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Mil jata gar aise ,mujhe hichk na ho haath feelane se - 25th May 2006, 05:22 PM

Kahte hai ki log bin manage paya hai zamane se
Mil jata gar aise, koi hichke na haath feelane se

Duniya he paathar ki ,main patthar ko shiv kar detee
Gar mil jaati sachhi murat,apnee ankhon ka jal detee
Har murat mai ravan ne aakaar liye kaha jana maine
Pyaar nahi milta, pattharo.N par ansoo bahane se

Dard hi dard milta raha mujhe tanha zindgi mai
Sada jiti rahi hoon main adhooree chandni main
kaha utra kabhi chand, pyaas bhujhane zamin ki
Aaj socha, kya bujh jati pyaas chand k aane se

chhote se kisse ko fasana bana hi diya logone ne
aaj fir pyaar par ilzam laga hi diya logon ne
Sawalon,ke kathaghre mai kadhi hairan hoon zindgi
Duniya ne uthaya fayada ,kya khoob bhahane se



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hi - 25th May 2006, 05:30 PM

hi shrddh, aaj mujhe lagta hai ke tumne kaafi samay baad yaha aakar kuchh likha hai,mai ye kahunga welcome back to home.ab bhi tumaare haatho ka jadu barkaraar hai,verry well writtent and well said hai tumaaree kavita,bas aise hi likhti raho hamesha,
tumaaree har kavitaa mai kuchh na kuchh naya pan hota hai hamesha ki tarah.is baar ka tumaara safar bhi kaamiyaab rahega
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25th May 2006, 05:34 PM

Very Nice Poem shrddha Ji....
Bahut Achha Likha He...
Kya Ye Aap Ne Likhi HEW??
Very Good..
Badhiya He...
Keep It Up......

Ye Line Muje Bahut Achhi Lagi...

Duniya he paathar ki ,main patthar ko shiv kar detee
Gar mil jaati sachhi murat,apnee ankhon ka jal detee
Har murat mai ravan ne aakaar liye kaha jana maine
Pyaar nahi milta, pattharo.N par ansoo bahane se


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25th May 2006, 05:53 PM

waah kya baat hai,

Har murat mai ravan ne aakaar liye kaha jana maine
Pyaar nahi milta, pattharo.N par ansoo bahane se...


kaha utra kabhi chand, pyaas bhujhane zamin ki
Aaj socha, kya bujh jati pyaas chand k aane se


bahot khoob.... keep it up......


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kuchh likhne ke pehle aapko aadaab kehte hai.
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Re: hi - 30th May 2006, 03:30 PM

manu
sahi kahe rahe ho bhaut dino baad kalam uthayi aur jazbhe likh dale
kadwe se lage jab khud hi padha to

khair kabhi kabhi likh dete hai par
zindgi positive jine ka ehsas hai aarju bhi hai jiungi bhi waise hi

thnx for being by my side always

sabka support hi mujhe hosla deta raha hai

aage bhi support milta rahega yahi umeed hai

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hi shrddh, aaj mujhe lagta hai ke tumne kaafi samay baad yaha aakar kuchh likha hai,mai ye kahunga welcome back to home.ab bhi tumaare haatho ka jadu barkaraar hai,verry well writtent and well said hai tumaaree kavita,bas aise hi likhti raho hamesha,
tumaaree har kavitaa mai kuchh na kuchh naya pan hota hai hamesha ki tarah.is baar ka tumaara safar bhi kaamiyaab rahega
regards
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Re: Mil jata gar aise ,mujhe hichk na ho haath feelane se - 30th May 2006, 03:39 PM

Duniya he paathar ki ,main patthar ko shiv kar detee
Gar mil jaati sachhi murat,apnee ankhon ka jal detee
Har murat mai ravan ne aakaar liye kaha jana maine
Pyaar nahi milta, pattharo.N par ansoo bahane se

chhote se kisse ko fasana bana hi diya logone ne
aaj fir pyaar par ilzam laga hi diya logon ne
Sawalon,ke kathaghre mai kadhi hairan hoon zindgi
Duniya ne uthaya fayada ,kya khoob bhahane se


kya kehne..!!! wah..!!!
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-MANOJ


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