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Sunana Chahta Hun Apna Dil Ka Haal!!! - 25th September 2005, 10:04 PM

hello friends...i've come up with some thin in hindi once again..and as usual rohin has helped me and made some corrections....hope u all will like it

Sunnana chahta hoon
Apna haal-e-dil bayan karna chhahta hun
Lekin sunne ko koi bhi nahi

Jaana chahta hoonn
Tumse door ..tumhare khayalon se door
Lekin aise koi jagah hi nahi

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

Marna chahta hun
Hazar baar marke bhi ek baar jeena chahta hun
Tere pyar k ehsaas ko paana chahta hun

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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
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Re: Sunana Chahta Hun Apna Dil Ka Haal!!! - 25th September 2005, 10:08 PM

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Jaana chahta hoonn
Tumse door ..tumhare khayalon se door
Lekin aise koi jagah hi nahi

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Hum jayeN kahaN ki unse bach kar...
chahe hai wo har dil maiN vivad ban ke...
kar lete hai aankhen band, hosh gawaN
par chale aate ho tum yaad ban kar ...


Chote Bhaiya ....

bohat khoob likhi hai tumne ye ... halanki sudhaar abhi aur chaiye .. par ye acchi thi bohat ... yuN hi likhte raho.. tumhare ehsaas padh kar ye hi khayal aaye dil maiN ...

tumhara bhai

kunal


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25th September 2005, 10:19 PM

nice 1 karthik bhai,kaafi ahche lage khayalat aapke.waise kunal bhaiya ki baat sahi hai aur bhi sudhar ki gunzaish hai.par khayalat bahut hi ahche lage aapke.bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap hindi me aur kuch dino baad aapse hum log correction karwayenge .bas yunhi likhte rahiye.


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25th September 2005, 10:20 PM

Nice flow in this poem...Karthik Bro ! I would like to see your
Hindi creations more frequently...!

I like them

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26th September 2005, 07:40 PM

hey kunal bhai...grt to c ur reply...
felt nice tht u liked it...
ur suggestions are always welcome bhaiyaaa..
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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26th September 2005, 07:48 PM

hey luckyyy....thanks yaar for readin n replyinn
haan ...ur suggestions r always welcome...
thanks
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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26th September 2005, 08:13 PM

dear karthik,
all i need 2 say is tht u have the ability to write in hindi. u have beautifully expressed ur thoughts. well nice flow while reading it but still more n more to learn buddy. neways loved reading ur thoughts n need to appologise to for not able to help u yesterday as was not feeling well. neways. keep going n keep penning down ur thoughts. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
jas



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Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
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Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

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Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
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26th September 2005, 09:33 PM

hey danny bhai...thanks for the compliments...
i'll keep postin...n i'll try to post another one in hindi today..
hope u'll like tht one also
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
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26th September 2005, 09:48 PM

hey jas...
grt to c ur replyy...
well...u said u were nt well na..how r u doin now????
hope ur fine
thanks for the reply re...u made my day...as often u say
ya i'll definitely improve...y will i not...when ur with me ..guidin me...
take care ok


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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