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uska chehra ab aakhon se nikal gaya - 31st August 2014, 01:12 PM

Uska chehra ab aakhon se nikal gaya,
Dil me raha jo dard ashkon se nikal gaya.

Umr bhar dekhta raha jisko,
Dekhkar anjaan sa nikal gaya.

Mulakaatein baatein sab jhooti nikli,
Aur mohobat ka asar bhi nikal gaya.

socha jo mila woh hai mera naseeb,
Hosh aaya to nasha sara nikal gaya.

Saakib zindagi me bahaar zaroori to nahi,
Mausam ka kya hai ek aaya ek nikal gaya....

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6th September 2014, 12:20 PM

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Uska chehra ab aakhon se nikal gaya,
Dil me raha jo dard ashkon se nikal gaya.

Umr bhar dekhta raha jisko,
Dekhkar anjaan sa nikal gaya.

Mulakaatein baatein sab jhooti nikli,
Aur mohobat ka asar bhi nikal gaya.

socha jo mila woh hai mera naseeb,
Hosh aaya to nasha sara nikal gaya.

Saakib zindagi me bahaar zaroori to nahi,
Mausam ka kya hai ek aaya ek nikal gaya....

acchaa likha hai saakib saahab aapne...... mashq jaarii rakkhen....

Shaad....


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Bahot khoob saakibji....ehsaas aur nazm dono hi khoobsurat khaaskar maqtaa bahot pasand aya...yunhi likhtey rahiye
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22nd September 2014, 09:47 AM

Saakib ji namaskaar
bahut acche ehsaas hai....hame yeh sher bahut pasand aaya...!

Saakib zindagi me bahaar zaroori to nahi,
Mausam ka kya hai ek aaya ek nikal gaya....


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