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Wo jaate jaate apni tasveer le gaya.. -
7th June 2011, 05:39 AM
Wo jaate-jaate apni, tasveer le gaya, Khwaabon ki wo mere, tabeer le gaya! Muflis bhi yaaro mujhse, ab lagte hain ghani, Lagta hai saath wo meri, taqdeer le gaya! Dard-e-dil ki mere..bas ek dawaa thi mai, Uss say bhee wo uskii... taaseer le gayaa! Kya karoon khulaasa, mai apni zindagee ka, Wo kitaab-e-zindagee ki, tafseer le gaya! Wo jaate jaate apni tasveer le gaya, Khwaabon ki wo mere................... |
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7th June 2011, 08:15 AM
Wo jaate-jaate apni, tasveer le gaya,
Khwaabon ki wo mere, tabeer le gaya! Bahut KhoobSurat .........   YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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7th June 2011, 10:34 AM
nice sharing engima..... beaitiful lines.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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Boht Nawazish! |
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Boht Nawazish! -
8th June 2011, 06:20 AM
Adaab Janaab Naresh Mehra Sahab aur Janaab Arvind Saxena Sahab!
Hum boht mashkoor hain aap dono k humari bazm mein tashreef laane per aur phir apni beshkeemti daad se nawaazne per! You are always Welcome here! Khush Rahein! |
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11th June 2011, 02:29 PM
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good one................................. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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A Gargantuan Thank You! |
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A Gargantuan Thank You! -
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A Gigantic Thank You! For Your Kind Appreciation! You're Ever-Welcome Here! Khush Rahein! |
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31st July 2011, 11:18 PM
Read and appreciated by me too, EnigmA Ji...!
Keep writing and sharing With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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1st August 2011, 02:06 AM
Kya karoon khulaasa, mai apni zindagee ka,
Wo kitaab-e-zindagee ki, tafseer le gaya! Good Work. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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1st August 2011, 02:08 AM
Kya karoon khulaasa, mai apni zindagee ka,
Wo kitaab-e-zindagee ki, tafseer le gaya! Good Work. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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bahut arse pehle kuch isi tarz par likhaa tha aabhi mil nahi raha warna link detaa aapko Aapke ashaar aur khyaalat daad ke haqdaar hai aage bhi isi tarah mehfil mein apne nagme barsaate rahiYeGaa -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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