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Mom... I Miss You! -
21st June 2011, 06:58 AM
No Matter What I do, Could Ever Repay Your Debt! Forget The Whole Life.. Just A Single Tear You Wept! Mama, I Miss You Every Moment, Should've Heeded What You Reckoned! What A Total Fool I Was.. Went For The Shiny Thing That Beckoned! As A Naive Child Sometimes.. I Felt That You Were Mean! Well For This Little Idiot.. That's What Kept Him Clean! Resting My Head On Your Lap.. Relieves All My Pain! My Heart Loses Its Load.. Feel Relaxed To The Vein! You Place My Head On Your Bosom.. And I Hear Your Heart Beat! I Testify To The Fact That.. The Heaven's Under Your Feet! Mama, I Know That You Too Miss Me.. More Than I Could Ever Miss You! I Wish I Had The Wings.... To Come Flying And Kiss You! |
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9th July 2011, 06:15 PM
Mama, I Know That You Too Miss Me..
More Than I Could Ever Miss You! I Wish I Had The Wings.... To Come Flying And Kiss You! powerful and potent...yet tender as a bud.....gave me a bleary eye there....the loss is too immense....to be forgotten. those who have her ....please cherish her.....she aint there for always...! thanx enigma...beaut lines....  sat |
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31st July 2011, 12:33 PM
Very nice piece, EnigmA Ji...! Every single line speaks directly to the heart...!
I miss my Mom too...! Keep yourself well and may God bless you...! Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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20th August 2011, 03:09 AM
Enigma g, todi poem changi lagi..vada emotional hogya a perh main.. agr aap videsh mein ho aur apni maa nu miss kerraye o to mai kiyaan charh bidesh or garr laut aa..Pankaj Udhaas ki gazzaal yaad agyee..Naam film wali..
"Aaaja umr bahut hai choti, Apne ghar mein bhi hai roti, chiththi aaye hai aaye hai..." Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee! Ajnabi |
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31st August 2011, 02:04 AM
Enigma your expression is Beautiful.. esp. these lines "I Testify To The Fact That..
The Heaven's Under Your Feet!" & "Mama, I Know That You Too Miss Me.. More Than I Could Ever Miss You! I Wish I Had The Wings.... To Come Flying And Kiss You!" God bless you & may you meet your mom soon... |
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Thank You All! |
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Thank You All! -
13th October 2011, 05:20 PM
Adaab Mohtaram Dr.Tahir Sahab, Janaab Danny Sahab, Ajnabi Sahab, Mohtrma Prayerforall Sahiba!
I am ever so thankful for your kind words of appreciation and regret deeply the delay in thanking you all! May the Almighty Bless You All! Wish You All Nothing But Peace And Tranquility In Life! Khush Rahein! Abaad Rahein! |
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