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Tere Wajood Ke Ehsaas Ki Pighlan -
11th April 2006, 11:39 AM
MAIN AKELI KAHA TERE WAJOOD KA SAYA SAATH HAI
JAWAN RAAT MAI CHAAND CHANDNI KE SAATH HAI DURIYA KAHA DOOR KAR PAATI HAI HUME SAPNO MAI HI SAHI TERE HAATOHN MAI HAATH HAI isi ehsas ko samet kar kuch likha hai .aur aapki nazar karne aa gaye. Raat Ki Raani, Jab Sama Mahkaati Hai , Chandni Bhi Taaron Ki Barat Sajati Hai Aankhon Mai Nashili Lahriyan ko Padh Dharkane bhi mohhbbat Gungunati Hai Hothon Ki Narmi,Kaano Ki Low Jalaye Ungliyan Bhi Uljhe Gesu Suljhati Hai Tumhare Sparsh Se Pighalta Hai Man Mera Jane Kyu Ye Aankh Tabhi Khul Jati Hai Sapne Mai Sahi Ehsas Zinda To Hote Hain Bholi ,SHRDDHA, kuch pal to muskraati hai shrdh 
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11th April 2006, 12:16 PM
great one dd sach me ab aapki likhai masha allah se kaafi khoob surat ho gai hai,dua hai rab se ki aap hamesha khush rahen aur yoon hi likhti rahen ,ok dd apna khayal rakhna.aapka bhai
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Re: Tere Wajood Ke Ehsaas Ki Pighlan -
11th April 2006, 04:10 PM
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dost bahut khoob aaj fir se nikhre se lage bahut achha likha hai hamesha simple words mein badi baat yahi hai aapki gazal ki khasiyat..... aaj jaise hi on kiya computer to aapki nai gazal mili dil khush ho gaya....... hamain to pehle hee aadat hai "HAAR" jaane ki…. |
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Re: Tere Wajood Ke Ehsaas Ki Pighlan -
12th April 2006, 05:50 AM
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kya likhya hai yaar tum ne aaj , hum to aap ke deewane ho gaye . in shabdon mai sirf pyaar hi pyaar aur pyaar se bhara jaam nazar aata hai ... Aankhon Mai Nashili Lahriyan ko Padh Dharkane bhi mohhbbat Gungunati Hai aise hi likhte raho aur sada muskurate raho, pata nahi khushi ke mare aaj puri ki puri jalabi khane ko jee kar raha hai . khozii ***khozii*** |
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12th April 2006, 05:55 AM
Shrdha di,
acha likha hai bahut khoob... aap apna khayal rakhna Rohin |
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Re: Tere Wajood Ke Ehsaas Ki Pighlan -
12th April 2006, 11:16 AM
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namastey aapke likney mei kuch baat to hei. muje khsui hei ki humey aapko padne ka moka milta hei. aapki kaanch |
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bahut khoobsoorat hai |
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bahut khoobsoorat hai -
12th April 2006, 12:57 PM
bahut khoobsoorat dil jis ne muhabbat ke khwab dekhe hon aisee baat likh sakta hai bahut achha likha hai sharddha tum ne aaj tour se wapis aa ke parha laga shayri.com pe ane ka manee mil gaya wah bahut achha
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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Re: Tere Wajood Ke Ehsaas Ki Pighlan -
12th April 2006, 01:41 PM
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Kaanch ne bilkul sahi kaha hai ki kuch tow baat hai aapke likhney. accha parhney per fir se bahaut acchqa laga. "Sapne mein sabhi ehsaas Zinda tow hotey hain Bholi ,shrdh, kuch pal tow muskraati hai " bahaut accha khush rahein vipin 
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12th April 2006, 02:30 PM
Raat Ki Raani, Jab Sama Mahkaati Hai ,
Chandni Bhi Taaron Ki Barat Sajati Hai Aankhon Mai Nashili Lahriyan ko Padh Dharkane bhi mohhbbat Gungunati Hai hmmm.... Hothon Ki Narmi,Kaano Ki Low Jalaye Ungliyan Bhi Uljhe Gesu Suljhati Hai Tumhare Sparsh Se Pighalta Hai Man Mera Jane Kyu Ye Aankh Tabhi Khul Jati Hai beautifull... expressed very nicely... Sapne Mai Sahi Ehsas Zinda To Hote Hain Bholi ,SHRDDHA, kuch pal to muskraati hai waaaaaahh... Shraddha, Ek aur khoobsurat aur asardaar rachna... bahut hi khoobsurati se ehsaas bayana kiye hain... last sher khaaskar bahut accha laga... likhti raho yun hi.. Take Care.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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13th April 2006, 05:12 PM
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aap hamesha aabad rahen .aur hamesha muskrate raho ye hi didi ki dua hai aapki duaaon k liye dil se sukriya shrdh
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14th April 2006, 11:01 AM
very changaa bahut khub
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Re: Tere Wajood Ke Ehsaas Ki Pighlan -
14th April 2006, 06:00 PM
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ek shayar ke dil ke dard doosara shayar hi samajh sakta hai... lekin kyo hum sab kuchh jaan kar bhi anjaan ban jaate hain kabhi kabhi.... kyon hum ek doosare ke dukho ke saathi chah kar bhi nahi ban paate...... KAASH..... HAMARI BHOLI SHRDDHA YU HI MUSKURATI RAHE , kuchh pal nahi HAR PAL......... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Khuda se koi bat anjaan nahi hoti,,,,,, jab insaan ki jindagi beimaan nahi hoti...... Kabhi manga hoga humne pyara sa dost,,,, varna yunhi aapki humse pehchaan nahi hoti....! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- hamain to pehle hee aadat hai "HAAR" jaane ki…. |
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14th April 2006, 06:37 PM
bahut hi khubsurat likha hai shrdhji aapne itna pyara kalam aaj kal kaha padhne milta hai wah bahut khoob
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hiiii -
15th April 2006, 09:47 AM
great shayri written by great persons onlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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18th April 2006, 11:24 AM
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aapko pasand aay mere liye bhaut badhi baat hai abhi to bus seekhte jaa rahe hai kaee sari baaten sundharen ki gunjayisha hai bus seekhte jana hai aap logon ka support bhaut mayne rakhta hai shrdh
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29th April 2006, 01:26 PM
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aaj fir se mahfil mai haazir hai aapko ye ehsas pasand aaye achha laga jaankar keep coming shrdh
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29th April 2006, 02:02 PM
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aap aaye achha laga ehsas achhe lage dil ko kushi hui aap apna khyaal rakh rahe hoge love u shrdh
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