchh Dastavez bahoot hi surakshit rakhe hain..Jinaki ek Duniya hai...Kitni Hi jindagiya.N inmen Quid Saans
Le rahi hain....Inhe Kholne ki ek Chhoti si koshis ki hai
Maine....Dekhiye Kaisee ban padi hai.....


MERE DASTAVEZO.N KI DUNIYA.N
------------------------------------------

Baraso.N Se Band Pade
Mere DASTAVEZO.N Ki Duniya
Badi Hi Dilkash Hai..
Ek Umra Ka Anubhav Hai
Iname.N...

Ek Arth-Heen Peeda
Yahna.N Panno.N Main Sans Leti Hai..
Kitani Hi Smritiyo.N Ke
Beej Boye Hai.N Maine
Inake Aangan MAin...

Anubhutio.N Ki Mithas Hai
Auir..
Jeevan Ki Dahakati Huee
Khushiyon Ke.. Gamo.N Ke..
Kitane Hi Kashide
Likhe Hain Maine Iname.N...

Meri Apani Jameen Hai Yaha.N
Ek Bhasha...
Jahan..
Prem, Swapn Auir Prarthna
Ka Jiddipan Hai..
Jo Abhi Abhi Itihaas
Hua Sa Lagata Hai...

Kitani Hi Udaas Shame.N
Guzari Hai Maine
Un Khamosh Timtimate Hue
Sitaro.N Ke Saath...

Meri Vedana Ke Saghan-Van Main
Kitani Paktiya.N....
Jo Sapaat Si Hain
Par Najar NAhin Aati....

Duniya Ko Badal Daalane ki
Dhardaar Abhivyaktiya.N Bhi Hain..
Auir..
Kitane Hi Cheharo.N Ki
Sharafat Main Chhipi Huee
Kutilata Ke Bayaan Bhi....

Mere Antah-karan ki Hook Se
Nikale Hue Woh Tezaabi Shabd
Jiname.N...
Cheekh, Karuna, Bebashi
Auir...
Chetana Ke Viraat Saundarya Se
Dur Le Jaata Andhkaar Hai...

Kitane Hi Panne HaiN Yahan..
Jo Khamosh Rahkar Bhi
Khamosh Nahin HAin...

Haan...
Vyatha Hai..
Mere En DASTAVEZO.N Main
Ek A-Naayak Ki..
Jise...
Apane Hi Ghar Ki Talash Hai...

............................................Vij..
21st Jan 05,1:30 AM..

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mere vij,

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Vyatha Hai..
Mere En DASTAVEZO.N Main
Ek A-Naayak Ki..
Jise...
Apane Hi Ghar Ki Talash Hai...


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Bahut khoob - 22nd January 2005, 03:53 PM

Kitane Hi Panne HaiN Yahan..
Jo Khamosh Rahkar Bhi
Khamosh Nahin HAin...

Vij............tumhaari rachna ke maadhyaaM se kuchh or jaana tumhe...

Sachmuch...bahut hi dil ke kareeb,

Chhu lene waali rachna hai ye.

YooNhi likhte raho.

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Re: Bahut khoob - 22nd January 2005, 04:51 PM

Sukriya Chand...

urs..
vij

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Kitane Hi Panne HaiN Yahan..
Jo Khamosh Rahkar Bhi
Khamosh Nahin HAin...

Vij............tumhaari rachna ke maadhyaaM se kuchh or jaana tumhe...

Sachmuch...bahut hi dil ke kareeb,

Chhu lene waali rachna hai ye.

YooNhi likhte raho.

Chaand


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23rd January 2005, 08:41 AM

Hello Vij...

Mere Antah-karan ki Hook Se
Nikale Hue Woh Tezaabi Shabd
Jiname.N...
Cheekh, Karuna, Bebashi
Auir...
Chetana Ke Viraat Saundarya Se
Dur Le Jaata Andhkaar Hai...

Kitane Hi Panne HaiN Yahan..
Jo Khamosh Rahkar Bhi
Khamosh Nahin HAin...

Haan...
Vyatha Hai..
Mere En DASTAVEZO.N Main
Ek A-Naayak Ki..
Jise...
Apane Hi Ghar Ki Talash Hai...


in shabdon mein aapka ek ek shabd jeevant sa nazar aata hai...kuch kar guzarne ka jazbaa aur phir kuch na kar paane kee bebasi...'ek a-naayak!' ki...bahut umda likhte hain aap...koyi jawaab nahin...

paras


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25th January 2005, 06:14 PM

Baraso.N Se Band Pade
Mere DASTAVEZO.N Ki Duniya
Badi Hi Dilkash Hai..
Ek Umra Ka Anubhav Hai
Iname.N...

Ek Arth-Heen Peeda
Yahna.N Panno.N Main Sans Leti Hai..
Kitani Hi Smritiyo.N Ke
Beej Boye Hai.N Maine
Inake Aangan MAin...

Anubhutio.N Ki Mithas Hai
Auir..
Jeevan Ki Dahakati Huee
Khushiyon Ke.. Gamo.N Ke..
Kitane Hi Kashide
Likhe Hain Maine Iname.N...

Meri Apani Jameen Hai Yaha.N
Ek Bhasha...
Jahan..
Prem, Swapn Auir Prarthna
Ka Jiddipan Hai..
Jo Abhi Abhi Itihaas
Hua Sa Lagata Hai...

Kitani Hi Udaas Shame.N
Guzari Hai Maine
Un Khamosh Timtimate Hue
Sitaro.N Ke Saath...

Meri Vedana Ke Saghan-Van Main
Kitani Paktiya.N....
Jo Sapaat Si Hain
Par Najar NAhin Aati....

Duniya Ko Badal Daalane ki
Dhardaar Abhivyaktiya.N Bhi Hain..
Auir..
Kitane Hi Cheharo.N Ki
Sharafat Main Chhipi Huee
Kutilata Ke Bayaan Bhi....

Mere Antah-karan ki Hook Se
Nikale Hue Woh Tezaabi Shabd
Jiname.N...
Cheekh, Karuna, Bebashi
Auir...
Chetana Ke Viraat Saundarya Se
Dur Le Jaata Andhkaar Hai...

Kitane Hi Panne HaiN Yahan..
Jo Khamosh Rahkar Bhi
Khamosh Nahin HAin...

Haan...
Vyatha Hai..
Mere En DASTAVEZO.N Main
Ek A-Naayak Ki..
Jise...
Apane Hi Ghar Ki Talash Hai...


Vijen bhaii!

Bahut khoob! Bahut hi saadhi se pesh ki hai aapne apne dastavezon ki duniya... really nice....

k vyatah hai in dastavezon me us nayak ki, jise apne ghar ki talash hai... bhai yeh lines speciallly mujhe bahut acchi lagi...

Humesha ki tarah... bahut hi accha likha hai aapne.. meri tareef kubool karna... aise hi likhte rahiyega TC


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27th January 2005, 05:50 PM

Sukriya...Paras Ji...
aapne mujhe padha..
bahoot bahoot sukriya..
vij

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Hello Vij...

Mere Antah-karan ki Hook Se
Nikale Hue Woh Tezaabi Shabd
Jiname.N...
Cheekh, Karuna, Bebashi
Auir...
Chetana Ke Viraat Saundarya Se
Dur Le Jaata Andhkaar Hai...

Kitane Hi Panne HaiN Yahan..
Jo Khamosh Rahkar Bhi
Khamosh Nahin HAin...

Haan...
Vyatha Hai..
Mere En DASTAVEZO.N Main
Ek A-Naayak Ki..
Jise...
Apane Hi Ghar Ki Talash Hai...


in shabdon mein aapka ek ek shabd jeevant sa nazar aata hai...kuch kar guzarne ka jazbaa aur phir kuch na kar paane kee bebasi...'ek a-naayak!' ki...bahut umda likhte hain aap...koyi jawaab nahin...

paras


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Dhoop Mai.N Baitha Hai Khud Pedh Lagaane Wala

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27th January 2005, 05:53 PM

Sukriya Pulkit Bhai...
aapki pratikriya ka intezaar raha karta hai..agli post karne
ki himmat milati hai..
sukriya dost..

tc
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Quote:
Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Baraso.N Se Band Pade
Mere DASTAVEZO.N Ki Duniya
Badi Hi Dilkash Hai..
Ek Umra Ka Anubhav Hai
Iname.N...

Ek Arth-Heen Peeda
Yahna.N Panno.N Main Sans Leti Hai..
Kitani Hi Smritiyo.N Ke
Beej Boye Hai.N Maine
Inake Aangan MAin...

Anubhutio.N Ki Mithas Hai
Auir..
Jeevan Ki Dahakati Huee
Khushiyon Ke.. Gamo.N Ke..
Kitane Hi Kashide
Likhe Hain Maine Iname.N...

Meri Apani Jameen Hai Yaha.N
Ek Bhasha...
Jahan..
Prem, Swapn Auir Prarthna
Ka Jiddipan Hai..
Jo Abhi Abhi Itihaas
Hua Sa Lagata Hai...

Kitani Hi Udaas Shame.N
Guzari Hai Maine
Un Khamosh Timtimate Hue
Sitaro.N Ke Saath...

Meri Vedana Ke Saghan-Van Main
Kitani Paktiya.N....
Jo Sapaat Si Hain
Par Najar NAhin Aati....

Duniya Ko Badal Daalane ki
Dhardaar Abhivyaktiya.N Bhi Hain..
Auir..
Kitane Hi Cheharo.N Ki
Sharafat Main Chhipi Huee
Kutilata Ke Bayaan Bhi....

Mere Antah-karan ki Hook Se
Nikale Hue Woh Tezaabi Shabd
Jiname.N...
Cheekh, Karuna, Bebashi
Auir...
Chetana Ke Viraat Saundarya Se
Dur Le Jaata Andhkaar Hai...

Kitane Hi Panne HaiN Yahan..
Jo Khamosh Rahkar Bhi
Khamosh Nahin HAin...

Haan...
Vyatha Hai..
Mere En DASTAVEZO.N Main
Ek A-Naayak Ki..
Jise...
Apane Hi Ghar Ki Talash Hai...


Vijen bhaii!

Bahut khoob! Bahut hi saadhi se pesh ki hai aapne apne dastavezon ki duniya... really nice....

k vyatah hai in dastavezon me us nayak ki, jise apne ghar ki talash hai... bhai yeh lines speciallly mujhe bahut acchi lagi...

Humesha ki tarah... bahut hi accha likha hai aapne.. meri tareef kubool karna... aise hi likhte rahiyega TC


Aaj Ke Daur Mai.N Ummede.N Wafa Kisase Kare.N
Dhoop Mai.N Baitha Hai Khud Pedh Lagaane Wala

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