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Originally Posted by kwahish
Aazmi jii...... AadaaB
Aapki adna si kavish ne bahut kuch kaha hai so nice... ek tanha zindagii ko bayan karti yeh kavish bahut gehrii lagii gar yeh adna na ho mukammal hoti to maza aa jata...
Wel likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye.........
Khuda Hafez..........
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Shukriya is ko daad se navazne ke liye
Adnaa ka opposite MUKAMAL nahi hoa karta
ADNA means arzaan trivial...its a humble way of putting up a post
jaahan tak iske mukamal hone ki baat hei to kahan apko ye namukamal aur kyunkar lagee zaroor batayae ga
shayed zaroori nahi ke mufacal tehreer mukhtacar na ho
hie na?
:-)
Due Respects,
Maham Azmi
ye dil soye hoay jazbon ka hei aisa mehal jis mein
kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana
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eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska
vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka
mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa
kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka