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Teri Yaad Me YuN Raatey ...! - 1st March 2011, 12:17 PM
Teri Yaad Me YuN Raatey KatTi Rahi
Bekarari Dil Ka Sabab Banti Rahi

Udaasi Ka Phera Rehta Hai Har Pal
Zindagi KyuN Aise Chalti Rahi

Mummkin Nahi Dafan Karna EhsaasoN Ko
Phir KyuN TammanayN Machalti Rahi

NaaKaam Rahi Har Koshish Use Paane Ki
Majbooriya Aise Daaman PakaDti Rahi

Jaane Waala Na Aaya Wapas Kabhi
Ruuh Phir Bhi Jism Badalti Rahi

Jab Har MoD Se Ek Raha Nikalti Hai
KyuN "Radhika" Ke Liye Rahe Thamti Rahi


Radhika

Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye

Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye

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1st March 2011, 05:30 PM
Jaane Waala Na Aaya Wapas Kabhi
Ruuh Phir Bhi Jism Badalti Rahi

bahut khoob ...... radhika ji ..........

achche ehsaas likhe hai ....... dil se daad .........

yuhi likhti rahiye ...............

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1st March 2011, 10:49 PM
bahut khoob andaaze baya ......
bahut saaf likhti hain aap aur kafi shayrana bhi......
shayrana likhna sabke bus ki baat nahi.......ek maturiry hai aapke is kalaam me.
very compact lines.....bahut khoob

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Radhika Ji ! iss baar bhi aapki koshish asardaar rahi ... sabhi ashaar acche se adaa kiye hai aapne ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aur behtar prayaas ke saath aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !



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Jaane Waala Na Aaya Wapas Kabhi
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3rd March 2011, 02:13 PM
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Jaane Waala Na Aaya Wapas Kabhi
Ruuh Phir Bhi Jism Badalti Rahi

bahut khoob ...... radhika ji ..........

achche ehsaas likhe hai ....... dil se daad .........

yuhi likhti rahiye ...............

ji bhaut bhaut shukriya..............................


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Teri Yaad Me YuN Raatey KatTi Rahi

Bekarari Dil Ka Sabab Banti Rahi

Udaasi Ka Phera Rehta Hai Har Pal
Zindagi KyuN Aise Chalti Rahi

Mummkin Nahi Dafan Karna EhsaasoN Ko
Phir KyuN TammanayN Machalti Rahi

NaaKaam Rahi Har Koshish Use Paane Ki
Majbooriya Aise Daaman PakaDti Rahi

Jaane Waala Na Aaya Wapas Kabhi
Ruuh Phir Bhi Jism Badalti Rahi

Jab Har MoD Se Ek Raha Nikalti Hai

KyuN "Radhika" Ke Liye Rahe Thamti Rahi
Yaha shaayri bhi acchi likhi gayi hai, Radhika Ji...! Khayaal aur bayaani umdaa lage hameiN...!

Maqtaa aur maqte se pehle ka sher khaas pasand aaye...!

Khuubsurat kalaam ke darshan karwaate rahiyegaa...!

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Adaab Radhika Ji!

Boht pasand aaya aapka khoobsoorat kalaam! Sabhi ashaar apna ek asar chhorte lage zahan per! Yunhi likhte rahiye ga! Beshumaar daad hazir hai, qabool fermayen! Khush Rahein!

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bahut khoob andaaze baya ......
bahut saaf likhti hain aap aur kafi shayrana bhi......
shayrana likhna sabke bus ki baat nahi.......ek maturiry hai aapke is kalaam me.
very compact lines.....bahut khoob

bahut saari daad.

ji bhaut bhaut shukriya..................


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Radhika Ji ! iss baar bhi aapki koshish asardaar rahi ... sabhi ashaar acche se adaa kiye hai aapne ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aur behtar prayaas ke saath aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
ji bhaut bhaut shukriya...................................


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9th March 2011, 10:52 PM
aadab radhika ji,
aapne bahut umda shayri ki peshkash ki hai. Taarif ke liye lafz kam hain mere pas. Likhti rahein, khush rahein.
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Teri Yaad Me YuN Raatey KatTi Rahi
Bekarari Dil Ka Sabab Banti Rahi

Udaasi Ka Phera Rehta Hai Har Pal
Zindagi KyuN Aise Chalti Rahi

Mummkin Nahi Dafan Karna EhsaasoN Ko
Phir KyuN TammanayN Machalti Rahi

NaaKaam Rahi Har Koshish Use Paane Ki
Majbooriya Aise Daaman PakaDti Rahi

Jaane Waala Na Aaya Wapas Kabhi
Ruuh Phir Bhi Jism Badalti Rahi

Jab Har MoD Se Ek Raha Nikalti Hai
KyuN "Radhika" Ke Liye Rahe Thamti Rahi
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