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Reh E Zeest......eik adnaa kaavish... -
1st August 2009, 01:27 PM
Na raahon men ujaala na manzil ka nishaan
na sang humsafar koi , na sar pe saiybaan hud'e nigaah talak bass tanhaiyaan qadam qadam larkharaa rahee hei lamha lamha sata rahee hie dilko bekhaataa dukha rahee hei dum bhar ko sans lene dey aiy zindagee jaanae tu kahan liyae jaa rahee hei................. kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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1st August 2009, 11:36 PM
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aa gaya aap ka dost....... aise hee likhati rahiye dil se daad qubool farmaaye regards manu |
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2nd August 2009, 04:21 PM
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Aapki adna si kavish ne bahut kuch kaha hai so nice... ek tanha zindagii ko bayan karti yeh kavish bahut gehrii lagii gar yeh adna na ho mukammal hoti to maza aa jata... Wel likhate rahiye... Khush rahiye......... Khuda Hafez.......... 
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3rd August 2009, 10:30 AM
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aaiye, sarkaar-e-aalii, aaiye kaisi hai.n aap? ummeed hai khairiyat se ho.ngii... aap ki yeh mukhtasar nazm... kyaa kahane!.. khayaal kyaa hai alfaaz ke moti piroye hai.n... behad behad asardaar, lafzo.n me.n wohii dard wohii be-basii........ aaj bohat dino ke baad kuchh aisa paDhne ko milaa, jis ke ehsaas paDhte hi paDhne waale ke dil par qaabiz ho jaaye...... yuu.n likhti rahe.n... daad haazir hai... mayank reps +++ |
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5th August 2009, 11:10 PM
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karam ke ap ne is tehreerr ko pasand farmaiya Due Respects MahamAzmi kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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5th August 2009, 11:12 PM
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Adnaa ka opposite MUKAMAL nahi hoa karta ADNA means arzaan trivial...its a humble way of putting up a post jaahan tak iske mukamal hone ki baat hei to kahan apko ye namukamal aur kyunkar lagee zaroor batayae ga shayed zaroori nahi ke mufacal tehreer mukhtacar na ho hie na? :-) Due Respects, Maham Azmi kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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5th August 2009, 11:13 PM
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hazrat aap sada hee daad mein mubalghe se kaam leke maham ko sharmsar kar dete hein hamree tehreron ki hamaree tarha wuqat hee kahan jaanab Beharkaif ap se sukhanshanaas ne isko is laiq jana ke apni qeemtee araa'a se navaza iske liye hum tahe dilse shukrguzar thehare apke... Due Respects, MahamAzmi kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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6th August 2009, 01:16 AM
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aadaab Maham go yeh aap ba'khoobi jaanti haiN ke aapki har kaavish ko padhna mere liye moti baTorne jaise hai aur yeh nazm bhi usi may'aar ki mooNh bolii dastaan hai aap ek muddat ke baad yahaaN tashreef layiiN aur is mehfil ki raunak badhaayi iske liye maiN tah-e-dil se aapka karzdaar huuN.....aapne jo maan rakha hai uska mol denaa mere bas ki baat nahiiN hai ummiid hai ke ab aap aati raheNgii aur ehbaab ko in motiiyoN se nawaaztii raheNgii is purasar nazm par daad pesh-e-khidmat hai....tasleem farmaiiye rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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6th August 2009, 08:09 AM
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Maham Bhai......bahut khub likha hai aapne....Zindgi ke kareeb ka ehsaas.....nice creation.....likhte rahiye....aate rahiye...khush rahiye....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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6th August 2009, 02:45 PM
Shukriya is ko daad se navazne ke liye
Aazami Jii AadaaB.... Aapne gar merii daad ko ek hazeriN kii daad samjh kabool kiya ho to mujhe khushi hogii...... Adnaa ka opposite MUKAMAL nahi hoa karta ADNA means arzaan trivial...its a humble way of putting up a post Main yahan sikhane hi aaya hun so ek aur baat sikhi thanks for giving knowlege... jaahan tak iske mukamal hone ki baat hei to kahan apko ye namukamal aur kyunkar lagee zaroor batayae ga Jii main koi shayar to nahi huN magar meri murad mukammal se yeh nahi thi ke ismeiN koi khami hai.... bus main yehi kehna chaha ke gar aap is kavish ko aur aage badhate to aur bhi maza aa jata...... I mean ek aadh stanza aur juda dete toH se hai.... shayed zaroori nahi ke mufacal tehreer mukhtacar na ho hie na? :-) TaHreer ko mukammal aur mukhtasar rakhana yeH to likhane wale per yaa uske khayaloN per hai......... Wel I don't understand what are you saying..... Due Respects, Maham Azmi Khush rahiye.. Khuda Hafez...
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8th August 2009, 05:22 PM
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Navazish in khaak ke zarhon ko motyion ka naam dene ka ye mehaz apki zarahnavazi hei aur kuch bhi nahi Hum apni aur apni tehreeron ki wuqat se bakhubi waaqif hein waslaam, MahamAzmi kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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8th August 2009, 05:23 PM
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Shukriya daad se navaazne ke liye hazrat, By the way I m not a male I m a female...(MAHAM ka matlab hei mera chaand) its a female name :-) but alll the same thanx for all ur kind wordz Maham Azmi kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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8th August 2009, 05:44 PM
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Never mind the explaination , Thanx hazaroun guilistan for all ur kind wordz here  kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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