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ley ke koi khabar nhi aata - 16th June 2015, 05:01 PM

ley ke koi khabar nhi aata
Ab to qaasid idhar nhi aata

Lot aany ka waadah karte hyn,
Par koi lot kr nhi aata

Kab se palkein bichay betha hoon,
Chand kyonkar nazar nahi aata

Apni hasti mita deta "azahar"
Tuu agar Waqt per nahi aata
   
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16th June 2015, 05:05 PM

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ley ke koi khabar nhi aata
Ab to qaasid idhar nhi aata

Lot aany ka waadah karte hyn,
Par koi lot kr nhi aata

Kab se palkein bichay betha hoon,
Chand kyonkar nazar nahi aata

Apni hasti mita deta "azahar"
Tuu agar Waqt per nahi aata

Waahhhhhh Azhar saahab, pahlee dafaa aapko padhaa magar padh kar lagaa ke dil ke andar tk utar gayaa aapkaa kalaam.... behad rawaan dawaan aur behad gahraai samete hue kalaam hai ye.... likhte rahen... shaad rahen....

aate rahiyegaa......

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16th June 2015, 05:07 PM

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ley ke koi khabar nhi aata
Ab to qaasid idhar nhi aata

Lot aany ka waadah karte hyn,
Par koi lot kr nhi aata

Kab se palkein bichay betha hoon,
Chand kyonkar nazar nahi aata

Apni hasti mita deta "azahar"
Tuu agar Waqt per nahi aata
Bahut khoob kalaam azhar jii...aage bhi aate rahiye..
likhte rahein...



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Thumbs up superb gazal - 16th June 2015, 05:24 PM

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ley ke koi khabar nhi aata
Ab to qaasid idhar nhi aata

Lot aany ka waadah karte hyn,
Par koi lot kr nhi aata

Kab se palkein bichay betha hoon,
Chand kyonkar nazar nahi aata

Apni hasti mita deta "azahar"
Tuu agar Waqt per nahi aata


wahhhhhhhhhhhhh kya khoobsurat gazal bazm ki nazar ki hai aapne

Azhar ji...hame aapki gazal behaaaaaaaaddddd pasand aaye...yu hi bazm ko apni gazaloN se rangeen banate rhiye, likhte rhiye aur bazm meiN aate rhiye.

shukriya


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16th June 2015, 05:40 PM

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ley ke koi khabar nhi aata
Ab to qaasid idhar nhi aata

Lot aany ka waadah karte hyn,
Par koi lot kr nhi aata

Kab se palkein bichay betha hoon,
Chand kyonkar nazar nahi aata

Apni hasti mita deta "azahar"
Tuu agar Waqt per nahi aata
bahut khoob azhar bhai............
likhte rahe
duaon ke saath


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