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Aasmaan aur zameen ka, mumkin nahi milan! -
15th June 2011, 05:15 AM
Phoolon Ka baagh wo aur, kaanton ka tuu chaman,
Khushiyaan kareeb unsay, tujhse door hai aman! Aankhon ki wo hai thandak, nazron ki tu jalan, Tabassum labon ka wo aur, tu maathe' ki shikan! Haqeeqat se joha waaqif, ladaa apna tuu zahan, Wo Taaj-e-salaamti aur, sar par tere kafan! Na dekh khwaab unkay, chup hoja mere man, Aasmaan aur Zameen ka, mumkin nahi milan! |
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15th June 2011, 08:24 AM
Na dekh khwaab unkay, chup hoja mere man,
Aasmaan aur Zameen ka, mumkin nahi milan! Bahut Khooooooooob .... EnigmA Ji !  Acchi Ghazal Huii .. Janaab !! Dilee Mubaaraqbaad Aur Daad Qubuul KareN ... ! Aate Rahen aur Likhte RaheN ... ! DuaaoN Ke Saath ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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15th June 2011, 09:47 AM
umdaa khayaal pesh kiya hai aapne Enigma ji...
is baat mein koi do raye nahi hai ki aapki nazm ki gehraayi lafzon mein aaki nahi jaa sakti... Yuhni mehfil ranGeeN karte rahiYeGaa... aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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15th June 2011, 10:09 AM
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Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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15th June 2011, 02:56 PM
Phoolon Ka baagh wo aur, kaanton ka tuu chaman,
Khushiyaan kareeb unsay, tujhse door hai aman! Aankhon ki wo hai thandak, nazron ki tu jalan, Tabassum labon ka wo aur, tu maathe' ki shikan! Haqeeqat se joha waaqif, ladaa apna tuu zahan, Wo Taaj-e-salaamti aur, sar par tere kafan! Na dekh khwaab unkay, chup hoja mere man, Aasmaan aur Zameen ka, mumkin nahi milan! waah janaab Enigma saahab.. khoobsurat tahreer kiyaa aapne peshe nazar.. dil shaad ho gayaa.... tadap ki aur muflisi ki jo manzarkashi hui hai wo bayaani ke baahar ki baat hai.... ummeed hai mere dil ke zalzaloN ko samjhnege.. aur meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayeN... likhte raheN.. yooNhi... DuaaoN ka talabgaar shaad... |
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Thank You All! -
16th June 2011, 05:04 AM
Adaab Janaab Naresh Mehra Sahab, Janaab Mast Sahab, Mohtrma Radhika Sahiba Aur Aziz Janaab Sameer Shaad Sahab!
Aaap sab ka tah-e-dil se Shukriyaa ada kerta hoon! Your appreciation is ever-valued here! You all are always welcome! Khush Rahein! Abaad Rahein! |
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