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Sad Tanhai.... - 23rd July 2009, 05:27 PM

Main teri yaadon ke Nishan Lekar akela chalta raha...
Kabhi dil se dard to kabhi aankhon se lahoo nikalta raha,
Mil hi gaya mujhe sila apni wafaon ka.....
Tu khush hai apne laal jode mein saji or main safed kafan ke saath jalta raha..
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24th July 2009, 04:33 PM

Uday Jii aapka SDC pariwar mein swagat hai,,

Aapki yeh lines dil ko choo gayi bahut achcha likha hai aapne..
Likhate rahiaye..

Khush rahiye...


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4th August 2009, 01:06 PM

aapka bahut bahut shukriya .... meri koshish yahi hai ki main apne behtareen alfaaj aap doston ko pesh karta rahoon ... take care.
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Love 4th August 2009, 01:58 PM

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Main teri yaadon ke Nishan Lekar akela chalta raha...
Kabhi dil se dard to kabhi aankhon se lahoo nikalta raha,
Mil hi gaya mujhe sila apni wafaon ka..... Tu khush hai apne laal jode mein saji or main safed kafan ke saath jalta raha..

wah wah.....last two lines are mindblowing
dil chir kar nikala gaye yeh lafz
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4th August 2009, 03:15 PM

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wah wah.....last two lines are mindblowing
dil chir kar nikala gaye yeh lafz
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dhanyawaad aapka Praneeta Ji ....
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4th August 2009, 11:56 PM

koshish kertay reiye ...
ik din aa ka naam bhi
Iqbal k saath hoga...:P
   
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6th August 2009, 02:25 PM

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koshish kertay reiye ...
ik din aa ka naam bhi
Iqbal k saath hoga...:P
thank you dear... main jaruur koshis karta rahunga... or apne sath apni mohabbat ka naam humesha ke liye jinda rakhunga.. take care
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