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Kabhi sochuN kyuN naa chahuN Main Tujhe - 14th September 2009, 06:36 PM

Kabhi sochuN kyuN naa chahuN Main Tujhe
BHooL Kar Jo BHoola Naa PauN Main Tujhe

Waade Tode Kasme Todi Chor Gaye Mujhe
KyuN KaR PhiR AB YAaD AAuN MaiN TujHe

AaNa Hai TO AA TeRI MaRZiI MaiRA KYA
Gaye Ho Tum To KyuN bulaauN Main Tujhe

Hun main tanha tere Intezar mein Ab Talak
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe

Itna To BaTa DeY Aye AhsaaN Gard MaiRe
KiS TarHa PYaR TeRa LauTauN Main Tujhe

Samjhte nahi tum jane kyun is dil ki baaten
KYa Cheer Ke Dil ApNa DikhauN MaiN Tujhe

HasraT Hai Teri Sirf Teri Hi Mujhe Kwahish
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe


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14th September 2009, 08:47 PM

Sameer ji.......aap hamesha hi acha likhte hai........sochta hu.....taarif ke liye aur kiya naya izaad karu......bahut khub likha aapne.......har sher ek se badke ek hai.......aapki ghazal ke ehsaas khayal jazbaat aur gehraai sabhi umdaa lage mujhe.....aise hi likhte rahiye......khush rahiye.....
Yeh do sher mujhe dil ke bahut kareeb lage......
Waade Tode Kasme Todi Chor Gaye Mujhe
KyuN KaR PhiR AB YAaD AAuN MaiN TujHe
Samjhte nahi tum jane kyun is dil ki baaten
KYa Cheer Ke Dil ApNa DikhauN MaiN Tujhe
SuperB creation.........
daad kabul farmaaye.....




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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15th September 2009, 03:54 PM

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Sameer ji.......aap hamesha hi acha likhte hai........sochta hu.....taarif ke liye aur kiya naya izaad karu......bahut khub likha aapne.......har sher ek se badke ek hai.......aapki ghazal ke ehsaas khayal jazbaat aur gehraai sabhi umdaa lage mujhe.....aise hi likhte rahiye......khush rahiye.....
Yeh do sher mujhe dil ke bahut kareeb lage......
Waade Tode Kasme Todi Chor Gaye Mujhe
KyuN KaR PhiR AB YAaD AAuN MaiN TujHe
Samjhte nahi tum jane kyun is dil ki baaten
KYa Cheer Ke Dil ApNa DikhauN MaiN Tujhe
SuperB creation.........
daad kabul farmaaye.....
Naresh Jii Aadaab

Kaise hai janab, jii itni tarif na kijiye yeh to aap ki zara nawazi hai janab ke aap humara hamesha se saath dete aaye hai.....

Aage bhi aapka saath milta rahe yehi dua..

Khush rahiye aur apna khayal rakhiye
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15th September 2009, 08:29 PM

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Kabhi sochuN kyuN naa chahuN Main Tujhe
BHooL Kar Jo BHoola Naa PauN Main Tujhe

Waade Tode Kasme Todi Chor Gaye Mujhe
KyuN KaR PhiR AB YAaD AAuN MaiN TujHe

AaNa Hai TO AA TeRI MaRZiI MaiRA KYA
Gaye Ho Tum To KyuN bulaauN Main Tujhe

Hun main tanha tere Intezar mein Ab Talak
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe

Itna To BaTa DeY Aye AhsaaN Gard MaiRe
KiS TarHa PYaR TeRa LauTauN Main Tujhe

Samjhte nahi tum jane kyun is dil ki baaten
KYa Cheer Ke Dil ApNa DikhauN MaiN Tujhe

HasraT Hai Teri Sirf Teri Hi Mujhe Kwahish
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe
khwaish sahab......aadaab........

apki ghazal bahut acchi hai.......
bahut sarcastically rumani ghazal hai.......
sare ashaar acche lage..........


yun hi likhte rahiye aur mahfil ki raunaq bane rahiye

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Love ek farz - 17th September 2009, 08:51 AM

Adarniya khwaish ji

daad kabul kijiyega
wakai me aapne alfajo ke maydhaym se apne
bhawana ko bahut khub shabdo se bayaan
kiya hai. sach me tareef ke kabil hai.

bahut aacha .. aise hi koshish karte rahiyega.
khus rahe kaamyaab hote rahe........


ye ashaar aapke liye mere dost ke liye

meri khwaish tere labo par aakar chali gayi jahaan se
mai bade pyar se aaya tha banke aasu armaan se
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khwaish sahab......aadaab........

apki ghazal bahut acchi hai.......
bahut sarcastically rumani ghazal hai.......
sare ashaar acche lage..........


yun hi likhte rahiye aur mahfil ki raunaq bane rahiye

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Zidd sahab Aadaab....

Zidd shaab yeh to aapki zara nawazi hai jo is nacheez ko apni aaraa se Nawazte hai..
Aage bhi aapse housla afzai milti rahe , yehi dua...

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Waade Tode Kasme Todi Chor Gaye Mujhe
KyuN KaR PhiR AB YAaD AAuN MaiN TujHe

AaNa Hai TO AA TeRI MaRZiI MaiRA KYA
Gaye Ho Tum To KyuN bulaauN Main Tujhe

Hun main tanha tere Intezar mein Ab Talak
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe

Itna To BaTa DeY Aye AhsaaN Gard MaiRe
KiS TarHa PYaR TeRa LauTauN Main Tujhe

Samjhte nahi tum jane kyun is dil ki baaten
KYa Cheer Ke Dil ApNa DikhauN MaiN Tujhe

HasraT Hai Teri Sirf Teri Hi Mujhe Kwahish
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe



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Kabhi sochuN kyuN naa chahuN Main Tujhe
BHooL Kar Jo BHoola Naa PauN Main Tujhe

Waade Tode Kasme Todi Chor Gaye Mujhe
KyuN KaR PhiR AB YAaD AAuN MaiN TujHe

AaNa Hai TO AA TeRI MaRZiI MaiRA KYA
Gaye Ho Tum To KyuN bulaauN Main Tujhe

Hun main tanha tere Intezar mein Ab Talak
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe

Itna To BaTa DeY Aye AhsaaN Gard MaiRe
KiS TarHa PYaR TeRa LauTauN Main Tujhe

Samjhte nahi tum jane kyun is dil ki baaten
KYa Cheer Ke Dil ApNa DikhauN MaiN Tujhe
HasraT Hai Teri Sirf Teri Hi Mujhe Kwahish
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe
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Adarniya khwaish ji

daad kabul kijiyega
wakai me aapne alfajo ke maydhaym se apne
bhawana ko bahut khub shabdo se bayaan
kiya hai. sach me tareef ke kabil hai.

bahut aacha .. aise hi koshish karte rahiyega.
khus rahe kaamyaab hote rahe........


ye ashaar aapke liye mere dost ke liye

meri khwaish tere labo par aakar chali gayi jahaan se
mai bade pyar se aaya tha banke aasu armaan se .

Ajay nidaan
Ajay Ji Aadaab......

Aap ko mera likha pasand aaya aur aapne apna kimti waqt nikal ker jo reply kiya iska tahe dil se shukriya, aage bhi aap meri bhawnao ko aur shabd rachnao ko sarahenge ummid hai....

Aapka sher achcha laga...

Aate rahiye, Khush rahiye,


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Thanks Deep, Thank you very much for appriciate, hope you ll enjoy here..
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20th September 2009, 11:54 PM

sameer bhaiya ek aur mast gazal kahi hai apne apki shayari bi ahci lagne lagi hai muze bhot mast... ye sher bhot acha laga..
Samjhte nahi tum jane kyun is dil ki baaten
KYa Cheer Ke Dil ApNa DikhauN MaiN Tujhe


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Thanks Shipra jii... Aap humare kalam per aaye aur apni aara se nawaza iske liye aapka tahe dil se shukriya...

Aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe yehi dua....

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sameer bhaiya ek aur mast gazal kahi hai apne apki shayari bi ahci lagne lagi hai muze bhot mast... ye sher bhot acha laga..
Samjhte nahi tum jane kyun is dil ki baaten
KYa Cheer Ke Dil ApNa DikhauN MaiN Tujhe
Shukriyaa Aabed Bhai...

Yeh to aapki zara nawazi hai ... bande ke kalam mein aapko jaan nazar aati hai..

Aate rahiye ...
Khush rahiye..
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye..
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24th September 2009, 10:43 PM

Ghazab ki Ghazal kah diya aapne sameer jee
dil ki baat ko ba-khu-bi bayaan kar diye aap

Hun main tanha tere Intezar mein Ab Talak
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe

kisiko bula rahe ho jee
aap khud sabko kahte ho sab mujhe bhul gaye
yahan aap dusre ko khud bhulne ki baat kah rahe ho
this is not fair

younhi Ghazal kahte rahiye
khus rahiye

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Ghazab ki Ghazal kah diya aapne sameer jee
dil ki baat ko ba-khu-bi bayaan kar diye aap

Hun main tanha tere Intezar mein Ab Talak
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe

kisiko bula rahe ho jee
aap khud sabko kahte ho sab mujhe bhul gaye
yahan aap dusre ko khud bhulne ki baat kah rahe ho
this is not fair

younhi Ghazal kahte rahiye
khus rahiye

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Jii Aisa hi huN main dil ki baat dil mein nahi rakhta mujhe janne wale baqoobi jante hai mujhe ke main keh deta huN... Yeh to gazal ke madhyam se kaha hai but kisi ke main muh per bhi kehne se nahi hichakta main isliye shayad log mujhe galat bhi samjhte hai...

Jii shayad sach hai ke log mujhe bhool gaye .. aur agar jyada waqt guzar jaye to to main bhi bhool jaungaa kuch aisa hi msg hai is sher mein..

Ek baat samjhi hai maine kya sahin kya galat aur kahan sahiN kahan galat.. is per ek thought bhi hai.. jise maine kuch aisa bana diya hai.." Every thing is fair in love and Life"

Aapka saath bana raha to likhate rahenge..
Aap bhi khush rahiye..
Apna khayal rakhiye..
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27th September 2009, 05:49 PM

Bahut khoob kaafi accha likha hai.....
"Apno ki kuch aisi inayat rahi hai mujhpe,
Ki mai apno ki dosti se jada bharosa dushman ki dushmani pe karta hoon"

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Kabhi sochuN kyuN naa chahuN Main Tujhe
BHooL Kar Jo BHoola Naa PauN Main Tujhe

Waade Tode Kasme Todi Chor Gaye Mujhe
KyuN KaR PhiR AB YAaD AAuN MaiN TujHe

AaNa Hai TO AA TeRI MaRZiI MaiRA KYA
Gaye Ho Tum To KyuN bulaauN Main Tujhe

Hun main tanha tere Intezar mein Ab Talak
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe

Itna To BaTa DeY Aye AhsaaN Gard MaiRe
KiS TarHa PYaR TeRa LauTauN Main Tujhe

Samjhte nahi tum jane kyun is dil ki baaten
KYa Cheer Ke Dil ApNa DikhauN MaiN Tujhe

HasraT Hai Teri Sirf Teri Hi Mujhe Kwahish
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe



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Bahut khoob kaafi accha likha hai.....
"Apno ki kuch aisi inayat rahi hai mujhpe,
Ki mai apno ki dosti se jada bharosa dushman ki dushmani pe karta hoon"
Shab e sher sahab aaaab...

Janab aapne humare post per apni shirkat kar jo hounsla afzai ki hai usk liye shukriya ... aag bhi aapka saath bana rah yehi dua..

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29th September 2009, 03:22 PM

Sameer Ji,

Adaab

Boht khobsorat ehsaasat hain janab,
Acha laga phar kar....

Khush rahiye,

Aisey hi likhtay rahiye,

GOD BLESS YOU,


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6th October 2009, 03:44 PM

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Bahut khoob kaafi accha likha hai.....
"Apno ki kuch aisi inayat rahi hai mujhpe,
Ki mai apno ki dosti se jada bharosa dushman ki dushmani pe karta hoon"
Shab_ sehar saheb aadaab....

Aapko meri adna si koshish pasand aayi main aapka mamnoon huN....
BHai aap jiss shahar se hai woh wakai dil walaon ka shahar hai... Main lakhanow walon ki bahut izzat karta hun, aur aapne sher bhi bahut khoob likha wakai woh bhi kabil e tarif hai.....

Aate rahiye... Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye....

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khoob bhut hi khoob Kwahish sahab waah maza aa gya pad kar kye baat hai dear bhut hi achay

hasrt hai teri sirf teri hi mujhay kwahish
aaja issay pehle ke bhool jaun mein tujhe
Aslam sahab Aadaab.......

Thanks for appriciation, but where aur you bro...... ?
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiyenga ...

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11th October 2009, 03:40 PM

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Kabhi sochuN kyuN naa chahuN Main Tujhe
BHooL Kar Jo BHoola Naa PauN Main Tujhe

Waade Tode Kasme Todi Chor Gaye Mujhe
KyuN KaR PhiR AB YAaD AAuN MaiN TujHe

AaNa Hai TO AA TeRI MaRZiI MaiRA KYA
Gaye Ho Tum To KyuN bulaauN Main Tujhe

Hun main tanha tere Intezar mein Ab Talak
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe

Itna To BaTa DeY Aye AhsaaN Gard MaiRe
KiS TarHa PYaR TeRa LauTauN Main Tujhe

Samjhte nahi tum jane kyun is dil ki baaten
KYa Cheer Ke Dil ApNa DikhauN MaiN Tujhe

HasraT Hai Teri Sirf Teri Hi Mujhe Kwahish
Aaja issay pahele ke bhool jauN Main Tujhe
Very nice, Sameer Ji...! Parh kar badaa accha lagaa...!

Keep it up, ok...?

With blessings



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23rd October 2009, 03:20 PM

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Sameer Ji,

Adaab

Boht khobsorat ehsaasat hain janab,
Acha laga phar kar....

Khush rahiye,

Aisey hi likhtay rahiye,

GOD BLESS YOU,

Hassan sahab Aadaab.........

Aapki hounsla afzai aur tarif ka behad mamnoon huN aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe yehi dua......

Aate rahiye, khush rahiye..
Apna saath banaye rakhiye,
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Very nice, Sameer Ji...! Parh kar badaa accha lagaa...!

Keep it up, ok...?

With blessings

Danny Jii Aadaab..........

Thanks for appriciation.... himmat aur hounsal afzai ke liye tahe dil se mamnoon huN..

Aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe yehi dua...

Khush rahiye..
Apna khayal rakhiye..
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