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Main apne dard ke saath rehta hu... - 13th September 2009, 08:27 AM

Main apne dard ke saath rehta hu
Phir uski aankh mai behta kiyon hu...


Woh jab ek raaste par aake mud gayi thii
Pichhe ghoom ke usey dekhta kiyon hu...


Hawa ko rokna jhuti koshish thii meri
Uske lehrate dupatte ko pakadta kiyon hu...


Gali mai andhera bahut tha raat ko
Apne saaye se uska ghar puchhta kiyon hu...


Sare bazaar jab woh kabhi milti hai toh
Main "Naresh" usko sazdaa karta kiyon hu...




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Dosto.... post karte waqt First Line mai "Kiyon" shabd Chhut gaya tha.....phir Edit nahi kar paya....... woh First Line iss tarha hai...........

Main apne dard ke saath rehta kiyon hu
Phir uski aankh mai behta kiyon hu...

Woh jab ek raaste par aake mud gayi thii
Pichhe ghoom ke usey dekhta kiyon hu...

Hawa ko rokna jhuti koshish thii meri
Uske lehrate dupatte ko pakadta kiyon hu...

Gali mai andhera bahut tha raat ko
Apne saaye se uska ghar puchhta kiyon hu...

Sare bazaar jab woh kabhi milti hai toh
Main "Naresh" usko sazdaa karta kiyon hu




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Main apne dard ke saath rehta kiyon hu
Phir uski aankh mai behta kiyon hu...

Woh jab ek raaste par aake mud gayi thii
Pichhe ghoom ke usey dekhta kiyon hu...

Hawa ko rokna jhuti koshish thii meri
Uske lehrate dupatte ko pakadta kiyon hu...

Gali mai andhera bahut tha raat ko
Apne saaye se uska ghar puchhta kiyon hu...

Sare bazaar jab woh kabhi milti hai toh
Main "Naresh" usko sazdaa karta kiyon hu

beautiful lines...............
dard par likhi gayi sari poetry mujhe bahot pasand aate hai...yeh poetry aap ne bahot khub likha hai
yuhi likhte rahiyen
khush rahiyen

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13th September 2009, 02:45 PM

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Dosto.... post karte waqt First Line mai "Kiyon" shabd Chhut gaya tha.....phir Edit nahi kar paya....... woh First Line iss tarha hai...........

Main apne dard ke saath rehta kiyon hu
Phir uski aankh mai behta kiyon hu...

Woh jab ek raaste par aake mud gayi thii
Pichhe ghoom ke usey dekhta kiyon hu...

Hawa ko rokna jhuti koshish thii meri
Uske lehrate dupatte ko pakadta kiyon hu...

Gali mai andhera bahut tha raat ko
Apne saaye se uska ghar puchhta kiyon hu...

Sare bazaar jab woh kabhi milti hai toh
Main "Naresh" usko sazdaa karta kiyon hu
Acchi lagi aap ki yaha koshish, Naresh Ji...!

4th sher is my favourite...! ( Andheron main saaye bhi saath nahin dete...! )

Yun hi likhte rahein, ok...?

Duaaon ke saath



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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Acchi lagi aap ki yaha koshish, Naresh Ji...!

4th sher is my favourite...! ( Andheron main saaye bhi saath nahin dete...! )

Yun hi likhte rahein, ok...?

Duaaon ke saath

Danny ji......mujhe khushi hai.....aapko meri koshish pasand aai......is hausla afzaai ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya......aise hi saath dete rahiyega......




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Naresh jii Aadaab....

Janab din ba din apki kalam mein nikhar aa raha hai, zaruri bhi hai aap mashq bhi kar rahe hai, aapke ahsaas behad umda hai JInki main pahele se qadar karta huiN....

Is sher ko aapne bakhoobi bayan kiya hai aur khayal bhi achcha hai Daad..

Gali mai andhera bahut tha raat ko
Apne saaye se uska ghar puchhta kiyon hu...


Mashq jaari rakhiye nikhar aayenga,

Khush rahiye
Khuda hafez...


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Naresh jii Aadaab....

Janab din ba din apki kalam mein nikhar aa raha hai, zaruri bhi hai aap mashq bhi kar rahe hai, aapke ahsaas behad umda hai JInki main pahele se qadar karta huiN....

Is sher ko aapne bakhoobi bayan kiya hai aur khayal bhi achcha hai Daad..

Gali mai andhera bahut tha raat ko
Apne saaye se uska ghar puchhta kiyon hu...

Mashq jaari rakhiye nikhar aayenga,

Khush rahiye
Khuda hafez...
Sameer ji....yeh toh aapki nawazish hai......aur aapka badappan hai jo humpar nazre inayat ho jaati hai aapki........jo bhi main ban paya hu........woh aapka sarmaaya hai....
bas aise saath banaye rakhiyega......koshish karta rahunga....

duaao ke saath




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13th September 2009, 11:44 PM

Naresh Ji,
Mujhe lafz nahi mil patay aap ki tareef kis tarah karon...
Bas itna hi kehta hon " BOHT KAMAL LIKHA AAP NE..."

Younhi likhte rahiye ga,

GOD BLESS YOU,

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Mujhe lafz nahi mil patay aap ki tareef kis tarah karon...
Bas itna hi kehta hon " BOHT KAMAL LIKHA AAP NE..."

Younhi likhte rahiye ga,

GOD BLESS YOU,

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Hassan ji......aise na karo.......main abhi zameen par hi theek hu.......yeh toh aapki nawazish hai......ki aap meri koshish ke liye lafz khozne baith gaye......bas aap ka saath bana rahe.... yeh hi mere liye bahut hai......khush rahiye.....yuhi hamse milte rahiye.......





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Naresh jee,
hume aapki yeh ghazal achhi lagi
saare aashar apnasa laga
aapki soch aur kalam din ba din nikhar rahi hai
khuda aapki kamal ko aur Noor bakshye

Khus rahiye

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Naresh jee,
hume aapki yeh ghazal achhi lagi
saare aashar apnasa laga
aapki soch aur kalam din ba din nikhar rahi hai
khuda aapki kamal ko aur Noor bakshye

Khus rahiye

Diya
Diya ji.....aapki nawazish hai......jo meri koshish aapko pasand aai....mujhe acha laga aapne apni duaao se meri kalam ko nawaza....aashirwaad diya.....aise hi aap apna saath mujhe dete rahiyega........main jitna acha likh paya toh woh sab aapki duaao ka hi fal hoga....varna mujh khaaksaar ki kiya biisaat....

khush rahiye....

aapki duaao ke talabgaar....




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kya baat he sarkar ye kya gajab likha he, mujhe aapse yehi aasha thi. - 15th September 2009, 08:53 AM

naresh g kuch baat he, koi chot khai lagti he, jo itni ithlaati gajal likhi he, keep it up N.


unko hame satane ka bahana mil gya, hme hmari maut ka thikana mil gya, hme to unke saath ki umid thi jo na mila , unko to sara jamana mil gya, hmari juban ko khamoshi ka kinara mil gya, meri ankho me ashko ka najara khil gya,
Ye kya kam tha k ik mulakat ho bus, tumhari dosti me kambakht hmara dil gya, hm drd ko khuda maan bethe he ab,mere maran k bahane me sath tumhara bn gya,,
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naresh g kuch baat he, koi chot khai lagti he, jo itni ithlaati gajal likhi he, keep it up N.

Shukriya.......Habib ji........aise hi saath dete rahiyega......khush rahiye....




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Khus rahiye

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Younhi likhte rahiye ga,

GOD BLESS YOU,

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Phir uski aankh mai behta kiyon hu...

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naresh jee,

namaste:

aap ki koshish me.n din-ba-din sudhaar nazar aa rahaa hai, aur yah bhi pata chal rahaa hai ki, aap kitni mehnat kar rahe hai.n, par abhii bhii, ek lamba safar hai jo aap ko ta'ey karna hai... yuu.n hi koshish zaari rakhiye....

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daad kubul farmayiye....
Shipra ji ......aap kaisi hai........shukriya aapko meri koshish mai nikhaar dikhaai diya.....aap dosto ka saath aur duaaye rahengi toh aur bhi behtar likhne ki koshish toh kar hi sakta hu......bas aap saath dete rahiye.....khush rahiye.......aapke naye kalaam ka mujhe intezaar hai.....




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aap bhot ashik mizaz likte hai, bhot acha lika apne muze acha laga.
Abed ji....jo bhi jaisa bhi likhta hu....woh aapke saamne hai........aapko pasand aaya iske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya...........aise hi saath banay rakhiye......khush rahiye......




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daad kabul kijiyega
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bahut aacha .. aise hi koshish karte rahiyega.
khus rahe kaamyaab hote rahe........

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Ajay ji......Namashkaar.......aapko yaha dekhkar acha laga.......aur khushi bhi mehsus hui......aapne meri koshish ko pasand kiya aur sarahaa......iske liye bahut bahut dhanybaad........aap jaise mahaan kavi ka aashirwaad hi mere liye bahut hai......is hausla afzaai ke liye........aapka shukriyaa......aage bhi aise saathe dete rahiyega........taaki aapka marghdarshan milta rahe......aur meri koshish ka avlokan aapki anubhavi kalam se mujhe hamesha milta rahe......

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Hassan ji......aaj aap saara din beet gaya......ek baar bhi sdc par dikhaai nahi diye.......kuch jiyada hi masrufiyat rahi lagta hai aaj saara din........
Naresh Ji,
Adaab,
Main maafi chahta hon ke, aap ko bagier
bataye mein City se bahir chala gaya,
Bas emergency jana para,
Ab aa gaya hon wapis,

Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga

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Bas emergency jana para,
Ab aa gaya hon wapis,

Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga

GOD BLESS YOU
Koi baat nahi Hassan ji.......hota hai aisa bhi......aana jaana padhta hai.....aap dikhai nahi diye toh aise hi puchh liya maine......isme muaafi ki koi baat nahi hai......sirf pyar ki baat hai.....jo aapse hame ho gaya hai.....aap bhi apna khayal rakhiyega.....khush rahiyega....

ab Eid kab ki padh rahi hai......aur Eid par kiya programm hai aapka ?




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ab Eid kab ki padh rahi hai......aur Eid par kiya programm hai aapka ?
Naresh Ji,
Aap ka meray liye pyar boht gurv ki baat hai..
Eid janab, Monday ya phir Tuesday ko ho sakti hai,
Aur koi khas programme nahi hai..

Kia khona hai kia pana hai is Eid per....
kuch bhi to nahi karna hai is Eid per.....

Khush rahiye,,,


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Eid janab, Monday ya phir Tuesday ko ho sakti hai,
Aur koi khas programme nahi hai..

Kia khona hai kia pana hai is Eid per....
kuch bhi to nahi karna hai is Eid per.....

Khush rahiye,,,
Yeh toh Hassan ji........aapki nawazish hai.......shukriya jankaari dene ke liye...aapki !




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aap ki koshish me.n din-ba-din sudhaar nazar aa rahaa hai, aur yah bhi pata chal rahaa hai ki, aap kitni mehnat kar rahe hai.n, par abhii bhii, ek lamba safar hai jo aap ko ta'ey karna hai... yuu.n hi koshish zaari rakhiye....

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aapne theek kaha ki safar abhi mujhe lamba ta'ey karna hai.....lekin yeh jaankar acha laga ....pehle se mere kaam mai sudhaar hai.......aapne meri koshish ko sarahaa ....saath hi hausla afzaai ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriaya.......aap aise hi mera saath dete rahiyega......khush rahiye.......aur apna khayal rakhiyega......duaao ke saath ijaazat ....




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Naresh jee:

namaste!

saadagee se bhari huii aapki yeh koShiSh! bahot hi achchhi rahiiN! maShq yuuNhi zaaree raKheN! daad hi daad aapko!

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Naresh jee:

namaste!

saadagee se bhari huii aapki yeh koShiSh! bahot hi achchhi rahiiN! maShq yuuNhi zaaree raKheN! daad hi daad aapko!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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aapki badi nawazish hai........ummeed karta hu........aapka aage aise hi saath milta rahega......khush rahiye.....

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" Itna bhi tu udaas na ho
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Tune yeh abhi jana nahi hai.......... "




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sahi kaha - 20th September 2009, 09:27 AM

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" ishq ka koi jaha mai paimana nahi hota
judai mai ashk ka sirf beh jana nahi hota
takdeer mai likhaa ho dard jab itnaa saara
chaha ke bhi insaan ke vash mai samajhna nahi hota....."
Sarkar ,
Kya kuch he jo dunia me nahi hota,
Ha jajbato ko smbhlna aasan nahi hota,
Waqt wqt ki baat he jo dil nadan ho gya,
Warna waqt b kisi ka gulaam nahi hota.





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unko hame satane ka bahana mil gya, hme hmari maut ka thikana mil gya, hme to unke saath ki umid thi jo na mila , unko to sara jamana mil gya, hmari juban ko khamoshi ka kinara mil gya, meri ankho me ashko ka najara khil gya,
Ye kya kam tha k ik mulakat ho bus, tumhari dosti me kambakht hmara dil gya, hm drd ko khuda maan bethe he ab,mere maran k bahane me sath tumhara bn gya,,
Kya malum hqiqat me sath dega khuda,
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Sarkar ,
Kya kuch he jo dunia me nahi hota,
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Waqt wqt ki baat he jo dil nadan ho gya,
Warna waqt b kisi ka gulaam nahi hota.
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