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bahot jalaa hai dil mera................ - 28th February 2017, 11:05 PM


Ye kaun merii Chashm-e-tar me rahtaa hai,
thakaa huaa sa hai phir bhii safar me rahtaa hai.

use ye shouk hai har shakhs uskii baat kare,
use ye hai khabar wo kis khabar me rahta hai.

merii kitaab ke har warq me wo shaamil hai,
wo merii ziist ki shaamo sahar me rahtaa hai.

wo husn ki koii misaal hai is duniyaa meN,
wo roshni kii tarah har nazar me rahtaa hai.

wo mujh ko dhuunD raha hai sunaa hai sahraa meN,
use bataa do ke aashiq shahar me rahtaa hai.

bahot jalaa hai dil miraa veeraan raaton meN,
charaaG saa koii mere bhii ghar me rahtaa hai


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Ye kaun merii Chashm-e-tar me rahtaa hai,
thakaa huaa sa hai phir bhii safar me rahtaa hai.

use ye shouk hai har shakhs uskii baat kare,
use ye hai khabar wo kis khabar me rahta hai.

merii kitaab ke har warq me wo shaamil hai,
wo merii ziist ki shaamo sahar me rahtaa hai.

wo husn ki koii misaal hai is duniyaa meN,
wo roshni kii tarah har nazar me rahtaa hai.

wo mujh ko dhuunD raha hai sunaa hai sahraa meN,
use bataa do ke aashiq shahar me rahtaa hai.

bahot jalaa hai dil miraa veeraan raaton meN,
charaaG saa koii mere bhii ghar me rahtaa hai


Shaad.....
Subhan Allah..... Khoobsoorat...Ashaar kya khoob ehsaas liye huye hain....

merii kitaab ke har warq me wo shaamil hai,
wo merii ziist ki shaamo sahar me rahtaa hai.

Kya baat hai...Waahhh!!!!

Bahot sari daad qubool Karein meri taraf SE...
Aur aise hee Likhte rahein...

Madhu


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Subhan Allah..... Khoobsoorat...Ashaar kya khoob ehsaas liye huye hain....

merii kitaab ke har warq me wo shaamil hai,
wo merii ziist ki shaamo sahar me rahtaa hai.

Kya baat hai...Waahhh!!!!

Bahot sari daad qubool Karein meri taraf SE...
Aur aise hee Likhte rahein...

Madhu

bahot bahot shukriyaa tashreef laane ke liye Madhu saahiba aur aapne kalaam ke aashar pasand kiye meri khushnaseebi hai.......

aatii rahiega

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Shaad Khoobsurat Rachna.Daad kabul karna.

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Ye kaun merii Chashm-e-tar me rahtaa hai,
thakaa huaa sa hai phir bhii safar me rahtaa hai.

use ye shouk hai har shakhs uskii baat kare,
use ye hai khabar wo kis khabar me rahta hai.

merii kitaab ke har warq me wo shaamil hai,
wo merii ziist ki shaamo sahar me rahtaa hai.

wo husn ki koii misaal hai is duniyaa meN,
wo roshni kii tarah har nazar me rahtaa hai.

wo mujh ko dhuunD raha hai sunaa hai sahraa meN,
use bataa do ke aashiq shahar me rahtaa hai.

bahot jalaa hai dil miraa veeraan raaton meN,
charaaG saa koii mere bhii ghar me rahtaa hai


Shaad.....
Waah Shaad bhai umdaa kya khoob rawaangii hai mazaa aa gaya ek sher jo dil ke jyaadaa qareeb raha

use ye shouk hai har shakhs uskii baat kare,
use ye hai khabar wo kis khabar me rahta hai

Bahut khoob daad qubool farmaiyee aur likhte rahiyee


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Ye kaun merii Chashm-e-tar me rahtaa hai,
thakaa huaa sa hai phir bhii safar me rahtaa hai.

use ye shouk hai har shakhs uskii baat kare,
use ye hai khabar wo kis khabar me rahta hai.

merii kitaab ke har warq me wo shaamil hai,
wo merii ziist ki shaamo sahar me rahtaa hai.

wo husn ki koii misaal hai is duniyaa meN,
wo roshni kii tarah har nazar me rahtaa hai.

wo mujh ko dhuunD raha hai sunaa hai sahraa meN,
use bataa do ke aashiq shahar me rahtaa hai.

bahot jalaa hai dil miraa veeraan raaton meN,
charaaG saa koii mere bhii ghar me rahtaa hai


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Shaad bhai....bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai...accha lga pad kar
yeh sher to bahuttttt hi khaas lga:

bahot jalaa hai dil miraa veeraan raaton meN,
charaaG saa koii mere bhii ghar me rahtaa hai

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Waah Shaad bhai umdaa kya khoob rawaangii hai mazaa aa gaya ek sher jo dil ke jyaadaa qareeb raha

use ye shouk hai har shakhs uskii baat kare,
use ye hai khabar wo kis khabar me rahta hai

Bahut khoob daad qubool farmaiyee aur likhte rahiyee
aapki inaayat o mehrbaani ke lie dil ki gahraaiyon se aapka shukrguzaar hoon bhai........ aate rahiyegaa aur apna khayaal rakhiyegaa

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Shaad bhai....bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai...accha lga pad kar
yeh sher to bahuttttt hi khaas lga:

bahot jalaa hai dil miraa veeraan raaton meN,
charaaG saa koii mere bhii ghar me rahtaa hai
thanks alot dee........ sach kahun to is ghazal ka sabse pasandeeda sher meraa bhii yahi hai........ bahut acha laga aapko bazm me dekh kar.. aati rahiyegaa

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