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maan hoon na!!! - 10th July 2004, 11:14 AM

her dukh apne seeney me chupati hui
muskuraker jindgi ko aasan banati hui
ek MAAN....
kaise katti hai apne dinon ko
anubhav kiya hai maine/kai baar
din raat uski tarap ko
jab andhera bhi chaukan deta tha/ek daitya banker
aur seham seham ker...
apne bacchon ko apne ank me sametti
ye samajhker.kahin us datya ki cahya
bacchon per na aye...
maine dekha hai,,,usey
doosron ki galiyan suntey hue
shaher ke khas izzatdaron ki dhamkiyan suntey hue,,
kiske liye??????
uttar milta hai,,,apne bacchon ke liye
apne neerh ke liye!!!!
jo shayad apne hoker bhi apne na ho sakeyin
phir bhi,,,unhe apne anchal
se chiptati/unhe santwana deti
pyar se samjhati......
kyun????aisa kyun????
anjana sa sawal....???
per achanak ..kahin door
badlon ke oot se..indradhanush sa
aata ahi,,,jabab,,,,
"MAAN HOON NA"!!!!


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hi - 4th August 2004, 01:14 PM

Swati ji,

maa ki chhavi kahi bhi kisi bhi roop mein paayi ja sakti hai. aapne maa ke kuchh anchhuye palo akshrshah kiya padh ke bahut achchha laga. pyari kavita bani aapki...likhati rahiye..



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Re: maan hoon na!!! - 27th May 2005, 09:44 PM

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her dukh apne seeney me chupati hui
muskuraker jindgi ko aasan banati hui
ek MAAN....
kaise katti hai apne dinon ko
anubhav kiya hai maine/kai baar
din raat uski tarap ko
jab andhera bhi chaukan deta tha/ek daitya banker
aur seham seham ker...
apne bacchon ko apne ank me sametti
ye samajhker.kahin us datya ki cahya
bacchon per na aye...
maine dekha hai,,,usey
doosron ki galiyan suntey hue
shaher ke khas izzatdaron ki dhamkiyan suntey hue,,
kiske liye??????
uttar milta hai,,,apne bacchon ke liye
apne neerh ke liye!!!!
jo shayad apne hoker bhi apne na ho sakeyin
phir bhi,,,unhe apne anchal
se chiptati/unhe santwana deti
pyar se samjhati......
kyun????aisa kyun????
anjana sa sawal....???
per achanak ..kahin door
badlon ke oot se..indradhanush sa
aata ahi,,,jabab,,,,
"MAAN HOON NA"!!!!




priy swati,


bahut kuch oomad raha hai maan mai .......
par shayed fir kabhi......
der se hi sahi par tumhari kavita padh paayi ..........

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hi - 4th August 2005, 08:12 AM

her dukh apne seeney me chupati hui
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ek MAAN...................!!!!!!!!!
   
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