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akhri chahat - 25th January 2007, 07:33 PM

mera lawo pa abb name na tera hoga
mera iss afsana ma dard bhi bass mera hoga
nano ma asuon ka samundar bhi chupa laga
hoto ka hasi ka tarana ma chupa dard bass mera hoga
teri barukhi ko pi ka jii laga
parr dil sa duan ma nikla pahla name bass tera hogi........






"tera ishq ma khud ko to na mita shaka
parr tera diyan sara gamm ko chipa gaya
ajnabi nahi thi pahla yann duniya
tera ishq ma isko bhi ajnabi bana gaya"



..........KASH WO HUM SA NA MILA HOTA..........

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25th January 2007, 07:39 PM

ek baar fir ehsash ahche hain saloni ji, par gramatical mistakes hain, bura mat maaniyega, par hindi ki typing me v thodi improvement chaahiye...! baki bas yunhi ehsasoN ko kalam me daal ke kaagaz pe utaarte rahiye, aur dekhiye ki waqt ke saath kaisa nikhaar aata hai...!



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25th January 2007, 07:53 PM

namskaar!!

aapko paRh ke achha laga , aise hi likhte raheN aur ghayal ji ki baatoN ko dhyaan me rakhiyega,

apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

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25th January 2007, 07:55 PM

shukriya ghayal jii......ma apna kamiyo ko durr karna ki puri koshish karugi aur agar apka sath raha to yakinan eak achi sii shayri likhugi........asa hi hamara sath rahiyaga....aur hamara galti ko batata rahiyaga......kyoki galti sa hi to insan sikhta ha.....iss ma bura manna wali koi bat nahi.........apka bahut bahut shukriya

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25th January 2007, 08:08 PM

shukriya dhaval ji app na humari shayri padhi......aur hum puri koshish karega ki aap ko aga aur achi shayri pash kare......bass app asa hi hamara sath digiyaga........apka bahut bahut shukriya.


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