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Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon.. - 18th August 2010, 06:10 PM
Aaj Ek Insaan Dekha.. Barish Me Bheegta Huwa.. APNE Bacho Ko Sambhalta Huwa.... Kabhi Yaha To Kabhi Waha Dauta Huwa... Usi Pe Kuch Likh raha Hoon... Ek Gareeb Insaan Ki Bhavnaayein Shayad Main Nahi Samajh Sakta Phir bhi.. Ek Koshish Ki..


Jindgi Ko Sitam Main Kehta Hoon..
Majbooriyon Me Bhi Khush Rehta Hoon..
Chand Boondon Se Pet Bhar Leta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Thandi Me Thithoor Leta Hoon..
Basaaat Me Bheeg Leta Hoon..
Garmi Paav Jalaati Hai ..
Pathron Pe Main So Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon.

Kabhi Sabji To Kabhi Kuch Naa Mile..
Namak Roti Pe Main Jee Leta Hoon.
Zakhm Chahe Jaisa Bhi Ho..
Thodi Haldi Main Lagaa Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Ek Kameez Ek Patloon..
Roz Bina Saboon Me Dhota Hoon
Badi Dukaano Ki Ronak Dekh...
Aksar Khush Me Ho Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Gam Bhi Bohat Hai.. Dard Bhi Hai..
Dil Me Sab Dabaa Leta Hoon..
Kabhi Akele To Kabhi Sabke Samne..
Akhon Se Angocha Bhigo Leta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Khush Hoon Main Jaisa Bhi Hoon Me..
Kisise Shikva Nahi Karta Hoon..
Main Jaisa Hoon Waise Koi Na Ho..
Roz Yahi Duwa Karta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon...
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18th August 2010, 06:25 PM
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Aaj Ek Insaan Dekha.. Barish Me Bheegta Huwa.. APNE Bacho Ko Sambhalta Huwa.... Kabhi Yaha To Kabhi Waha Dauta Huwa... Usi Pe Kuch Likh raha Hoon... Ek Gareeb Insaan Ki Bhavnaayein Shayad Main Nahi Samajh Sakta Phir bhi.. Ek Koshish Ki..


Jindgi Ko Sitam Main Kehta Hoon..
Majbooriyon Me Bhi Khush Rehta Hoon..
Chand Boondon Se Pet Bhar Leta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Thandi Me Thithoor Leta Hoon..
Basaaat Me Bheeg Leta Hoon..
Garmi Paav Jalaati Hai ..
Pathron Pe Main So Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon.

Kabhi Sabji To Kabhi Kuch Naa Mile..
Namak Roti Pe Main Jee Leta Hoon.
Zakhm Chahe Jaisa Bhi Ho..
Thodi Haldi Main Lagaa Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Ek Kameez Ek Patloon..
Roz Bina Saboon Me Dhota Hoon
Badi Dukaano Ki Ronak Dekh...
Aksar Khush Me Ho Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Gam Bhi Bohat Hai.. Dard Bhi Hai..
Dil Me Sab Dabaa Leta Hoon..
Kabhi Akele To Kabhi Sabke Samne..
Akhon Se Angocha Bhigo Leta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Khush Hoon Main Jaisa Bhi Hoon Me..
Kisise Shikva Nahi Karta Hoon..
Main Jaisa Hoon Waise Koi Na Ho..
Roz Yahi Duwa Karta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon...
Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon...

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18th August 2010, 07:25 PM
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Kabhi Sabji To Kabhi Kuch Naa Mile..
Namak Roti Pe Main Jee Leta Hoon.
Zakhm Chahe Jaisa Bhi Ho..
Thodi Haldi Main Lagaa Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Ek Kameez Ek Patloon..
Roz Bina Saboon Me Dhota Hoon
Badi Dukaano Ki Ronak Dekh...
Aksar Khush Me Ho Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..
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ye jo do aashaar hai .. apne aap main ek kamaal hai ... bohat diloN ke kareeb aa gaye ho aap apne in aashaaroN ke sath .. ye ehsaas aise hi nahi aate .. uspar se jo baat main highlight ki .. wo aapne to yuN hi likh dee .. par meri aaNkhoN maiN to tasweer bana gayi .. khuda apko khush rakhe ..

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18th August 2010, 08:31 PM
Ek Kameez Ek Patloon..
Roz Bina Saboon Me Dhota Hoon
Badi Dukaano Ki Ronak Dekh...
Aksar Khush Me Ho Leta Hoon...

Very Impressive ... Very touching ... ! Nice Creation ... !



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Aaj Ek Insaan Dekha.. Barish Me Bheegta Huwa.. APNE Bacho Ko Sambhalta Huwa.... Kabhi Yaha To Kabhi Waha Dauta Huwa... Usi Pe Kuch Likh raha Hoon... Ek Gareeb Insaan Ki Bhavnaayein Shayad Main Nahi Samajh Sakta Phir bhi.. Ek Koshish Ki..


Jindgi Ko Sitam Main Kehta Hoon..
Majbooriyon Me Bhi Khush Rehta Hoon..
Chand Boondon Se Pet Bhar Leta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Thandi Me Thithoor Leta Hoon..
Basaaat Me Bheeg Leta Hoon..
Garmi Paav Jalaati Hai ..
Pathron Pe Main So Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon.

Kabhi Sabji To Kabhi Kuch Naa Mile..
Namak Roti Pe Main Jee Leta Hoon.
Zakhm Chahe Jaisa Bhi Ho..
Thodi Haldi Main Lagaa Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Ek Kameez Ek Patloon..
Roz Bina Saboon Me Dhota Hoon
Badi Dukaano Ki Ronak Dekh...
Aksar Khush Me Ho Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Gam Bhi Bohat Hai.. Dard Bhi Hai..
Dil Me Sab Dabaa Leta Hoon..
Kabhi Akele To Kabhi Sabke Samne..
Akhon Se Angocha Bhigo Leta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Khush Hoon Main Jaisa Bhi Hoon Me..
Kisise Shikva Nahi Karta Hoon..
Main Jaisa Hoon Waise Koi Na Ho..
Roz Yahi Duwa Karta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon...
Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon...
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bahut achha likha hai aapne...aapke alfaazoN ne puri nazm ko ek aaine ke roop meiN dhaal diya...achha laga padh kar aur ye alfaaz hi haiN jinhone dard aNdar tak utha diya....
ek achhe qalaam par meri janib se daad qubuul farmaayeN...

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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ye jo do aashaar hai .. apne aap main ek kamaal hai ... bohat diloN ke kareeb aa gaye ho aap apne in aashaaroN ke sath .. ye ehsaas aise hi nahi aate .. uspar se jo baat main highlight ki .. wo aapne to yuN hi likh dee .. par meri aaNkhoN maiN to tasweer bana gayi .. khuda apko khush rakhe ..

Mubarakbaad ke sath

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Ek Kameez Ek Patloon..
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Badi Dukaano Ki Ronak Dekh...
Aksar Khush Me Ho Leta Hoon...

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Shukriyaa Naresh Bhai..

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bahut achha likha hai aapne...aapke alfaazoN ne puri nazm ko ek aaine ke roop meiN dhaal diya...achha laga padh kar aur ye alfaaz hi haiN jinhone dard aNdar tak utha diya....
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Ek Kameez Ek Patloon..
Roz Bina Saboon Me Dhota Hoon
Badi Dukaano Ki Ronak Dekh...
Aksar Khush Me Ho Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

nazam pe sarsari nazar dali.......phir thoda aage padha........fir...........padhta hi gaya.......jab poori nazam padh chuka to laptop ki sacreen dhundhla gai thi.....ankho'n ke kor bheeg chuke the........aapko dil se salaam and reps...

Shukriyaa Parveen Aur Vikram Ji..

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Aaj Ek Insaan Dekha.. Barish Me Bheegta Huwa.. APNE Bacho Ko Sambhalta Huwa.... Kabhi Yaha To Kabhi Waha Dauta Huwa... Usi Pe Kuch Likh raha Hoon... Ek Gareeb Insaan Ki Bhavnaayein Shayad Main Nahi Samajh Sakta Phir bhi.. Ek Koshish Ki..


Jindgi Ko Sitam Main Kehta Hoon..
Majbooriyon Me Bhi Khush Rehta Hoon..
Chand Boondon Se Pet Bhar Leta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Thandi Me Thithoor Leta Hoon..
Basaaat Me Bheeg Leta Hoon..
Garmi Paav Jalaati Hai ..
Pathron Pe Main So Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon.

Kabhi Sabji To Kabhi Kuch Naa Mile..
Namak Roti Pe Main Jee Leta Hoon.
Zakhm Chahe Jaisa Bhi Ho..
Thodi Haldi Main Lagaa Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Ek Kameez Ek Patloon..
Roz Bina Saboon Me Dhota Hoon
Badi Dukaano Ki Ronak Dekh...
Aksar Khush Me Ho Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Gam Bhi Bohat Hai.. Dard Bhi Hai..
Dil Me Sab Dabaa Leta Hoon..
Kabhi Akele To Kabhi Sabke Samne..
Akhon Se Angocha Bhigo Leta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Khush Hoon Main Jaisa Bhi Hoon Me..
Kisise Shikva Nahi Karta Hoon..
Main Jaisa Hoon Waise Koi Na Ho..
Roz Yahi Duwa Karta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon...
Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon...


superbb feelings.... mind blowing....... and hats off for such a deep observation ......

you wrote very well and thanks for taking this a front........ likhte rahiye... khush rahiye

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Aaj Ek Insaan Dekha.. Barish Me Bheegta Huwa.. APNE Bacho Ko Sambhalta Huwa.... Kabhi Yaha To Kabhi Waha Dauta Huwa... Usi Pe Kuch Likh raha Hoon... Ek Gareeb Insaan Ki Bhavnaayein Shayad Main Nahi Samajh Sakta Phir bhi.. Ek Koshish Ki..


Jindgi Ko Sitam Main Kehta Hoon..
Majbooriyon Me Bhi Khush Rehta Hoon..
Chand Boondon Se Pet Bhar Leta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Thandi Me Thithoor Leta Hoon..
Basaaat Me Bheeg Leta Hoon..
Garmi Paav Jalaati Hai ..
Pathron Pe Main So Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon.

Kabhi Sabji To Kabhi Kuch Naa Mile..
Namak Roti Pe Main Jee Leta Hoon.
Zakhm Chahe Jaisa Bhi Ho..
Thodi Haldi Main Lagaa Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Ek Kameez Ek Patloon..
Roz Bina Saboon Me Dhota Hoon
Badi Dukaano Ki Ronak Dekh...
Aksar Khush Me Ho Leta Hoon...

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Gam Bhi Bohat Hai.. Dard Bhi Hai..
Dil Me Sab Dabaa Leta Hoon..
Kabhi Akele To Kabhi Sabke Samne..
Akhon Se Angocha Bhigo Leta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon..

Khush Hoon Main Jaisa Bhi Hoon Me..
Kisise Shikva Nahi Karta Hoon..
Main Jaisa Hoon Waise Koi Na Ho..
Roz Yahi Duwa Karta Hoon..

Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon...
Main Gareeb Ka Beta Hoon...
Kisi doosre ke dard ko mahsoos karna aur uspe likhna asaan nahi ashiq ji...aapne ek gareeb ke ehsaas bahut khoobi se samne rakhe hain...kalaam dil pe asar karta hai....

Bahut khoob......

Likhte rahiye......


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eshwar kabhi bhi kisi ko gareeb naa banaaye.............

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