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Love Khwaab.... - 15th September 2009, 06:40 PM

Hi doston ek baar fir se apne kuch alfaaz liye main hazir hoon mujhe aasha hai ki aapko mere alfaaz pasand aayenge...



Tanhai mein khwaab sajaata raha,
adhoori neend me khud ko rulaata raha,

wo apni khushi mein khush thi,
khud ko uski khushi me jalaata raha,

dard kitna hua ye na poocho,
ghaaw pe ghaaw khaata raha,

usko mere dard ka ehsaas ho hi jaayega,
bas itna sa khwaab main khud ko dikhaata raha,

duniya ki bheed me ro raha tha main akela,
apni nakaam mohabbat ki kahaani suna kar sabko hasata raha.
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15th September 2009, 06:51 PM

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duniya ki bheed me ro raha tha main akela,
apni nakaam mohabbat ki kahaani suna kar sabko hasata raha.
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Bhai bahut hi gehri baat kitni asaani se keh di.. Beshak Ehsaas dardnaak hain but Alfaaz bahut achhe hain...

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15th September 2009, 07:06 PM

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Hi doston ek baar fir se apne kuch alfaaz liye main hazir hoon mujhe aasha hai ki aapko mere alfaaz pasand aayenge...



Tanhai mein khwaab sajaata raha,
adhoori neend me khud ko rulaata raha,

wo apni khushi mein khush thi,
khud ko uski khushi me jalaata raha,

dard kitna hua ye na poocho,
ghaaw pe ghaaw khaata raha,

usko mere dard ka ehsaas ho hi jaayega,
bas itna sa khwaab main khud ko dikhaata raha,

duniya ki bheed me ro raha tha main akela,
apni nakaam mohabbat ki kahaani suna kar sabko hasata raha.
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Deep ji.......bahut khub likha hai aapne.......aapke ehsaasat bahut khubsurat lage mujhe........aise hi likhte rahiye........khush rahiye......aapki kalam mai bahut dam nazar ataa hai.......koshish zaari rakhiye.......




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16th September 2009, 03:38 PM

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Deep ji.......bahut khub likha hai aapne.......aapke ehsaasat bahut khubsurat lage mujhe........aise hi likhte rahiye........khush rahiye......aapki kalam mai bahut dam nazar ataa hai.......koshish zaari rakhiye.......



Tum mere maazi ki kitaab ka vark aahista se kholna
Pehle panne par kisi ke aansoon ki boond rakhi hai....



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16th September 2009, 05:13 PM

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BHai aapki kalam mein to bahut jaldi nikhar aa gaya nice creation ahsaas achche hai aur bayan bhi achcha kiya hai.....

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waah kya baat hai.... - 17th September 2009, 04:48 PM

kya baat hai DEEP G
AAPKE SHABDO SE LAGTA HAI DIL KADARD BYAN KAR DIYA AAPNE.......
MERA HAAL BHI KUCH AISA HI HAI..
AAPNE JO LIKHA BILKUL VAISA
ISLIYE SHAYAAD MAIN AAPKO BTA NHI SAKTI KI MAIN KITNI Prabhavit hu aapki is gazal se

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kya baat hai DEEP G
AAPKE SHABDO SE LAGTA HAI DIL KADARD BYAN KAR DIYA AAPNE.......
MERA HAAL BHI KUCH AISA HI HAI..
AAPNE JO LIKHA BILKUL VAISA
ISLIYE SHAYAAD MAIN AAPKO BTA NHI SAKTI KI MAIN KITNI Prabhavit hu aapki is gazal se

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