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"Deep" se khataa-e-jawaaNii ho gaii - 1st August 2009, 09:44 PM

Sabhi SDC doston ko mera aadaab ,

Aaj bahut dino baad ek aur koshish aapki nazar kar rahi hu .... hamesha ki tarah aap sab ese aapni raaye ke saath navazeeye .. galaltoyaan hain woh bhi zarror baatiyega .. bahut seekhne ko milega ..

[I]==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==

bichad gaye to kahaNii ho gaii
guzre lamhoN ki zubaanii ho gaii

dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii

ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
mein to teri deewaNii ho gaii

masoomiyaat ke ho gaye shikaar
zindagi meN kaisii nadaaNi ho gaii

pal ki doori bhi sahi na jaaey
aisi tumse zindagaaNii ho gaii

tumhaiN chahne ki mil gaii saza
"Deep" se khataa-e-jawaaNii ho gaii

==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==

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bichad gaye to kahaNii ho gaii
guzre lamhoN ki zubaanii ho gaii

dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii

ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
mein to teri deewaNii ho gaii

masoomiyaat ke ho gaye shikaar
zindagi meN kaisii nadaaNi ho gaii

pal ki doori bhi sahi na jaaey
aisi tumse zindagaaNii ho gaii

tumhaiN chahne ki mil gaii saza
"Deep" se khataa-e-jawaaNii ho gaii

==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==

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Smile wonderful mandy - 2nd August 2009, 12:39 AM

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Sabhi SDC doston ko mera aadaab ,

Aaj bahut dino baad ek aur koshish aapki nazar kar rahi hu .... hamesha ki tarah aap sab ese aapni raaye ke saath navazeeye .. galaltoyaan hain woh bhi zarror baatiyega .. bahut seekhne ko milega ..

[I]==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==

bichad gaye to kahaNii ho gaii
guzre lamhoN ki zubaanii ho gaii

dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii

ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
mein to teri deewaNii ho gaii

masoomiyaat ke ho gaye shikaar
zindagi meN kaisii nadaaNi ho gaii

pal ki doori bhi sahi na jaaey
aisi tumse zindagaaNii ho gaii

tumhaiN chahne ki mil gaii saza
"Deep" se khataa-e-jawaaNii ho gaii

==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==

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waah waah mandy waah aap ki ghazale to din-b-din nikharati jaa rahi hai
yeh kiski sangat ka asar hai?...........

bahut khoob likha hai
aise hee likhati rahiye
daado ke phool haazir hai

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Sabhi SDC doston ko mera aadaab ,

Aaj bahut dino baad ek aur koshish aapki nazar kar rahi hu .... hamesha ki tarah aap sab ese aapni raaye ke saath navazeeye .. galaltoyaan hain woh bhi zarror baatiyega .. bahut seekhne ko milega ..


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bichad gaye to kahaNii ho gaii
guzre lamhoN ki zubaanii ho gaii

dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii

ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
mein to teri deewaNii ho gaii

masoomiyaat ke ho gaye shikaar
zindagi meN kaisii nadaaNi ho gaii

pal ki doori bhi sahi na jaaey
aisi tumse zindagaaNii ho gaii

tumhaiN chahne ki mil gaii saza
"Deep" se khataa-e-jawaaNii ho gaii

==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==

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Mandeep Jii ....

Kaisi hai aap? aapki zubani ka asar hai ke haal chal puch liya...

Wah aapki gazal behad khoob lagi.... aap kafi achcha likhane lagi hai....

Likhate rahiye..
Khush rahiye..

masoomiyaat ke ho gaye shikaar
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Naresh jee..

bahut bahut shukriya ..aapke honsla ki shukarguzaar hu .. dua karti hu yu hi saath dete rahye ...aur miein bhi koshish karugi hamesha kuch aacha pesh karu

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Manish jee
kaise hain aap? sangat to hazir hai bas aaj kal tum hi gayab hote ho? waise yeh haal raha ho shaadi ki baad tumhara kya hoga..hehehe( just kidding)

Hmmmm koshish toh karti rehti hu .. tumhe koshish pasand aayi aahca laga

yu hi saath dete rahye

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Sameer jii,

jii bahut bahut shukriya ... yu hi saath dete rahaye..

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Sabhi SDC doston ko mera aadaab ,

Aaj bahut dino baad ek aur koshish aapki nazar kar rahi hu .... hamesha ki tarah aap sab ese aapni raaye ke saath navazeeye .. galaltoyaan hain woh bhi zarror baatiyega .. bahut seekhne ko milega ..

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bichad gaye to kahaNii ho gaii
guzre lamhoN ki zubaanii ho gaii

dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii

ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
mein to teri deewaNii ho gaii

masoomiyaat ke ho gaye shikaar
zindagi meN kaisii nadaaNi ho gaii

pal ki doori bhi sahi na jaaey
aisi tumse zindagaaNii ho gaii

tumhaiN chahne ki mil gaii saza
"Deep" se khataa-e-jawaaNii ho gaii

==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==

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Bahut maasoomiyat dikhti hai hamein iss kalaam main...!

Accha lagaa hamein isse parhkar, Mandy Ji...!

Likhte rahein aur apna khayaal bhi rakhein,ok...?

Duaaon ke saath



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Sabhi SDC doston ko mera aadaab ,

Aaj bahut dino baad ek aur koshish aapki nazar kar rahi hu .... hamesha ki tarah aap sab ese aapni raaye ke saath navazeeye .. galaltoyaan hain woh bhi zarror baatiyega .. bahut seekhne ko milega ..

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bichad gaye to kahaNii ho gaii
guzre lamhoN ki zubaanii ho gaii

dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii

ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
mein to teri deewaNii ho gaii

masoomiyaat ke ho gaye shikaar
zindagi meN kaisii nadaaNi ho gaii

pal ki doori bhi sahi na jaaey
aisi tumse zindagaaNii ho gaii

tumhaiN chahne ki mil gaii saza
"Deep" se khataa-e-jawaaNii ho gaii

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Lajawab dost......bahot khub
Sorry der se padh rahi hun aapki ye ghazal par padhne ke baad aisa laga ki kayi dino baad kuch asardaar padha hai...... 2 gud yaar
keep up.....keep writing

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bichad gaye to kahaNii ho gaii
guzre lamhoN ki zubaanii ho gaii

dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii

ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
mein to teri deewaNii ho gaii

masoomiyaat ke ho gaye shikaar
zindagi meN kaisii nadaaNi ho gaii

pal ki doori bhi sahi na jaaey
aisi tumse zindagaaNii ho gaii

tumhaiN chahne ki mil gaii saza
"Deep" se khataa-e-jawaaNii ho gaii
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dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii

ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
mein to teri deewaNii ho gaii
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Oye Mandeep??

ki hoya tenu?? inna changa vi koi likhda hai??? pardon my punjabi.. d above quoted stanzas r just too gud... god bless u... khush rahiye...


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Sabhi SDC doston ko mera aadaab ,

Aaj bahut dino baad ek aur koshish aapki nazar kar rahi hu .... hamesha ki tarah aap sab ese aapni raaye ke saath navazeeye .. galaltoyaan hain woh bhi zarror baatiyega .. bahut seekhne ko milega ..

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bichad gaye to kahaNii ho gaii
guzre lamhoN ki zubaanii ho gaii

dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii

ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
mein to teri deewaNii ho gaii

masoomiyaat ke ho gaye shikaar
zindagi meN kaisii nadaaNi ho gaii

pal ki doori bhi sahi na jaaey
aisi tumse zindagaaNii ho gaii

tumhaiN chahne ki mil gaii saza
"Deep" se khataa-e-jawaaNii ho gaii

==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==

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dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii

Mandeep Ji,

Aap ki ghazal be-had khobsorat hai,
Mujhe boht pasand aayi...

Aisay hi likhtay rahiye,

GOD BLESS YOU,


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Dear mani di
kaisi ho ..?
miss u lot

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bichad gaye to kahaNii ho gaii
guzre lamhoN ki zubaanii ho gaii

-wah di bahot khub

dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii

-daad kabul kijiye is sher keliye

ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
mein to teri deewaNii ho gaii

-kya kahn jee dil loot liya aapne

masoomiyaat ke ho gaye shikaar
zindagi meN kaisii nadaaNi ho gaii

pal ki doori bhi sahi na jaaey
aisi tumse zindagaaNii ho gaii
kisse ..?

tumhaiN chahne ki mil gaii saza
"Deep" se khataa-e-jawaaNii ho gaii
-wah wah

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youn hi kahte rahiye
mahfil ko aabaad karte rahiye
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ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
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Oye Mann.....

Kise dedicate kiya hai yeh??

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Danny jii,

aapko es kalam mein dekh kar bahut khushi hue .. lagta hai mein mehnaat safaal ho gaii hai .. fir se koshish pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya ...

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Derest Angel,

Thanx alot sweetie..no sorry dear dheer aaye dursust aaye ... so no prob ...
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Uday deep ji,

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Pradhyuman jii,

Haan jii jeee menu hoya te kucjh nahi .. jii kujj likhan di koshish keetii c.. chnaga lagiya tuhanu ethey dekh ke....

eda hi saath dende reho ...

aapna khayal rakheo ....

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Sabhi SDC doston ko mera aadaab ,

Aaj bahut dino baad ek aur koshish aapki nazar kar rahi hu .... hamesha ki tarah aap sab ese aapni raaye ke saath navazeeye .. galaltoyaan hain woh bhi zarror baatiyega .. bahut seekhne ko milega ..

[I]==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==

bichad gaye to kahaNii ho gaii
guzre lamhoN ki zubaanii ho gaii

dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii

ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
mein to teri deewaNii ho gaii

masoomiyaat ke ho gaye shikaar
zindagi meN kaisii nadaaNi ho gaii

pal ki doori bhi sahi na jaaey
aisi tumse zindagaaNii ho gaii

tumhaiN chahne ki mil gaii saza
"Deep" se khataa-e-jawaaNii ho gaii

==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==

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Mandeep jii,
Aadaab!!!

Kaisi haiN aap?
Bahut badhiya andaaz se aapne apne ehsaasoN ko byaaN kiya hai.... Padh ke waqie meiN mazaa aaya.
Saare sheyr achhe bane haiN aur mujhe khoob pasand bhi aaye...khaas taur pe neeche waalaa sheyr:

dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
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Iss sheyr se Kuch aise ehsaasoN ko shaql mili hai ki ik jumbish sii huii mann ke andar.
Bahut achha likha hai aur aage aise hi likhti rahiye....
Uss Deen-e-illahi se aapki kalam ko nazaakat bakhshne ki dua ke saath ijaazat leta hooN....

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Shipra ji,,

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Dearest Diya..

Thanx alot sweetie .. its always ncie to see u ...

Miss u too

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bichad gaye to kahaNii ho gaii
guzre lamhoN ki zubaanii ho gaii

dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii

ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
mein to teri deewaNii ho gaii

masoomiyaat ke ho gaye shikaar
zindagi meN kaisii nadaaNi ho gaii

pal ki doori bhi sahi na jaaey
aisi tumse zindagaaNii ho gaii

tumhaiN chahne ki mil gaii saza
"Deep" se khataa-e-jawaaNii ho gaii

==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==*==

Aapki
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aapke shabdo ki kashish ne man ko moha liya.......

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Purvii ji,

Thanx alot jii... waise dedicate to kisi ko nahi kiya ...!!!

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Kya baat hain Mandeep Jee..........mujhe pura yaqeen hain ke aapko likhna bohat bohatttttttt achcha lagta hain. Aapki khushi aapke shero me saf nazar aati hain. Allah kare aap kabhi likhna bandh na kare aur hamesha khush rahe.....


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Vikram ji,

Aadaab !!!

mein toh bikul theek hu .... meri koshish per aapko dekh kar aacha laga .... pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya ....

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