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4th January 2010, 10:06 PM
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aaj fir dil ne ek tamanna ki kuch likhne ki aur un ehsaason ko lafzon me piro aayi... ye koi shayri nahi sirf aur sirf mere ehsaas hai... apni raay se zaroor nawaziyega..... dilme ek khalish si jagi ek arse baad, kitaab-e-maazi ke humne kuch panne paltey un haseen palon ne dil ke darwaze pe dastak di, jo dil ki havelii ki qaid me aaj bhi hai, kaash..us mod se fir zindagi shuru ho jaye, jab khawahishon ke raaste wo dil me samaya tha zindagi jannat se bhi haseen lagne lagi thi, madh-hosh hawaa ke jhoke sa , sheher-e-dil pe chhaa gaya, jab jab use gale lagaati, bikhar si jati thi mai baahon me apni yu kas leta, ang ang mera fir samait leta, mai khud ko bhula baithi thi, sirf wo hi wo yaad rehta tha uske saath guzra har pal pyaar ka anmol moti hai, uske kaandhey pe sir rakhkar duniya hi bhool jati thi, labon se kuch naa kehna uska meri aankho ki jheel me dube rehna, tamam khwaabon ko hakikat ki shakl me tabdeel kiya naa palat saku, naa aage hi badh saku yaha se, ye kaun se raastey pe le aaya wo harjayi mujhe, mere jism ke saaye se bhi zayada, wakeef tha mera dilbar mujse, itni shiddat se chaha tha kabhi usne mujhe jab se is rishtey ki pehchaan chhut gayi, zindagi jaise humse anjaan ho gayi Jaise Yeh Aasmaan Chand Sitaron Ke Bina Aur Yeh Banjar Zameen Baarishon Ke Bina bas aise hi hai hum tumhare bina wo samait kar mere shaam-o-sahar chala gaya jisko paya nahi usko khokar bhi mai naajane kyu kisi aur ki kabhi naa ho payi, "LAMHA" bas usi ki ban kar reh gayi.. **********************  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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4th January 2010, 10:31 PM
Lamha ji....Namaste ! mujhe padhte waqt....aapke ehsaas bahut nizi aur sajiv lage...kahi yeh aapke viyaktigat ehsaas toh nahi....is dard ko wahi bayaan kar sakta hai......jisne is dard ko itna kareeb se jiyaa ho....aakhir woh shaks kon tha........jo humari itni pyari dost lamha ji ko......tanhaa chhod gaya... ???????????????????....pm karke zarur bataiyega....
khair .....jo bhi ho.......aapki rachna ne mere maazi mai jhaankne ki koshish ki hai....bahut sundar likha hai aapne.......bahut khub....yuhi likhte rahiye....dil se daad hazir hai.....kabul farmaaye........ ! Main Bhaqwaan se duaa karta hu.....aapka jeevan is rachna jaisa bilkul nahi hoga.....yeh main jaanta hu....yeh sirf ek khayal hai.........aap humesha khush rahen...... apna khayal rakhiyega... duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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5th January 2010, 12:55 PM
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radhe radhe bahut hi khoobsoorat ahsaas ko aapne shbdon ke jariye ham tak pahunchaaya hai agar ye aapke jeevan ka sach hai to meri dua hai ki aapko vo pyaar mil jaaye suna hai sachchi mohabbat me badi kashish hoit hai vo apne chahne waale se mila deti hai deedaar kara deti hai mujhe is par yakeen hai daad kubul kijiye itne sundar ahasaason ko shabd dene ke liye aur hame bhi us gahraayee me dubone ke liye aapka ajnabi dost Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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5th January 2010, 06:34 PM
Lamha jii...
aapne behad khoobsurat ehsaasoN ko kalam ke zariye kaagaz pe utaara hai aur aapne apne ehsaasoN ko bakhubi khoob byaaN kiya hai....mujhe aapki yeh koshish behad pasand aayee... isi tarha likhti rahiye...aur i's mehfil ko roshan rakhiye... daad haazir hai....qubuul kijiye... khush rahiye... aapka dost, vikram...  Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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beautiful moment.........
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6th January 2010, 07:10 PM
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Naresh ji, aapne bilkul sahi saha ke ye ehsaas sirf wo hi bayaan kar sakta hai jisne inhe jiya ho.... khair... aapko mere ye ehsaas niji aur sajiv lage iske liye aap ka tahe dil se shukriya...aapki daad hamare sar-aankho par....har baar mera saath dene ka bahut bahut bahut shukriya.... yuhi apni dua'e aur apna saath banaye rakhna.... khush rahiye.......... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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6th January 2010, 09:17 PM
Lamha Jii,,
Kia baat ha janab! Boht hi khoobsorat ehsaas haiN... Tareef k liye lafz nahi chhoday aap ne...... Younhi likhte rahiye aur humain heraan karte rahiye,, Regardz,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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7th January 2010, 08:35 PM
Good Work Lamha Jee..............
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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