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5th December 2003, 07:00 AM
Ek maamuli koshish aap sab doston kee nazar.....
Yeh rishta bhi kya rishta hai Bus benaam hai ik tarfa hai Hum aagosh-e-tasavvuur mein unko laate rahe Wo duur hee bus duur humse jaate rahe Wo na samjheinge hamari chahat kee bekasi Hamare zinda hone ka maksad, unko na paane kee tasleem hamari parastish ka janoon Humko yeh zidd ki gham likhein unke apni hatheli pe hum Unka yeh daawa ki wo khush hain apni dard shanaasaaii mein Unko lagaawat apne usoolon kee bar qarari se Hamko yeh kashish ki kabhi tau nisbat ho humse unhein Kehte the wo na chaaho hamein yoon toot kar tum Na ulajh jaao is khatarnaak mod se tum Kehte the magar DIL SE JO NIKALTI HAI ASAR RAKHTI HAI PARR NAHIN MAGAR TAQATEY PARWAAZ RAKHTI HAI Suna hai parwar digaar tuu to rahiim-o-karim hai, kar us shakhs ko purr masarrat tuu Jo daudta rahe meri ragon mein, khushboo banke meri sanson mein yuun Tuu to pathar hai na saha hoga dil ka tuutna, jism ka ladkhadana, badan ka phoonka Us baa-murawwat se na khel ke gham-e-hayaat tode use, Ki saans lena bhi azaab lage use choda tha usne jis gam-kadaa mein Baithe hain usi mod pe, ehsaas-e-fanaa liye huye Khaar see chubhati saanson ko ginte huye, Lab pur nam unki yadon se bhigote huye gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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5th December 2003, 08:22 AM
Dear Paras Jee, aapki kalam parte hue ankhen vhar ayi. It's so beautiful. Aapne bohot hi khubsurti se bayan kiye hein dard.......keya kahu samajh nehi ati hein. Aap baas likhte rahiyega. Dil pe baas utarti chali gayi.......shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.
 Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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5th December 2003, 09:12 AM
kya baat karti hain shimul!
shukriya aapka...kayi baar dost, jab dil chatpata uth ta hai to shabd bus nikalte hee aate hain...jazzbaat alfaazon mein behne lagte hain...yeh maine yahan is site par aakar hee jaana hai...main shukra guzaar hoon aapki aur sab doston ki, ki unhone paras ke dard ko kam kiya shayri ke zariye...apna khayal rakhein...khush rahein...paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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5th December 2003, 12:11 PM
hi paristar sahab
how ru? its really good one yaar.... bohat acha likhte hain aap keep it up..man... dad k sath aik banjara'''' abhi bas itna hi'''' agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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5th December 2003, 03:49 PM
[SIZE=3]its one of the most beautiful poetry i have ever read...keep it up.
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5th December 2003, 08:39 PM
sadaf,
welcome to the site...on your very first day...meri shayri pe aapke yeh Qeemti bol...indebted to you my friend...i'm sure you write a lot better than me...aapki posts ka intezzar karoongi....Paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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5th December 2003, 08:44 PM
Banjara Sahib,
aapka hamari post pe aana hee hamare alfaazon ko kamyaab kar gaya...pls yoonhi himmat badhaate rahein...hum koshish karte raheinge... PARASTAAR SAHIBA.......  gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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6th December 2003, 12:05 PM
Dear dear dear......Paaras ye kyaa keh gayii tum...ek ek alfaZ mai jadoo hai..sachhi....bass yu hii likhtii rahoo auR khush rahoo...kuch bhRum..kuch hakiqat...se milta jultaa...waah daad kabul kare.....ap ka shishyaaaa
 Wo na samjheinge hamari chahat kee bekasi Hamare zinda hone ka maksad, unko na paane kee tasleem hamari parastish ka janoon Humko yeh zidd ki gham likhein unke apni hatheli pe hum Unka yeh daawa ki wo khush hain apni dard shanaasaaii mein Unko lagaawat apne usoolon kee bar qarari se Hamko yeh kashish ki kabhi tau nisbat ho humse unhein Yeh rishta bhi kya rishta hai Bus benaam hai ik tarfa hai Hum aagosh-e-tasavvuur mein unko laate rahe Wo duur hee bus duur humse jaate rahe.. Tuu to pathar hai na saha hoga dil ka tuutna, jism ka ladkhadana, badan ka phoonka Us baa-murawwat se na khel ke gham-e-hayaat tode use, Ki saans lena bhi azaab lage use choda tha usne jis gam-kadaa mein Baithe hain usi mod pe, ehsaas-e-fanaa liye huye Khaar see chubhati saanson ko ginte huye, Lab pur nam unki yadon se bhigote huye......waaah muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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Re: Benaam Rishta…….. -
6th December 2003, 01:15 PM
parashtar ji
kaisi hai aap??? bahoot khooob likha hai aapne.....aap kehti hai ki aap urdu mein kamjor hai..?? aap ki gazal ko padh kar to kahin se bhi aisa nahin laga....bahooot behtreen koshish ki hai aapne...hamari shubhkamnayein sdeiv aap ke saath hai....yun to poori hi gazal apne aap mein behtreen hai magar jo paktiyaan mujhe dil tak choo gayi wo yeh hai...... Wo na samjheinge hamari chahat kee bekasi Hamare zinda hone ka maksad, unko na paane kee tasleem hamari parastish ka janoon Tuu to pathar hai na saha hoga dil ka tuutna, jism ka ladkhadana, badan ka phoonka Us baa-murawwat se na khel ke gham-e-hayaat tode use, Ki saans lena bhi azaab lage use choda tha usne jis gam-kadaa mein Baithe hain usi mod pe, ehsaas-e-fanaa liye huye Khaar see chubhati saanson ko ginte huye, Lab pur nam unki yadon se bhigote huye likhte rahiye aur apna khayal rakhiye... -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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6th December 2003, 03:30 PM
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7th December 2003, 06:25 AM
Hi Paras Ji,
Pehli baar aapka likha hua kuch padha, sahi kahen to dil ko kya hamari aatma ko chu gaya khaastor se yeh lines... "Wo na samjheinge hamari chahat kee bekasi Hamare zinda hone ka maksad, unko na paane kee tasleem hamari parastish ka janoon Humko yeh zidd ki gham likhein unke apni hatheli pe hum Unka yeh daawa ki wo khush hain apni dard shanaasaaii mein Unko lagaawat apne usoolon kee bar qarari se Hamko yeh kashish ki kabhi tau nisbat ho humse unhein Yeh rishta bhi kya rishta hai Bus benaam hai ik tarfa hai Hum aagosh-e-tasavvuur mein unko laate rahe Wo duur hee bus duur humse jaate rahe.." Sahi main bahaut khoob likha hai aapne, hume bahaut acacha laga, aise hi likhte rahiye... Rimjhim Isn't that true??? ;-) |
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7th December 2003, 09:05 AM
Sanjoo,
aap sabse apne jazzbaton ko bahaanaa seekh rahi hoon...aapne itni zyaada tareef kar di...sach mein hamari rachna safal huyi...aur kya kahein aap sab ka saath bahut pyaara hai...apna khayal rakhein... Manoj, Ab main aap sabko kaise yaqeen dilaaon ki janaab pehli baar hamne urdu mein bus isi site pe likha...i think around nov 10 2003 aur likhte waqt bus urdu dictionary ke sahaare yahan wahan urdu words thons dete hain...unka prayog hum dhang se kar paate hain ki nahin yeh nahin malum...khair hamari koshish safal huyi...bus yeh bhram na hojaaye ki hum meer-ya-ghalib kee tarah hee likhne lage hain to mushqil ho jaayegi sab ke liye...khayal rakhna apna...aur mujhe batana ki kabhi books ke liye illustration ka socha hai...children's books Meena jee, Shukriya janaab aapko fursat to mili hamaare liye...taras gaye thhe aapki nazar ke liye...is naacheez par bhi kabhi kabhi karam kar diya karein...aur aaraam mat bhool jana karna...aapne abhi bahut see rachnaayein likhni hain...aur khud hee type karni hain...aashirwaad ke sath...aapki paras nani gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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7th December 2003, 09:11 AM
Dear Rimjhim,
Bahut bahut achha laga ki aapko hamara kalaam pasand aaya...remember crushes are part of growing up...yes it is hard to forget them...but life goes on until the next crush isn't it? tumhaari aatma ne hamaari aatma ko padh liya hamein sukoon mila...Khayaal rakhna apna...paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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7th December 2003, 07:18 PM
parastaar ji
kaisi hai aap???? thnaks aap ne mujh se children books illustration ke liye pucha...mein aabhari hoon aapka...abhi kuch roz pehle hi mein Starling Publication ke office mein gaya tha inteview ke liye,,,,magar baat nahin bani wahan...wo mujh se haath se illustration karwana chahte the,,jabki mein computer par karna chahta tha,,,kyunki college ke baad meine haath ka kaam nahin kiya hai........agar aap ke paas Delhi mein mere laayak koi achi job hai to bataiyega jaroor.mein aabhari rahunga aapka. -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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7th December 2003, 07:57 PM
manoj,
maine pm bheja hai...pls padh lena...aur try karo tau phir se haath se illustrate karne kee... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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9th December 2003, 12:28 AM
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khash tour par ache lage mujheee. Humko yeh zidd ki gham likhein unke apni hatheli pe hum Unka yeh daawa ki wo khush hain apni dard shanaasaaii mein Unko lagaawat apne usoolon kee bar qarari se Hamko yeh kashish ki kabhi tau nisbat ho humse unhein Yeh rishta bhi kya rishta hai Bus benaam hai ik tarfa hai Hum aagosh-e-tasavvuur mein unko laate rahe Wo duur hee bus duur humse jaate rahe.. Tuu to pathar hai na saha hoga dil ka tuutna, jism ka ladkhadana, badan ka phoonka Us baa-murawwat se na khel ke gham-e-hayaat tode use, Ki saans lena bhi azaab lage use parastaar ji aapki tarif nahi karungi kyun ki karne ko sabd nahi hai na .bhut dilkash likha hai apne . aap to din ba din nikhar laa rahi ho apni kalam mein . aapki kalam yuhi dhaardaar rahe bas yahi kahungi apke liye. apnakhyaal rakhna aur khush rahna . sakhiiiiiiii शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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9th December 2003, 06:28 AM
Sakhi meri,
bahut achha laga aapka yahan aa kar meri kalam mein nikhaar kee baat karna...yadi aapko laga...to meri koshish safal huyi...time kee kami hai...warna bahut kuch dimaag mein ghoomta rehta hai...yoonhi inaayat banaye rakhna hamare upar...jab bhi hum koshish karein...waise aapke jazzbaaton kee tau baat hee kuch aur hai...bahut achha likhtin hain aap... khush raho...yahi dua hai meri...paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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9th December 2003, 06:31 AM
Sakhi meri,
bahut achha laga aapka yahan aa kar meri kalam mein nikhaar kee baat karna...yadi aapko laga...to meri koshish safal huyi...time kee kami hai...warna bahut kuch dimaag mein ghoomta rehta hai...yoonhi inaayat banaye rakhna hamare upar...tau kalam kee dhaar tez hee rahegi...jab bhi hum koshish karein...waise aapke jazzbaaton kee tau baat hee kuch aur hai...bahut achha likhtin hain aap... khush raho...yahi dua hai meri...paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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10th December 2003, 05:02 PM
Hum aagosh-e-tasavvuur mein unko laate rahe
Wo duur hee bus duur humse jaate rahe wah kya baat bahut khoob..bahut hi acah likha..waise main urdu main bahut weak hoon isliye maafi chahti hoon kuch lines ka meaning mujhe samajh nahin aaya..agar aap samjha sako to batana pls..lines hain... Kehte the magar DIL SE JO NIKALTI HAI ASAR RAKHTI HAI PARR NAHIN MAGAR TAQATEY PARWAAZ RAKHTI HAI but overall poem is grt..very nice. bye take care tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon (NM) |
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10th December 2003, 07:06 PM
paras ji ye to aapne mere jazbaatoin ko samjhne ki koshish ki tabhi apko ache lage .thanx
aapko mera likha pasand aata hai. aapki dhaar taz rahegi yakeen hai mujhe aur hamein apke behtreen dil ke kaarib lagne waale qalaam milnge aage bhi ye bhi janti hun mein. ham intzaar mein rahte hai inke . sakhiiii शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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10th December 2003, 08:02 PM
hello roopali,
Shukriya aap meri post pe aayin aur hamare kalaam ko pasand kiya...i'm like you roops, don't know much of urdu, just learning through dictionaries... Kehte the magar DIL SE JO NIKALTI HAI ASAR RAKHTI HAI PARR NAHIN MAGAR TAQATEY PARWAAZ RAKHTI HAI yaani, jo awaaz dil se nikalti hai uska doosre pe prabhaav gehra padta hai...it affects the person you are talking to... parr nahin...uske pankh (feathers) nahin, magar there is a desire to fly...to soar the skies...here it means, dil kee awaaz mein itna dam(strength) hota hai ki a person cannot help but be affected by it at a far deeper level...this is what i have understood...i hope i am right... thanks again...and take care...paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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10th December 2003, 08:03 PM
pyaari sakhi,
agar tum rahi mere saath dhaar tez karne ko...to yaqeenan...shukriya dost...khush raho... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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11th December 2003, 01:34 AM
mein apka saath jab tak hun yahan deti rahungi paras sahiba
sakhi urs शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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11th December 2003, 01:06 PM
hello paras..tx telling me...lovely lines..tx once again
bye take care tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon (NM) |
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11th December 2003, 08:59 PM
roops,
Don't mention it...i wrote a message for you...pls check it out paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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8th October 2004, 03:08 PM
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aj tere dard me ankh bhar aayi hai.. tu mane na maane magar ye tanhai jaan leva ban aayi. paras tujhe ye tanhai tor daalegi.. tu kaise seh paayegi ye gam aur bara degi.. kaisa ik-tarfa pyar hai tera.. kaisa bedard rishta hai tera.. kaise kanto se daman bachayegi.. kaise khud ko sambhaal paayegi.. dua karti hu zindgi me fool khile.. nat mastak ho jauuu... gar teri jholi me khushiya gire.. sadke karu uske jo tu muskurati rahi.. ibadat karu uski jo sakoon tujhe milta rahe.. urs udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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10th October 2004, 08:15 AM
aj tere dard me ankh bhar aayi hai..
tu mane na maane magar ye tanhai jaan leva ban aayi. paras tujhe ye tanhai tor daalegi.. tu kaise seh paayegi ye gam aur bara degi.. kaisa ik-tarfa pyar hai tera.. kaisa bedard rishta hai tera.. kaise kanto se daman bachayegi.. kaise khud ko sambhaal paayegi.. dua karti hu zindgi me fool khile.. nat mastak ho jauuu... gar teri jholi me khushiya gire.. sadke karu uske jo tu muskurati rahi.. ibadat karu uski jo sakoon tujhe milta rahe.. Udas jee, Bahut khoob...! daad kabuul kijiey huzoor...mujhe duaayein dene ke liye laakh laakh shukriyaa...yeh duaayein mujhse badhkar aapko lag jaayein... aur kya itna puraana kalaam dhoondh laayin aap...tab tau likhti bhi besir pair ka thee...lol paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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4th February 2010, 09:21 PM
Paras diiiiiiiii..................behad khoobsurat likhti haiN aap....aaj-kal aap kahaN gayab haiN ???
bazm mein aapki kami hai diiiiii plsssssssss vapis aa jao ! regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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