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Post Mere naseeb me baqi jara gumaan bhi nahi - 16th June 2015, 05:02 PM

Mere naseeb me baqi jara gumaan bhi nahi
Agar zameen bhi nahi meri asmaan bhi nahi

Jise shumaar kiya karta tha sitaaron me
Raha ab uska to baaqi nishaan bhi nahi

Tu lot aa me karunga gila na sikwa kuch
Jo fasle the kabhi ab wo darmiyaan bhi nahi

Me kar raha hoon ata muft me ye dil apna
Ata ye mol karega tumhe jahaan bhi nahi

Naya naya sa lage aisa kya likhoon "Azhar"
Ke mere paas koi aisi dastaan bhi nahi
   
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16th June 2015, 05:38 PM

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Mere naseeb me baqi jara gumaan bhi nahi
Agar zameen bhi nahi meri asmaan bhi nahi

Jise shumaar kiya karta tha sitaaron me
Raha ab uska to baaqi nishaan bhi nahi

Tu lot aa me karunga gila na sikwa kuch
Jo fasle the kabhi ab wo darmiyaan bhi nahi

Me kar raha hoon ata muft me ye dil apna
Ata ye mol karega tumhe jahaan bhi nahi

Naya naya sa lage aisa kya likhoon "Azhar"
Ke mere paas koi aisi dastaan bhi nahi

bahut khoob azhar bhai............
likhte rahe
duaon ke saath


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masha-allah ! kya khoob likhte hai aap
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Thumbs up masha-allah ! kya khoob likhte hai aap - 16th June 2015, 05:39 PM

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Mere naseeb me baqi jara gumaan bhi nahi
Agar zameen bhi nahi meri asmaan bhi nahi

Jise shumaar kiya karta tha sitaaron me
Raha ab uska to baaqi nishaan bhi nahi

Tu lot aa me karunga gila na sikwa kuch
Jo fasle the kabhi ab wo darmiyaan bhi nahi

Me kar raha hoon ata muft me ye dil apna
Ata ye mol karega tumhe jahaan bhi nahi

Naya naya sa lage aisa kya likhoon "Azhar"
Ke mere paas koi aisi dastaan bhi nahi
Azhar ji.........hame to aapki yeh daastaa bahut bhaaye...aap kehte ho ki koi daasta bhi nahi

hame ab har roz aapki nye nye poetry ka intezaar rhega....bahut kamaal ka likhte hai aap.

dil se daad hazir hai.


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16th June 2015, 06:00 PM

Saaheb

Namaste

dil se daad ik achchhi koshish ke liye... likhte rahiye....


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16th June 2015, 06:11 PM

Waaaahhh azhar sahab...kya baat bahut khoob ehsaas.....

Aate raheinn
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16th June 2015, 10:21 PM

Hello azahar...

Kaafiii salo bad kisi ko pdha hai..heheh well not really.. Actully just abhi abhi kuch naye lmembers ki post padhke aarahi hu ... Par apki poem bahot achhi lagi ... Worth a reply kind of

Loved it.. Keep writting...

Grazie
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