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"Pyar Ki Intihaa" -
20th September 2008, 11:26 AM
Dosto lijiye aaj phir ek pyar bhara ahsaas lekar aap sab ke saamne hazir hoon, kuch dosto ne kaha tha ki jald likhiye to yeh sab jaldi mein hi likha hai, aapki rai ki muntazir
 “Pyar ki Intihaa” Teri surat ko aanko.n mein basa rakha hai, Pariyo.n ke desh mein ghar bana rakha hai, Aakar mere pyar ki intihaa to, tu dekh zara, Teri raho.n mein palkoN ko bicha rakha hai, Tere nakash-e-kadam par sajde kiye maine, Khuda ki jaga teri tasveer ko sajja rakha hai, Tere siwa aur nahi kuch bhi chahiye mujhe, Esi liye khud ko zamane se judaa rakha hai, ‘Sunita’ ki har gazal mein tera hai zikar aaye aur tune usko abhi tak gair banaa rakha hai. (19.09.2008) .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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20th September 2008, 11:30 AM
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wah di kya baat hai aapne to bahot hi achha likha hai aapke ye ahesas dil ko chhu gaye sach me aapki har gazal ek se badhkar ek hoti hai aap bahot hi achhe shayar ho bas aise hi likhte rahiye aapka karnail paaji |
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20th September 2008, 11:39 AM
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Bahut hi khoob likha haia aapne.. mujhe bahut achha laga isse padh kar.... Tere siwa aur nahi kuch bhi chahiye mujhe, Esi liye khud ko zamane se judaa rakha hai, ‘Sunita’ ki har gazal mein tera hai zikar aaye aur tune usko abhi tak gair banaa rakha hai. yeh 4 lines to seedhe dil ko chhoo gayi.... Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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20th September 2008, 03:18 PM
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"Teri surat ko aankho mein basa rakha hai, pariya k desh mein ghar bana rakha hain..: padhker 'Anaa' ki yaad aa gai bahut khoob likha hain apne ,,take care.. Take care. Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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20th September 2008, 10:23 PM
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apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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20th September 2008, 11:32 PM
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Pyari Di Fir se Mahfil main aag laga di aap ne ....bahot hi achha laga padh ke ...Aise hi hume aap ke eheshas ko padhne ki mouka dete rahiye ....Humesha khus Rahiye ..Likhte rahiye Aapki Roshni  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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buhat acha likha hai... |
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buhat acha likha hai... -
22nd September 2008, 09:04 AM
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acha likha hai sunita ji.....aur sunain kc hain ap? $...!
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22nd September 2008, 10:20 AM
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Jindgi kia shikayat kare tujhse hum ek samandar dia hai tune or do boond ko taras rahe hai hum ( Not Mine) |
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22nd September 2008, 12:42 PM
Chaliye di aaj aapki shikayat dur kar dete hain......
wah wah romantic kalam.... achaai ghazal hain di..........daad! yunhi is bazm ki ronak badhate rahe...mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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22nd September 2008, 01:18 PM
Aap ne sher-o-shayri ka aisa jaado chala rakha hai
Ke jahan ne aapko palkon par bitha rakha hai Aise hi likhte rahiye aap hamesha Aapke bharose humne mushayra saja rakha hai ! |
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23rd September 2008, 02:41 PM
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aapki dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th September 2008, 11:46 PM
Pranaam Sister:
aapki taazaah Ghazal ko bazm meiN deKh.. be-Had KhuShnuudee hu'ii.. aSh'aar dil ko chhu gaye.. Khaas t'aur par yeh Sher dil ke sab se Qareeb rahaa.. Quote:
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN..! duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka chhoTu ~ Dhaval |
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25th September 2008, 04:59 AM
Aakar mere pyar ki intihaa to, tu dekh zara,
Teri raho.n mein palkoN ko bicha rakha hai, simply superb di...beyond words can describe... zainy |
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30th September 2008, 12:02 AM
sunita jee !
ghazal to masha allaah bahut pyaari hai ! ishQ ki ye intihaaN hame behad pasand aayi waise meraa bhi ye hi maan naa hai ki ishQ hamesha beintihaaN hota hai ! baki Tere siwa aur nahi kuch bhi chahiye mujhe, Esi liye khud ko zamane se judaa rakha hai, ‘Sunita’ ki har gazal mein tera hai zikar aaye aur tune usko abhi tak gair banaa rakha hai. inn ashaaroN ne dil churaa liyaa ! aise hi likhti rahiye ! apnaa khyaal rakhiye daad ke sath ... |
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19th October 2008, 12:31 AM
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shukriya jasdeep...............aapne waqt nikaal kar hume pada aur hamari shayri ko pasand kiya....yoon hi saaath banaye rakhiyega. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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Aadab sunita ji |
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Aadab sunita ji -
22nd October 2008, 03:58 PM
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kaise hai aap? ab hum aapse kya kahe, aapko itne dino k baad padh kar,ek alag hi khushi mili hai, ek to lambi judai k baad wapasi hui hai,or aate hi aapke mukammal kalam ko padhne ka mauka b mil gaya, ab aap hi bataye aapki tarif me hum kya kahe? sach MASHA ALLAH, bohot hi khoob likha hai aapne, hum or hamare badrul HaSSaN dono hi aapke kalam k liye aapko mubarak baad dete hain, allah aapko tarakki de,AaMIN KHUSH RAHIYE APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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23rd October 2008, 09:26 PM
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shukriya khan bhai.....aapne pada aur saraha. allah hafiz .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd October 2008, 09:27 PM
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allah hafiz .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd October 2008, 09:28 PM
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shukriya meri Roshni...............yoon hi saath detey rahna tumhari diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd October 2008, 09:29 PM
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shukriya neha ji.............................................. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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13th January 2011, 12:02 PM
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ji bhaut sunder......................................... Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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13th January 2011, 12:20 PM
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Aakar mere pyar ki intihaa to, tu dekh zara, Teri raho.n mein palkoN ko bicha rakha hai, Tere nakash-e-kadam par sajde kiye maine, Khuda ki jaga teri tasveer ko sajja rakha hai, sunita jee bahut hi sundar likha hai daad kubul karen ye dono ashar to dil ke paar ho gaye radhe radhe Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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13th January 2011, 05:29 PM
Aakar mere pyar ki intihaa to, tu dekh zara,
Teri raho.n mein palkoN ko bicha rakha hai, Tere siwa aur nahi kuch bhi chahiye mujhe, Esi liye khud ko zamane se judaa rakha hai, ‘Sunita’ ki har gazal mein tera hai zikar aaye aur tune usko abhi tak gair banaa rakha hai. Very Impressive ... Very Touching ... Bahenaa Ji ! Good Expression ... Very Nice Creation .... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... ! SuperBBBBBBBBB ......... ! aise hi aati rahen aur jaldi hi nayaa likhne ka mood banaayeN ... khush rahen ... ! DuaaoN ke saath ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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14th January 2011, 12:47 PM
Tere nakash-e-kadam par sajde kiye maine,
Khuda ki jaga teri tasveer ko sajja rakha hai, Tere siwa aur nahi kuch bhi chahiye mujhe, Esi liye khud ko zamane se judaa rakha hai, bahot khoob baaji, kya kahun main aapke is kalaam ke baare me.. sara sher hi laajawab hai isme koi do raay nahi.. aur gahzal ki khubsurti me jo izaafa hua hai wo in do sheron ne apne sar pe taj rakha hua hai...behad mubarakbaad aapko is kalaam ke liye.. likhti rahen..Duaaon me yaad rakhen. aapka bhai shaad... |
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25th January 2011, 03:14 PM
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thanks Raj jii Quote:
shukriya dear.....miss u alot. Quote:
Shukriya Karndhar jii Quote:
Thanks alot Chottu Quote:
Thanks Zainy .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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