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AAj-kal humse wo nazren churane lage... -
29th August 2005, 09:43 PM
aapki ek nazar chahta hoon....
jara gaur pharmaaye.... arj kiya hai.... aaj-kal wo apne chahre ko, humse chupane lage hain, jis chahre ko dhundhne me, humne jamane lage hain... meri tarah tum bhi kabhi paresaan to hoti hogi, yaad humari aaye tumhe aesi saam to hoti hogi. jhuki huyin palken kucj kahti hain yun na giraya karo, hum madhoos ho jaate hain aese na humen bahalaya karo. aage arj kiya hai.... hum aate hain khababon me unke... hum aate hain khababon me unke... jinhe neend nahin aati humari yado me. dekhkar jinko dhakan ruk jaati hain... dekhkar jinko dhakan ruk jaati hain... unhi ko basa rakha hai apni dhakano me. KYA KAREN??? shukriya aapke aane ka, taare jhilmila ne lage, din me bhi humne suraj teri chavi me chaand sa lage. Yours a4arun |
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31st August 2005, 01:31 PM
bahut achcha likhs hai aapne.
aap ke dard ko wo nahin samajhte , sayad wo apne aap ko nahin samajhte. keep writing bye priya |
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1st September 2005, 06:07 PM
hi
priya sayad aisa hi ho... thanks. arun ARUN ====================================== Dil naa-umid to nahi, nakaam hi to hai. lambi hai gam ki shaam, magar yeh shaam hi to hai. ======================================= |
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1st September 2005, 07:49 PM
Namaskar Arun
Nice Sher.....Keep writing......each one was beautifully written Keep Smiling  |
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