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mera pairhan hai dekho - 15th March 2011, 08:30 PM

जैसा चाहो इसे है उसी ढंग का,
मेरा पैरहन है देखो कई रंग का.

उजला फिरोज़ी हुआ पीर का चोगा,
बना हो के खाकी ये चोला मलंग का.

तीन रंग मिल जाएं जो राग द्वेष ईर्षा,
पड़ जाए कम ज़हर फिर काले भुजंग का.

एक रंग से कभी बने नहीं तसवीर कोई,
राम को भी लेना पड़ा साथ था बजरंग का.

जैसे स्याह रंग पर चढ़े नहीं रंग कोई,
मोटी खाल वालों पर असर नहीं व्यंग का.

मिट्टी को जिलाया जिसने कई रंग डाल कर,
उसका बुत बनाया तूने और वो भी संग का.

रंग--अमन--चैन से कैसे रंगूं पैरहन,
खुदा अनाड़ी हुआ नहीं सबका इक रंग का..



jaisa chaho ise hai usee dhang ka,
mera pairhan hai dekho kaee rang ka.


ujlaa firozee huaa peer ka choga,
banaa ho ke khaaki ye cholaa malang ka.


teen rang mil jaayeN jo raag dvesh eershaa,
parh jaaye kam zahar fir kaale bhujang ka.


ek rang se kabhi bane naheen tasveer koii,
raam ko bhi lena parha saath tha bajrang ka.


jaise syah rang par chade nahin rang koii,
motee khaal waaloN par asar nahin vyang ka.


mitti ko jilaaya jisne kaii rang daal kar,
uskaa but banaaya tune aur wo bhi sang ka.


rang-e-aman-o-chain se kaise rangooN pairhan,
khudaa anaarhi huaa nahiN sabkaa ik rang ka.

pairhan= libaas,
bhujang= saamp


"Anaarhi"
15th Mar. 2011


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jaisa chaho ise hai usee dhang ka,
mera pairhan hai dekho kaee rang ka.


ujlaa firozee huaa peer ka choga,
banaa ho ke khaaki ye cholaa malang ka.


teen rang mil jaayeN jo raag dvesh eershaa,
parh jaaye kam zahar fir kaale bhujang ka.


ek rang se kabhi bane naheen tasveer koii,
raam ko bhi lena parha saath tha bajrang ka.


jaise syah rang par chade nahin rang koii,
motee khaal waaloN par asar nahin vyang ka.


mitti ko jilaaya jisne kaii rang daal kar,
uskaa but banaaya tune aur wo bhi sang ka.


rang-e-aman-o-chain se kaise rangooN pairhan,
khudaa anaarhi huaa nahiN sabkaa ik rang ka.

Good One ........ Anaarhi Ji !

Bahut Umdaa lagi aapki yeh peshkash Hume ... ! DohoN kaa saa abhaas dete lage ... sabhi ehsaas .... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... !

likhte rahen .. aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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जैसा चाहो इसे है उसी ढंग का,
मेरा पैरहन है देखो कई रंग का.

उजला फिरोज़ी हुआ पीर का चोगा,
बना हो के खाकी ये चोला मलंग का.

तीन रंग मिल जाएं जो राग द्वेष ईर्षा,
पड़ जाए कम ज़हर फिर काले भुजंग का.

एक रंग से कभी बने नहीं तसवीर कोई,
राम को भी लेना पड़ा साथ था बजरंग का.

जैसे स्याह रंग पर चढ़े नहीं रंग कोई,
मोटी खाल वालों पर असर नहीं व्यंग का.

मिट्टी को जिलाया जिसने कई रंग डाल कर,
उसका बुत बनाया तूने और वो भी संग का.

रंग--अमन--चैन से कैसे रंगूं पैरहन,
खुदा अनाड़ी हुआ नहीं सबका इक रंग का..



jaisa chaho ise hai usee dhang ka,
mera pairhan hai dekho kaee rang ka.


ujlaa firozee huaa peer ka choga,
banaa ho ke khaaki ye cholaa malang ka.


teen rang mil jaayeN jo raag dvesh eershaa,
parh jaaye kam zahar fir kaale bhujang ka.


ek rang se kabhi bane naheen tasveer koii,
raam ko bhi lena parha saath tha bajrang ka.


jaise syah rang par chade nahin rang koii,
motee khaal waaloN par asar nahin vyang ka.


mitti ko jilaaya jisne kaii rang daal kar,
uskaa but banaaya tune aur wo bhi sang ka.


rang-e-aman-o-chain se kaise rangooN pairhan,
khudaa anaarhi huaa nahiN sabkaa ik rang ka.

pairhan= libaas,
bhujang= saamp


"Anaarhi"
15th Mar. 2011

Waaaah Anaari bhai aapne jo samaa baandha hai uske liye. Aur kuch to banda kahne ke layak nahi Par aapki ghazal ka ek ek lafz nihayti khubsoorat hai. Bande ki daad kabul karien sahab. Waise aap aur hamare naam dono ek hi hain gaur farmaiyega........

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teen rang mil jaayeN jo raag dvesh eershaa,
parh jaaye kam zahar fir kaale bhujang ka.


ek rang se kabhi bane naheen tasveer koii,
raam ko bhi lena parha saath tha bajrang ka.


jaise syah rang par chade nahin rang koii,
motee khaal waaloN par asar nahin vyang ka.


mitti ko jilaaya jisne kaii rang daal kar,
uskaa but banaaya tune aur wo bhi sang ka.




Aapko kaise Anaarhi boloon ... badaa sharmindaa hota hoon khud se har baar ise kahte hue.. par kya karoon majburi hai meri bhi shaayr ka takhallus jo thahraa....

leikin sach kahun to aap kahin se Anaarhi nahi hain, chahe alfaazon ka istemaal ho, chahe beshkeemti khayaalon ka laana, chahe aisi manzarkashi.. har cheez me ustaad ho aap... is baar bhi ye kalaam wahi daastaaN kahti hui hai.... Jis andaaz me tanzo-taanakashi hui hai is baar wo sacchai hai desh me faili buraai ki... laakhon daad peshe khidmat saahab.. Allah aur Nawaaze..


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[QUOTE=anaarhi;424065][CENTER]जैसा चाहो इसे है उसी ढंग का,
मेरा पैरहन है देखो कई रंग का.

उजला फिरोज़ी हुआ पीर का चोगा,
बना हो के खाकी ये चोला मलंग का.

तीन रंग मिल जाएं जो राग द्वेष ईर्षा,
पड़ जाए कम ज़हर फिर काले भुजंग का.

एक रंग से कभी बने नहीं तसवीर कोई,
राम को भी लेना पड़ा साथ था बजरंग का.

जैसे स्याह रंग पर चढ़े नहीं रंग कोई,
मोटी खाल वालों पर असर नहीं व्यंग का.

मिट्टी को जिलाया जिसने कई रंग डाल कर,
उसका बुत बनाया तूने और वो भी संग का.

रंग--अमन--चैन से कैसे रंगूं पैरहन,


bahut khoob ......... Anaarhi ji .............


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Bade bhai Naresh ji,

Namastey,

"dohey" pasand kerney ka dhanyewaad, hindi use kerne ki wazah se ya khyaal ki wazah se jaisey bhi, sher ya doha baat to ek hi hai anything two liner. aam bol chaal ki milee julee aasaan bhaasha ka isteymaal bas "anaarhi" hone ki wazah se hi kerta hoon,

saath dene ka shukriya , aage bhi aapse isee lagaaw ki ummeed rakhta hoon.

Regards,

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AnjAAn ji,

Namastey,

aapki daad tahe dil se kabool hai , shaukriya khyaal pasand kerney ka, jahan tak naam ki baat hai anjaan aur anaarhi main bahut fark hai mere bhai, anjaan ko jaankaar bantey der nahin lagti magar anaarhi ?????

thanks,

regards,
"Anaarhi"

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Shad bhai,

adaab,

mohab'bat se labrez aapka ek ek lafz kahin ander tak hila gayaa. kyon shrminda hon ji aap ek anaarhi ko anaarhi kehtey, kahin padha tha k is sansaar mein koi khyaal original nahin hai hazaaron saalon mein karoorhon logon ne jo bhi baateyn kahi hain har koi unko hi guma fira ker apne andaaz mein keh raha hai bas. isee baat ko ek chopaaee main kaha hai,

"Hai kasaa e faqeer tu rakh khairaat se matlab apna,
tu mast jis sharaab se hai wo jaam hi kisi aur ka hai,
sab teri aeeaariyan ab jag mein zahir ho chukee,
jo ban k anaarhi de raha paigaab hi kisi aur ka hai."

hence proved
anaarhi = anaarhi ------- (0)

Regards

"Anaarhi"
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Ishk ji,

Namaskaar,

aapka bahut bahut shukriya k aap ka hamesha aashirwaad milta hai.

regards,

"Anaarhi"

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Mayank ji,

namastey,

aap jaise senoir se jab daad miley to samjhna chahiye k dagar theek pakad rak'khi hai. shukriya shukriya.

regards,
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तीन रंग मिल जाएं जो राग द्वेष ईर्षा,
पड़ जाए कम ज़हर फिर काले भुजंग का.

एक रंग से कभी बने नहीं तसवीर कोई,
राम को भी लेना पड़ा साथ था बजरंग का.

ji nice thoughts .........................



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Yaha shaayri to aapne bahut acchi tarha se likhi hai, Paramjit Ji...! Har ek misra taarif ke kaabil hai...!

Bas, 2nd sher maiN " rang " lafz ki thoDi si kami mehsoos houi humko...!

Sincere compliments for this piece...!

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bahut achchi lagi aapki yeh rachna.
thanks for sharing it

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lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

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bahut khoob....................thanks for sharing.


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Radhika ji, Aarya ji, Mittal ji,

Namastey,

Khyaal pasand karney aur saath dene ka shukerguzaar hoon.

Regards,

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Danny ji,

Namaskaar,

hausla badaane ka shukriya, gazal par baareek nazar daalne ka dhanayvaad , 2nd sher mein jo rang ki kami aapko mehsoos huee usse likhtey hue ye baat dyaan mein nahin thi par aap ki painee nazar ne is aur ishaara kiya hai to mujhe bhi lag raha hai k agar usme bhi "rang" hota to us ka kuch aur rang hota.

" anaarhi leta jo ustaad se pehle isslaah,
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