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17th March 2013, 02:58 PM
MaiN tujhMe ek raaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN,
Teri saNso me saaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN...
Patt'jhad me girte uN sukhe patt'oN ki kasam,
Tera dost tera humraaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN...
ZamaNe ki is chaka chauNdh-o-shor-o-gul* me,
Teri gumNaam awaaz baaNa rehNa chahta huN...
Mat tut tu mat sata khudko aye mere TAUSIF,
MaiN tere dil ki awaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN...
Ek taraf DuNiya hai aur ek taraf meri manzil,
Main ALLAH ka mohtaaj baaNa rehNa chahta huN...
SamandaroN mieN muaafiq havaa chalaata hai...
Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha...
Tausif I. Shaikh
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17th March 2013, 04:36 PM
MaiN tujhMe ek raaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN,
Teri saNso me saaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN...
Patt'jhad me girte uN sukhe patt'oN ki kasam,
Tera dost tera humraaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN...
wah wah..kya kehne...
bohat khoob Tausif sahab...
keep writing....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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Azaad Khayal
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17th March 2013, 05:46 PM
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Originally Posted by zainy
main tujhme ek raaz banaa rehna chahta hun,
teri sanso me saaz banaa rehna chahta hun...
Patt'jhad me girte un sukhe patt'on ki kasam,
tera dost tera humraaz banaa rehna chahta hun...
wah wah..kya kehne...
bohat khoob tausif sahab...
keep writing....
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asalam o alaykum zainy jee, apke reply hamesha mera hausla badhatey hain.. Jaan kar badi khushi hoti ki apko mere ehsaasat pasand ate hain. Khush rahain
SamandaroN mieN muaafiq havaa chalaata hai...
Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha...
Tausif I. Shaikh
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17th March 2013, 07:31 PM
Waahh kya baat hai tausif saahab.... mazaa aa gaya aapka tazatareen kalaam padh kar.....
bahot ummdah aashar lage aapke... kuch sher to bas kyaa kehne.....
Ek taraf DuNiya hai aur ek taraf meri manzil,
Main ALLAH ka mohtaaj baaNa rehNa chahta huN...
waah bahot khoob............ likhte raheN....
Shaad....
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17th March 2013, 07:44 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Waahh kya baat hai tausif saahab.... mazaa aa gaya aapka tazatareen kalaam padh kar.....
bahot ummdah aashar lage aapke... kuch sher to bas kyaa kehne.....
Ek taraf DuNiya hai aur ek taraf meri manzil,
Main ALLAH ka mohtaaj baaNa rehNa chahta huN...
waah bahot khoob............ likhte raheN....
Shaad....
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Asalaam o alaykum shaad bhaijaaN... Bhai maiN kuch likhun aur aap taareef Naa karaiN ye mumkiN Nahi , apki shikayat thi Na ki maiN SDC pe ata rahuN usi ko sudharNe maiN lag gaya huN. Aur hausla badhaNe ka bohat bohat shukriya.. Khush rahaiN...
SamandaroN mieN muaafiq havaa chalaata hai...
Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha...
Tausif I. Shaikh
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17th March 2013, 07:48 PM
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Originally Posted by Tausif shaikh
Asalaam o alaykum shaad bhaijaaN... Bhai maiN kuch likhun aur aap taareef Naa karaiN ye mumkiN Nahi , apki shikayat thi Na ki maiN SDC pe ata rahuN usi ko sudharNe maiN lag gaya huN. Aur hausla badhaNe ka bohat bohat shukriya.. Khush rahaiN...
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Waalekum Assalaam, Wa Rahmatullaah......
Masha Allaah mere bhaai.... jeete raho... khush raho.....
Allah tumhe behad khush o Khurram rakkhe... Shaad o aabaad raho.... likhte raho.. aur aate raho.. Allaah kare zore kalam aur bhi ziyaadah.....
Shaad...
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17th March 2013, 08:01 PM
waah tauseef saaheb ..
bahut khoob ashaar rahe
yuN hi buzm raushan rakhiye
daad
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17th March 2013, 11:36 PM
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waah tauseef saaheb ..
bahut khoob ashaar rahe
yuN hi buzm raushan rakhiye
daad
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Kshitiz sahab apka daad kubul... Meri peshkash sarhaaney ka dili shukriya... Duwa ki darkhwast.. Khush rahain...
SamandaroN mieN muaafiq havaa chalaata hai...
Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha...
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19th March 2013, 09:34 PM
tausif bhaii:
namaste!
janaab Khoob Ghazal kahii hay aapne... dil se daad hi daad
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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19th March 2013, 10:05 PM
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tausif bhaii:
namaste!
janaab Khoob Ghazal kahii hay aapne... dil se daad hi daad
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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Aadaab Dhaval Bhai... Jaankar badi khushi hui ki apko meri likhawat pasand aayi... Khush rahain apna khayal rakhain...
SamandaroN mieN muaafiq havaa chalaata hai...
Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha...
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24th March 2013, 12:07 PM
Bohat khoob Tausif saheb......................
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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24th March 2013, 01:41 PM
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Bohat khoob Tausif saheb......................
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Asalam o alaykum sajid bhai, umeed hai ap khariyat se honge. Apka tahe dilse shukriya ki apne apna kimti waqt nikal kar meri gazal par tawajjo diya. Hausla afzai ka behad shukriya. Apna khayal rakhain...
SamandaroN mieN muaafiq havaa chalaata hai...
Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha...
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24th March 2013, 02:30 PM
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Originally Posted by Tausif shaikh
MaiN tujhMe ek raaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN,
Teri saNso me saaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN...
Patt'jhad me girte uN sukhe patt'oN ki kasam,
Tera dost tera humraaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN...
ZamaNe ki is chaka chauNdh-o-shor-o-gul* me,
Teri gumNaam awaaz baaNa rehNa chahta huN...
Mat tut tu mat sata khudko aye mere TAUSIF,
MaiN tere dil ki awaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN...
Ek taraf DuNiya hai aur ek taraf meri manzil,
Main ALLAH ka mohtaaj baaNa rehNa chahta huN...
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WaaH ! Khoob !!
Khoobsurat Khayaalaat Se Aarasta
BehtareeN Ghazal Huii ... Tausif Shaikh JI
Good Effort
Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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24th March 2013, 02:37 PM
Ek taraf DuNiya hai aur ek taraf meri manzil,
Main ALLAH ka mohtaaj baaNa rehNa chahta huN...
beautiful lines...thnx for sharing
Regards
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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24th March 2013, 03:58 PM
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WaaH ! Khoob !!
Khoobsurat Khayaalaat Se Aarasta
BehtareeN Ghazal Huii ... Tausif Shaikh JI
Good Effort
Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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Adaab Naresh sirji mujhe apki comments ka hamesha se besabri se intezar raha karta hai, aur apse hausla badhane wale comments mera hausla beinteha badate hain. Apne ek martaba kaha tha ki main asaan alfaz istemal kiya karu bas usi ko zehan me rakh kar likhne ki koshish karta hun. Apka tahe dilse shukrguzar hu sir. Apna khayal rakhain. . . .
SamandaroN mieN muaafiq havaa chalaata hai...
Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha...
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24th March 2013, 04:05 PM
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Ek taraf DuNiya hai aur ek taraf meri manzil,
Main ALLAH ka mohtaaj baaNa rehNa chahta huN...
beautiful lines...thnx for sharing
Regards
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Adaab Praneeta ji, Umeed karta hun ap khairiyat se hongi, jaankar badi khushi hui ki apko meri gazal pasand ayi... Tahe dilse shukriya apka... Khush rahain aur apna khayal rakhain. . .
SamandaroN mieN muaafiq havaa chalaata hai...
Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha...
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24th March 2013, 10:32 PM
As salaam walekum Janab Tausif sahaab..!
WaaH janab kia kahne behad khoobsurat khayaaloN ko umdaa lafzoN
meiN baNdha hai aapne...
Sabhi ashar behad khoobsurat rahe... Meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Bazm meiN aate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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25th March 2013, 09:45 AM
Walaikum asalam aur Shukriya khwahish ji jaan kar khushi hui ki apko mere ehsaasat pasand hai... Apna khayal rakhain aur khush rahain. Fi aman allah. . .
SamandaroN mieN muaafiq havaa chalaata hai...
Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha...
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25th November 2014, 03:27 PM
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Originally Posted by Tausif shaikh
MaiN tujhMe ek raaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN,
Teri saNso me saaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN...
Patt'jhad me girte uN sukhe patt'oN ki kasam,
Tera dost tera humraaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN...
ZamaNe ki is chaka chauNdh-o-shor-o-gul* me,
Teri gumNaam awaaz baaNa rehNa chahta huN...
Mat tut tu mat sata khudko aye mere TAUSIF,
MaiN tere dil ki awaz baNaa rehNa chahta huN...
Ek taraf DuNiya hai aur ek taraf meri manzil,
Main ALLAH ka mohtaaj baaNa rehNa chahta huN...
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Tausif ji........behaddddddddddddd khoobsurat ehsaas, bahut umda likhte hai aap, sabhi ashiyaar hame bahuttttttttt pasand aaye.
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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