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Eak hi dil tha kho gayaa saahab -
13th January 2011, 03:20 PM
aadaab dosto qadeer bhai ki zameen me meree ek taazah ghazal ummeed ki doaa den ge masood hassaas Aek andher ho gayaa saahab Eak hi dil tha kho gayaa saahab Kaon jazboN ke de ke pahnaayi Beej ulfat ke bo gayaa saahab pahnaayi ....... wus"at / hama geeree / lambaayi chaoraayi laot kar koi bhi nahi aayaa dil se ik baar jo gayaa saahab eak aaNsoo thaa raqs e bismil kaa meraa takiyaa bhigo gayaa saahab raqs e bismil..... be chain ka naach zulf e barham me phool taaNke haiN gul bhi gul posh ho gayaa saahab zulf e barham ...... khulee lahraati zulf gul ... phool ,,,,,, gul posh ... phool pahne huye khud to doobaa thaa koi baat na thee saath mujh ko dubo gayaa saahab lab balab chaaNd mujh se shab bhar thaa subh pahloo me so gayaa saahab lab balab ......... lips pe lips rakkhe husn e qaatil nahaa ke jharne pe aor Hassaas ho gayaa saahab hassaas ...... sensitive |
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13th January 2011, 04:31 PM
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ji gud one shaahab............................  laot kar koi bhi nahi aayaa dil se ik baar jo gayaa saahab..........too good... khud to doobaa thaa koi baat na thee saath mujh ko dubo gayaa saahab Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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13th January 2011, 04:33 PM
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Wah Wah Wahhhhhhh Masood Saheb...! Yaqeen Maniye Ye Kalaam Parh Kr Itna Lutf Mila Ke Khud0Ba0Khud He Dil Se Wahhh Nikal Aayi.... Boht Boht Boht Khooob Rahi Aap Ki Ghazal..... Aap Ki Soch Ki Gehrayi Nazar Aayi Or Is Bhi Bhi Umdah Aap Ka Andaz-e-Bayan Raha....... Khush Rahiye Or Aisay He Mehfil Jagmagatay Rahen Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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13th January 2011, 04:49 PM
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krishna  NA JANE NEENDON SE KYON DUSHMNI HUEE krishna KHULI PLAK PE KOEE KHWAB LIYE FIRTA HUN KRISHNA sprjp@yahoo.com |
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13th January 2011, 05:58 PM
laot kar koi bhi nahi aayaa
dil se ik baar jo gayaa saahab eak aaNsoo thaa raqs e bismil kaa meraa takiyaa bhigo gayaa saahab khud to doobaa thaa koi baat na thee saath mujh ko dubo gayaa saahab Waah .. Kyaa Baat Hai ... Masood Bhai ... Zabardast ! har ashaar luft ki inthaa ban gaya .... bahut khoob ... janaab ! SuperBBBBBBBB Creation .... ! tamaam ghazal ko tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... ! aise hi umdaa kalaamoN se ru-ba-ru karaate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... ! DuaaoN ke saath ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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14th January 2011, 01:57 AM
Masood Bhai Adaab,
Iss ghazal ki kya tareef karoon mujhe mehsoos ho raha hai jaise mere janm din par aapne mere dil ki baat mere hi jazbaatoN ko bayaan kiya ho..yeh do sher behad behad roomaani aur naazuk mehsoos hue..bohot bohot shukriya iss ghazal ko pesh karne ke liye... zulf e barham me phool taaNke haiN gul bhi gul posh ho gayaa saahab lab balab chaaNd mujh se shab bhar thaa subh pahloo me so gayaa saahab Waaah Subhaanallah.. Apna khiyaal rakhiyega.. Talib. |
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14th January 2011, 10:24 AM
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Masood bhai aadaab.. janab aapki ghazal thee ya qayaamat.. mashallah sare jazbaat urooz pe dikhe, har rang nazar aaya hai is kalaam me,, chahe wo muhabbat ho, chahhe bewafaai, chahe, intzaar, chahe talkhi... bahot khoob bayaani se saje is kalaam ke liye lakhon daad peshe khidmat hain... likhte rahen biraadar. khush rahen shaad... |
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15th January 2011, 05:39 PM
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Kya baat hai.....!! Bahut khubsurat gazal kahi hai aapne.....!!! eak aaNsoo thaa raqs e bismil kaa meraa takiyaa bhigo gayaa saahab Ye sher Mujhe bahut pasand aaya...!!! Dher saari duain aur daad hazir hai ..... kabool kijiyegaa....!!! Aise hi likhte rahiye.....!!! Khush rahiyee.....!!! Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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16th January 2011, 12:34 PM
laot kar koi bhi nahi aayaa
dil se ik baar jo gayaa saahab bahut khoob masood ji..... daad kubul keejiye... |
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