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Love Hum jab kho jayenge...... - 4th August 2009, 01:02 PM

Jiss din hogi usko meri Mohabbat ki kadar..
Uss din hum khudaya shukar manayenge,

Woh ro rahi hogi apne dil par
Hum yaadon mein reh reh kar usse tadpayenge,

shayad unhein abhi kadar nhi meri Mohabbat ki,
Par door hone ke baad wahi meri tasveer ko seene se lagayenge,

Dekh lena aye khuda tu bhi bahut royega uss din,
Jab hum tanhai ke aansu liye teri mehphil me gajal sunayenge,

Guroor toot jayega uss hushn ka khud hi ek din....
Jab haste hue hum shamshano ki dhool mein kahin kho jayenge.
•Deep•

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Love 4th August 2009, 01:30 PM

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Jiss din hogi usko meri Mohabbat ki kadar..
Uss din hum khudaya shukar manayenge,

Woh ro rahi hogi apne dil par
Hum yaadon mein reh reh kar usse tadpayenge,

shayad unhein abhi kadar nhi meri Mohabbat ki,
Par door hone ke baad wahi meri tasveer ko seene se lagayenge,

Dekh lena aye khuda tu bhi bahut royega uss din,
Jab hum tanhai ke aansu liye teri mehphil me gajal sunayenge,

Guroor toot jayega uss hushn ka khud hi ek din....
Jab haste hue hum shamshano ki dhool mein kahin kho jayenge.
•Deep•

beautiful lines.....good going
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Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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4th August 2009, 01:34 PM

thanx praneeta ... thank you so much.
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17th September 2009, 05:20 PM

DEEP G
Mere paas alfaaz nhi kya kahu mera dil bhar aya bs itna kaise dil ki baatien shabdo me byaan kar lete hai..........

so so nice of you
GOD BLESS YOU
GOD IS ALWAYS WITH YOU BCOZ YOU HAVE TRUE LOVE
KEHTE HAIN JO SACCHA PYAAR HOTA HAI WO KBHI NHI MILTA

SACCHA PYAAAAR
SIRF KHWAAB KI DUNIYA.........

ASI VI KISE NU PYAAR KITA SI
PYAAR VI BESHUMAAR KITA SI
ODO MUK GYI SADHI JINDGI JDO
OHNE KYA ASI KISE TO BADLA LAIN LAI TENU ISTEMAAL KITA SI.........
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17th September 2009, 05:24 PM

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DEEP G
Mere paas alfaaz nhi kya kahu mera dil bhar aya bs itna kaise dil ki baatien shabdo me byaan kar lete hai..........

so so nice of you
GOD BLESS YOU
GOD IS ALWAYS WITH YOU BCOZ YOU HAVE TRUE LOVE
KEHTE HAIN JO SACCHA PYAAR HOTA HAI WO KBHI NHI MILTA

SACCHA PYAAAAR
SIRF KHWAAB KI DUNIYA.........

ASI VI KISE NU PYAAR KITA SI
PYAAR VI BESHUMAAR KITA SI
ODO MUK GYI SADHI JINDGI JDO
OHNE KYA ASI KISE TO BADLA LAIN LAI TENU ISTEMAAL KITA SI.........
Sach kahaa hai aapne saccha pyaar ek khwaab ki tareh hota hai jo kabhi poora nahi hota... aapko bhi ehsaas hai ki kya hota hai ye pyaar .. bas ab kisi tareh ye Jindagi tanha kat jaye ... mere liye itni dua kariyega .. aapka dost Deep
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17th September 2009, 05:35 PM

pyaar karna bahut aasaan hai..
nibhana mushkil''''
dil todna bahut aasaan hai..
lgana mushkil'''''

isi tarha likhte rahieyega.............
hum aapke saath hain aap tanha nhi

muskurate rahiye
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17th September 2009, 05:39 PM

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pyaar karna bahut aasaan hai..
nibhana mushkil''''
dil todna bahut aasaan hai..
lgana mushkil'''''

isi tarha likhte rahieyega.............
hum aapke saath hain aap tanha nhi

muskurate rahiye
sahi kaha hai aapne ... aasha hai ki aage apne naye shabdo se main khush rakhunga .. maeri koshish yahi hai ki apne dil ke jazbaat aap doston ke saamne pesh karun ... thanx once again tk care..
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Aadaab..dosto... - 19th September 2009, 04:38 PM

DIL KI BAAT TO YE DIL HI JAANE

DIL TANHA REH GYA AAYA NA KOI ISE MNANE
ROOH TARASTI REH GYI AAYA NA KOI PYAAR JTAANE
KAISE REHTE HAIN UNKE BIN YE TO KHUDA HI JAANE
HUM TO TANHA REH GYE USKI KHUSHI K BAHANE........
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19th September 2009, 06:49 PM

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Jiss din hogi usko meri Mohabbat ki kadar..
Uss din hum khudaya shukar manayenge,

Woh ro rahi hogi apne dil par
Hum yaadon mein reh reh kar usse tadpayenge,

shayad unhein abhi kadar nhi meri Mohabbat ki,
Par door hone ke baad wahi meri tasveer ko seene se lagayenge,

Dekh lena aye khuda tu bhi bahut royega uss din,
Jab hum tanhai ke aansu liye teri mehphil me gajal sunayenge,

Guroor toot jayega uss hushn ka khud hi ek din....
Jab haste hue hum shamshano ki dhool mein kahin kho jayenge.
•Deep•
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keep writing

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19th September 2009, 07:23 PM

Deep ji........achi soch nazar aai aapki koshsih mai.......ehsaason gehraai bhi dikhti hai....ek sahi koshish........likhte rahiye......khush rahiye.......




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Deep ji........achi soch nazar aai aapki koshsih mai.......ehsaason gehraai bhi dikhti hai....ek sahi koshish........likhte rahiye......khush rahiye.......



" Kehne ko woh shakhs muddaton mere saath rahaa
Jab gaya toh uske aur mere beech faasla bahut thaa..."


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24th September 2009, 04:12 PM

VISHWAAS BANKAR JINDAGI ME AATE HAIN WOH..
KHWAAB BANKAR AANKHO ME SMAA JATE HAIN WOH..
PEHLE TO YAKEEN DILATE HAIN WO HMARE HAIN..
FIR JAANE KYU TANHA BNA JAATE HAIN WOH..........


YE ISHQ NHI AASAAN YARO...
EK AAG KA DARIYA HAI AUR DOOB K JAANA HAI !!
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24th September 2009, 04:18 PM

HELLO...
ARZ KIYA HAI JUDAI KA HAAL...


TERI QURBAT MILI, PAR TERA SAHARA NA MILA****
KAREEB PAHUNCH KAR BHI MANJIL KA KINARA NA MILA***
DEKHTA RHA GAUR SE MAIN HATHELI APNI****
MAGAR MUJHE APNI KISMAT KA SITARA NA MILA*****



KHUSH RAHIYE!!!
MUSKURATE RAHIYE !!
AKELE TUM HI WFA NA NIBHATE JAO..
DUSRO KO BHI JAROOR AZMAATE RAHIYE !!!




REPLY JAROOR KARIYEGA


YE ISHQ NHI AASAAN YARO...
EK AAG KA DARIYA HAI AUR DOOB K JAANA HAI !!
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29th September 2009, 03:13 PM

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TERI QURBAT MILI, PAR TERA SAHARA NA MILA****
KAREEB PAHUNCH KAR BHI MANJIL KA KINARA NA MILA***

DEKHTA RHA GAUR SE MAIN HATHELI APNI****
MAGAR MUJHE APNI KISMAT KA SITARA NA MILA*****



KHUSH RAHIYE!!!
MUSKURATE RAHIYE !!
AKELE TUM HI WFA NA NIBHATE JAO..
DUSRO KO BHI JAROOR AZMAATE RAHIYE !!!




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Hi dear good thoughts...
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29th September 2009, 03:16 PM

Guroor toot jayega uss hushn ka khud hi ek din....
Jab haste hue hum shamshano ki dhool mein kahin kho jayenge.


Deep Ji,
Boht khobsorat likha hai aap ne,

Aisey hi likhtay rahiye

GOD BLESS YOU,


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30th September 2009, 12:56 PM

Hi

it's truly very beautiful... Your words beaded like pure pearls. Dilwale dil lag bethey hai... Lekhin is zamane mein kadhar iske nahin hai. Pooch Lo is chote se dil se, dil lagane ke bhool kya hoti hai.

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5th October 2009, 05:43 PM

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Guroor toot jayega uss hushn ka khud hi ek din....
Jab haste hue hum shamshano ki dhool mein kahin kho jayenge.


Deep Ji,
Boht khobsorat likha hai aap ne,

Aisey hi likhtay rahiye

GOD BLESS YOU,



Us ke Ishq mein Bheeg Ke Humko ye ehsaas hua,
Dil ki Baat mein aanay wale kuch kuch pagal hote hain...



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it's truly very beautiful... Your words beaded like pure pearls. Dilwale dil lag bethey hai... Lekhin is zamane mein kadhar iske nahin hai. Pooch Lo is chote se dil se, dil lagane ke bhool kya hoti hai.

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thankx a lotttt .......... .....
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5th October 2009, 11:59 PM

Deep jiii,

Good work ..keep posting

take care

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Good work ..keep posting

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