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TPT poll thread January 2016 -
4th February 2016, 09:51 AM
Doston haazir hoon is baar ke poll thread ke saath.... derii se haazir hone ke liye maazrat chahta hoon magar aaj aapke saamen tasweer pe likhi kavitaaen jo pesh ki jaaengii use padh kar aap sab ki naarazgee door ho jaegi ye mujhe yaqeen hai.... to dekhiye neeche hamaari tasweer aur uspe likhi gayee tahreer.....
voting ki aakhri date hai 15 February.
aur ek member kisii ek hi kavitaa ko vote kar sakenge....
shukriyaa.....
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ek khoobsurat sa sher.... -
4th February 2016, 09:53 AM
Kismet to dekhiye yeh Khaanah-badosh ki
kab se maiN gir paRaa huuN, uThaataa nahiiN ko'ii!
BGM ji
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ek behad haseen sa kalaam.... -
4th February 2016, 09:53 AM
Bheega hua sama tha aur taza gulab tha.
Thi aarzoo kisi ki ya toota vo khwaab tha.
Halki si dhoop aur kahiin thodi si chaanv bhi
kudrat hee jane uska ye kaisa hisaab tha.
Us surkh haseen phool ki akhir khata thi kya.
toda gaya use hee kyun na kuch jawaab tha.
gam aur khushi me khushbuyei.n badle na gul kabhi
Insaa.n badal raha yahaa.n har pal nakaab tha.
Barish ki boond sa zamee.n pe jo baras gaya
Har shai me ghul raha tha vo kaisa azaab tha.
Madhu ji
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ehsaason aur alfaazon ke jaadu se sajaa kalaam... -
4th February 2016, 09:54 AM
mehboob ki adaa hoon, nazar ka noor hoon
har rasm-o-rivaayat mein, main bhi zaroor hoon
kahin zulf-e-haseena ki, hota hoon main zeenat
kahin nargisi aankhon se, behta suroor hoon
mohabbaton ki raunak, bhi mere dum se hai
shayron ki mehfilon mein, main mashoor hoon
kitaabon se jo niklun, to unke yeh lage
dafn dil ka raaz hoon,chasm-e-badoor hoon
unke labo.n pe aati, yak-lakht yeh hayaa
mujhse kahe main husn ka, unke ghuroor hoon
alfaaz ban ke bikhroon, to loot lun main dil
toote hue dilon ka, lekin futoor* hoon
kuch hai gulaab kehte, kuch kehte nasriin*
main phool khaaksaar sa, mere huzoor hoon
aafat si hai barpaati, murjhaaun jo kabhi
sadko.n par miltaa hoon, jaise nasoor* hoon
girti hui phuwaar hai, saazish si lag rahi
main kis tarah kahun, ke main be-qusoor hoon
futoor = weakness, infirmity
nasriin = wild rose
Mast saahab.
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4th February 2016, 01:48 PM
Shukriya shaad sahab..sach me besbri se intzaar tha poll thread ka...khoobsoorat entreis aayi hain isme koi shak nahi....thodi mayoos zaroor huyi hun main ye dekhkar ki zyada entreis nahi hain.....shayad sab busy ho gaye naye saal me..par chaliye koi baat nahi...yakeen hai ki aap sab vote dene me kanjoosi nhi karenge......zyada vaqt bhi nhi lagega teen hee entreis hain.....padhiye aur jo aapko pasand aaye use vote dijiye........
Participants ko all d best......
Thanks..
Madhu..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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4th February 2016, 09:59 PM
Bahut khoob doston kya tehreer huyi haseen gul par aur bhi khayaal aate to aacha tha...khair umeed hai aap sab apne votes jald hi denge.....best of luck to all the participants.
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5th February 2016, 10:17 AM
muje dono gazleN behad acchi lagi hai aur rules ke mutabik kisi aik ko vote karni hai to meri vote pehli gazal ko jati hai, jis meiN tasveer ke saath aik aik lafz mil rha hai
Bheega hua sama tha aur taza gulab tha.
Thi aarzoo kisi ki ya toota vo khwaab tha.
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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9th February 2016, 11:06 AM
Doston aapna vote Jaldi se kijiye....
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13th February 2016, 08:38 PM
bas 2 din aur hain doston....please vote zaroor dein...
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17th February 2016, 04:13 PM
result ka intejaar hai....................................
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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18th February 2016, 02:27 PM
doston jaisa ke aap ne dekhaa is baar hamaare paas behad pyaare kalaam aaye aur voting me bhi logon ne badh chadh ke hissa liyaa....
mujeh bataate hue behad khushi ho rahi hai ke is baar ka result tie ho gaya hai.. aur mast saahab aur madhu ji, dono hi vijetaa ghoshit kiye jaate hain....
hamaari taraf se dher saari badhaai aur mubaarakbaad aap dono ko..... aur sabhi doston ka behad shukriyaa jinhone is baar ki TPT ko apna keemtii waqt diyaa.....
shukriya.....
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19th February 2016, 06:28 PM
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doston jaisa ke aap ne dekhaa is baar hamaare paas behad pyaare kalaam aaye aur voting me bhi logon ne badh chadh ke hissa liyaa....
mujeh bataate hue behad khushi ho rahi hai ke is baar ka result tie ho gaya hai.. aur mast saahab aur madhu ji, dono hi vijetaa ghoshit kiye jaate hain....
hamaari taraf se dher saari badhaai aur mubaarakbaad aap dono ko..... aur sabhi doston ka behad shukriyaa jinhone is baar ki TPT ko apna keemtii waqt diyaa.....
shukriya.....
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Shaad bhai behad shukriyaa aapka aur sabhi doston ka shukrguzaar hoon jihone vote kiya...
Madhu ko bhi meri taraf se mubaarakbaad jo unhone itni haseen ghazal pesh ki.....
Umeed hai yeh silsilaa yunhi chalta rahe
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doston jaisa ke aap ne dekhaa is baar hamaare paas behad pyaare kalaam aaye aur voting me bhi logon ne badh chadh ke hissa liyaa....
mujeh bataate hue behad khushi ho rahi hai ke is baar ka result tie ho gaya hai.. aur mast saahab aur madhu ji, dono hi vijetaa ghoshit kiye jaate hain....
hamaari taraf se dher saari badhaai aur mubaarakbaad aap dono ko..... aur sabhi doston ka behad shukriyaa jinhone is baar ki TPT ko apna keemtii waqt diyaa.....
shukriya.....
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Namaskaar shaad sahab....bahut shukriya aapka..jo aapne itni khoobsoorat tasweer pesh ki aur hame likhne ka mauka diya...sabhi doston ki karzdaar hun jinhone likhe ko pasand kiya aur vote kiya......anu aapko meri taraf se dher sari badhaiyaan...aapka kalaam mere dil ke bahut kareeb raha......
Aap sab se aage bhi aise hee sath ki umeed hai....
Duaon..ke sath..
Aapki dost.
Madhu
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Shaad bhai behad shukriyaa aapka aur sabhi doston ka shukrguzaar hoon jihone vote kiya...
Madhu ko bhi meri taraf se mubaarakbaad jo unhone itni haseen ghazal pesh ki.....
Umeed hai yeh silsilaa yunhi chalta rahe
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Thank u anu...... ...aapne bhi bahut bahut khoobsoorat kalaam likha....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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20th February 2016, 11:28 AM
Shaad bhai...kaun si gazal kiski thi...yeh to batao
MAST Bhai aur Madhu bala aap dono ko mubarakbaad
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Bahut Shukriya di..........................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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22nd February 2016, 07:52 AM
dee its already there.... please scroll up and check the poet name below each ghazal...:
do let me know if there is any confusion... thanks and take care
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Thanks Di ..................
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dee its already there.... please scroll up and check the poet name below each ghazal...:
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sorry shaad bhai....post edit karke naam likh diya hai esi liye mere dhayaan nahi gya....shukriya bhai
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sorry shaad bhai....post edit karke naam likh diya hai esi liye mere dhayaan nahi gya....shukriya bhai
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koi baat nahi............. its ok
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