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8th October 2009, 10:16 AM
Dosto,
Namaskaar / aadaab .... Maine yeh ghazal takriban 3-4 mahine pahele likhi thi.... par kisi wajah se post nahi kar paayii aaj jab hindi-urdu lyrics section meiN, meri bahot hee pasandida ghazal : zindagi jab bhi teri bazm meiN lati hai hame.N - From: Umrao Jaan ko paRa to usi base par likhi apni puraani ghazal post karne se khud ko rok nahi paaii. AAp ki raaii ki muntazir……… Jab kabhi bhi teri yaad aati hai hameN Biti har baat aaj bhi rulaati hai hameN Rok na paau khudko tere karib aane se teri aawaaz tere pass bulatii hai hame.N bhoolo.N bhi kaise woh guzare lamhe.N woh mulakate har raat jagatii hai hame.N Berang sa lagata hai jab mujhe yeh jahan Teri aankhe.N rang saare dikhaati hai hame.N Chaha jab kabhi kahin dur chale jaane ko Kismat fir usi mod par le aati hai hame.N  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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8th October 2009, 12:03 PM
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wah wah dost bahot khub sabhi sher khubsurat....lajawab keep up dost Regards  _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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8th October 2009, 01:35 PM
Purvi Jii,,
Kia baat hai janab, kamaal ghazal hai aap ki.... Daad qabool kijiye... Aisay hi likhtay rahiye, GOD BLESS YOU, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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8th October 2009, 02:04 PM
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apki ye ghazal dil ko bha gayi........... khaskar apka matla lajawab raha .............. Jab kabhi bhi teri yaad aati hai hameN Biti har baat aaj bhi rulaati hai hameN mahut acche.... regards |
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8th October 2009, 03:16 PM
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Bahut hi pyari gazal kahi hai aapne ahsaas alfaaz aur bayani sabhi behad khoob hai, sabhi sher achche lage likhati rahiye..... Mere khayal se aapki yeh gazal tamam padhen walon ke dlon ko kharoch ker hi rahengii... bahut khoob ahsaas hai is gazal ke... Dil se daad kabool kijiye... Khush rhaiye.. Khuda Hafez... 
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8th October 2009, 06:24 PM
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har sher ko dil se daad deta hu....kabul kare.... aise hi likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye... aur apna khayal rakhiyega... duaaon ke saath.....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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11th October 2009, 10:16 AM
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Bahot lambe arse baad meri post par sab se pahele tumhari comment dekhkar bahot accha lag raha hai... aage bhi aise hee saath dete rahena tumhari Dost Purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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12th October 2009, 10:10 AM
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aadaab aap ki daad dil se qoobool karti hoon ummid karti hoon aap ka saath aage bhi milta rahega purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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20th October 2009, 03:57 PM
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maiN khairiyat se hooN.. aur aap ke comments apni ghazal par paa'kar aur bhi durust ho gayii hoon. aap ko yeh ghazal acchi lagii yeh mere liye fakr ki baat hai Housla afzaayee ka shukriya aap ki dost purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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20th October 2009, 03:59 PM
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Kaise ho bhai?? Tum ko is ghazal ke ahesaas pasand aaye .. yeh jankar accha laga tumhari daad dil se koobul karti hoon aage bhi saath banaye rakhana tumhari dii purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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20th October 2009, 04:00 PM
Purvi didi:
namaste! bahot hi Khoob liKhaa hai aapne ! aur haaN aapko diwaali ki bahot bahot mubaaraQbaad! daad! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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20th October 2009, 07:02 PM
Dear Purvi jii,
Kiase hain aap? Ghazal to dil ko chu gaii .. her sher dil ke kareeb raha .. Ummed karti hu ghazal's pesh karne ka silsila yu hi chalta rahye .. aur mehfil ronak lagatey rahye Take care Aapki Mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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22nd October 2009, 03:11 PM
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kaisi ho tum?? kahan ghum ho??? Ghazal padhne aur mera housla badhane ka bahot bahot shukriya Dost Purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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26th October 2009, 11:30 AM
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Naresh jee Yeh meri kushkismati hai ke mujhe aap jaise dost ka saath har baar milta hai. har kadam par saath dene aur mera housla baRaane ka bahot bahot shukriya Ummid karti hoon aage bhi aapka saath milta rahega aap ki dost purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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26th October 2009, 11:58 AM
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Jay shree krishna, Mere bhai yeh tumhara baddapan hai ke tum apni dii ki adni si koshish par bhi daad dete ho... Housla afzaayee ka bhot bahot shukriya tum bhi apna khayal rakhana ( zamana bahot kharab hai mere bhai..  )tumharii Dii ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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3rd May 2010, 03:38 PM
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Dear Mann, Kaisi ho tum?? ummid karti hoon khairiyat se hongi... BaRe lambe arse ke baad SDC par aayi hoon... tum se maufi chahti hoon ke itne mahino ke baad is par reply kar rahi hoon... housa afzayee ka shukriya tumhari dost purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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11th April 2011, 06:14 AM
purvi ji
radhe radhe Jab kabhi bhi teri yaad aati hai hameN Biti har baat aaj bhi rulaati hai hameN Chaha jab kabhi kahin dur chale jaane ko Kismat fir usi mod par le aati hai hame.N dil ko chhoo gaye saare ashaar .. bahut achche se aur tarannum me jo dard bayaan kiya hai ... bahut khoobsurat lagaa ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai .. yuhi likhti rahiye ... Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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27th April 2011, 11:14 AM
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Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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29th April 2011, 01:07 PM
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Purvi jee aadaab.. kaisi hain aap... aaj arse baaad aapke kisi kalam se mulaaqaat hui hamaari.... sach kahun to yoon laga ke kisi ne khoobsurat ehsaasoN aur khayaaloN ko aur bhi khubsurti se alfaazoN me dhaala hai... bahot hi pasand aai ye kavita aapki hame... Berang sa lagata hai jab mujhe yeh jahan Teri aankhe.N rang saare dikhaati hai hame.N is sher ki kitni bhi tareef karooN kam hi hai.... bas likhti rahiye... khush rahiye.. shaad... |
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3rd May 2011, 05:48 PM
bari muddad baad yahan se guzar hua tu apke kalaam pe nazar gayi .... is nacheez ki daad kabool kijiye haar sher bari khubsurat andaz se bayan kia hai ........
anjaan shakhs.... in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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3rd May 2011, 08:57 PM
ab kabhi bhi teri yaad aati hai hameN
Biti har baat aaj bhi rulaati hai hameN Rok na paau khudko tere karib aane se teri aawaaz tere pass bulatii hai hame.N bhoolo.N bhi kaise woh guzare lamhe.N woh mulakate har raat jagatii hai hame.N Berang sa lagata hai jab mujhe yeh jahan Teri aankhe.N rang saare dikhaati hai hame.N Chaha jab kabhi kahin dur chale jaane ko Kismat fir usi mod par le aati hai hame.N Purvi Ji namaskar Apke Ye gazal to pure dil mein utarti hai. mai aasha karunga ki aap aage bhi aase hi likhti rahengi. |
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