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khushi ka suraj muqaddar ko kahaN nasib ? - 18th October 2014, 09:28 AM

Namaskaar SDC..............

aap sabhi ki nazar ek nyi aur chhoti si koshish ......
umeed hai aap sabhi ko zarur pasNd aayegi.........

meraa makashd kisi ke dil ko thesh pahuNchaanaa nhi hai
balki wo peedaa wyakat karni chahi hai jo us dour se guzar rahi naari ki hoti hai
ye bhaav us naari ke hai jo ye sab sahti hai...



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BaateN har taraf ye aam hoti rahi
maiN wahaN roz badnaam hoti rahi

saraa qasoor mere huSn ka thaa
aur maiN pal pal nilaam hoti rahi

jisne bhi kharidaa usine maslaa mujhe
maiN aaj eski to kal uski gulaam hoti rhi

pyaar ki taraaju meiN na tolaa kisi ne
dil ki hasrateN khaak tamaam hoti rahi

khushi ka suraj muqaddar ko kahaN nasib ?
badnaam galiyoN meiN subah-shaam hoti rhi....!!







maNzil pr nazar rakhtaa huN
zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !!

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18th October 2014, 08:23 PM

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Namaskaar SDC..............

aap sabhi ki nazar ek nyi aur chhoti si koshish ......
umeed hai aap sabhi ko zarur pasNd aayegi.........

meraa makashd kisi ke dil ko thesh pahuNchaanaa nhi hai
balki wo peedaa wyakat karni chahi hai jo us dour se guzar rahi naari ki hoti hai
ye bhaav us naari ke hai jo ye sab sahti hai...



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BaateN har taraf ye aam hoti rahi
maiN wahaN roz badnaam hoti rahi

saraa qasoor mere huSn ka thaa
aur maiN pal pal nilaam hoti rahi

jisne bhi kharidaa usine maslaa mujhe
maiN aaj eski to kal uski gulaam hoti rhi

pyaar ki taraaju meiN na tolaa kisi ne
dil ki hasrateN khaak tamaam hoti rahi

khushi ka suraj muqaddar ko kahaN nasib ?
badnaam galiyoN meiN subah-shaam hoti rhi....!!





Kya baat hai rajeev ji..abhi tak main dekh hi nhi payi aapka ye kalaam...bada achcha laga ki aapne un zazbaton ko bayaan kiya jinke bare me log shayad sochte bhi nahi....
ek alag soch..bahut umda nazm..



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Kya baat hai rajeev ji..abhi tak main dekh hi nhi payi aapka ye kalaam...bada achcha laga ki aapne un zazbaton ko bayaan kiya jinke bare me log shayad sochte bhi nahi....
ek alag soch..bahut umda nazm..
Madhu ji bahut bahut shukriyaa.................
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!! Rajeev bhai,,,

Kia baat hai.. bohat hi sangeen pehlu se ru-ba-ru karaya hai..
lab-o-lehja cheekh cheekh ke faryaad kar raha hai us zulm kii...
wahhh.. kia baat hai.. Hats off...!
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Rajeev Bhai Aadaab ... !

Janab kafi sanjeedgi hai aapke khayaaloN meiN ... and opposite gender thinking meiN bhi aapne khoob vichaar vyakt kiye haiN...

Naari utpidan aur samajh meiN phelti vahsiyat ko khoob darshaya hai aapne ...
Is umdaa rachna par meri daad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez ...


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bahot khoob Rajeev bhai.................... likhte rahiye

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Namaskaar SDC..............

aap sabhi ki nazar ek nyi aur chhoti si koshish ......
umeed hai aap sabhi ko zarur pasNd aayegi.........

meraa makashd kisi ke dil ko thesh pahuNchaanaa nhi hai
balki wo peedaa wyakat karni chahi hai jo us dour se guzar rahi naari ki hoti hai
ye bhaav us naari ke hai jo ye sab sahti hai...



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BaateN har taraf ye aam hoti rahi
maiN wahaN roz badnaam hoti rahi

saraa qasoor mere huSn ka thaa
aur maiN pal pal nilaam hoti rahi

jisne bhi kharidaa usine maslaa mujhe
maiN aaj eski to kal uski gulaam hoti rhi

pyaar ki taraaju meiN na tolaa kisi ne
dil ki hasrateN khaak tamaam hoti rahi

khushi ka suraj muqaddar ko kahaN nasib ?
badnaam galiyoN meiN subah-shaam hoti rhi....!!







Rajeev ji.....aapke kalaam ke liye mere paas koi lafz nahi hai....simply superb !


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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!! Rajeev bhai,,,

Kia baat hai.. bohat hi sangeen pehlu se ru-ba-ru karaya hai..
lab-o-lehja cheekh cheekh ke faryaad kar raha hai us zulm kii...
wahhh.. kia baat hai.. Hats off...!
you deserved reputation beyond reputation for these awesome thoughts!

Likhty rahiye,,

Regards,

Hassan bhaai..............
bahut bahut shukriyaa........................apnaa sath yuN hi banaaye rakheN..


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Rajeev Bhai Aadaab ... !

Janab kafi sanjeedgi hai aapke khayaaloN meiN ... and opposite gender thinking meiN bhi aapne khoob vichaar vyakt kiye haiN...

Naari utpidan aur samajh meiN phelti vahsiyat ko khoob darshaya hai aapne ...
Is umdaa rachna par meri daad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez ...


aapko bahut dino ke baad yahan dekhaa hai ...
bahut khushi hui.....
apnaa kimti waqt dene aur rachnaa ko padne kaa bahut bahut shukriyaa...
aage bhi yun hi aate rahiyegaa................


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bahut hee najuk ehsaas vyakt kiye hai aapne rajeev jee......reps.added.......



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Rajeev ji.....aapke kalaam ke liye mere paas koi lafz nahi hai....simply superb !

Sunita ji namskaar
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Bahut hi badiyaa...rajeev sahab
kya khub likha hai apne aur bahut hi acchhi soch bhi aapki....
sahi kaha bhi aapne kuch cheejo ko hum dekhteto par mahsoos nahi karte..
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Bohot khoob rajeev bhai....
Apna dard to koi bhi jafjo me tabdeel kar sakta hai.....
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Bahut hi badiyaa...rajeev sahab
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sahi kaha bhi aapne kuch cheejo ko hum dekhteto par mahsoos nahi karte..
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Vinay ji bahut bahut shukriyaa...................................


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Ek bebas abla ka marmik chitran itne sunder shabdon meiN kiya aapne ..Rajeev ji'


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Rajeev ji, Namaskar..!
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