kuch ehsaas

[shrdh]

Bhaahon mai phool ,juda hokar bikhar jaate hain
Tum hote ho nigaahon mai jidhar jaate hain

Koi kahe pagal , to koi dewaana mujhe
Ek jalak paane , jo roj idhar aate hain

Door hokar kaha sakoon naseeb hota hai
E khuda tu hi bata, kyu log bichar jaate hain

Hosh khokar pyaar mai jite hai is tarah
Jana hota hai kahi , jane kidhar jaate hain

Pyaar ka kya khub asar hua shrddha
Ek chuuan teri aur hum sanvar jaate hain

[Dhaval]

Originally Posted by shrdh

Bhaahon mai phool ,juda hokar bikhar jaate hain
Tum hote ho nigaahon mai jidhar jaate hain

Koi kahe pagal , to koi dewaana mujhe
Ek jalak paane , jo roj idhar aate hain

Door hokar kaha sakoon naseeb hota hai
E khuda tu hi bata, kyu log bichar jaate hain

Hosh khokar pyaar mai jite hai is tarah
Jana hota hai kahi , jane kidhar jaate hain

Pyaar ka kya khub asar hua shrddha
Ek chuuan teri aur hum sanvar jaate hain

shrddha ji namskaar!!!!!

wah kya baat hai aapk ki peshkas ko aaj shayri -e-ishq me dekh ke mujhe pehle hi itni khusi ho gayi thi aur isko padhke to bahot hi khusi huiaapne bahot hi achha likha hai , aapka likha hua to achha hota hi hai kyuki aap ki peshkas me ehsas nazar aata hai aap ehsas ke sath apni rachna ko saja dete ho sach me bahot hi achha laga aapki is rachna ko padh ke

aur ye sher mujhe bhot hi pasand aaya

Koi kahe pagal , to koi dewaana mujhe
Ek jalak paane , jo roj idhar aate hain

ye sher mujhe kuch apni zaindagi se juda hua laga bahot achha laga padh ke

dil se nilkali daad kubul kijiyenga teacher ji......


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dhaval