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zikr-e-wafa - 16th February 2014, 01:16 PM
tu kehta hai....

tu kehta he tere yadon me mera zikr nahi
phir kyu roj mere ashkon me tera aks nazar aata he?

tu kehta he tughe mere fikr nahi
phir kyu bewajah mere kwabon me satane chala aata he?

tere yad me har katra aansu ka pi gayi hun me
ye nadan log samajhte he tughe bhula kr jee gayi hun me

na samajh he ye,samajhte nahin
k tere aks ko bhi tut k bikharne dena mughe tha gawara nahin

mere pyar ke peymane ka pemana tu jane,bhara ya khali?
pr sach kehti hun me,ayetbar kr ya na kr,
mere wafa ko to bs me or mera khuda jane!
   
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16th February 2014, 07:44 PM
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tu kehta hai....

tu kehta he tere yadon me mera zikr nahi
phir kyu roj mere ashkon me tera aks nazar aata he?

tu kehta he tughe mere fikr nahi
phir kyu bewajah mere kwabon me satane chala aata he?

tere yad me har katra aansu ka pi gayi hun me
ye nadan log samajhte he tughe bhula kr jee gayi hun me

na samajh he ye,samajhte nahin
k tere aks ko bhi tut k bikharne dena mughe tha gawara nahin

mere pyar ke peymane ka pemana tu jane,bhara ya khali?
pr sach kehti hun me,ayetbar kr ya na kr,
mere wafa ko to bs me or mera khuda jane!
   
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16th February 2014, 09:02 PM
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tu kehta hai....

tu kehta he tere yadon me mera zikr nahi
phir kyu roj mere ashkon me tera aks nazar aata he?

tu kehta he tughe mere fikr nahi
phir kyu bewajah mere kwabon me satane chala aata he?

tere yad me har katra aansu ka pi gayi hun me
ye nadan log samajhte he tughe bhula kr jee gayi hun me

na samajh he ye,samajhte nahin
k tere aks ko bhi tut k bikharne dena mughe tha gawara nahin

mere pyar ke peymane ka pemana tu jane,bhara ya khali?
pr sach kehti hun me,ayetbar kr ya na kr,
mere wafa ko to bs me or mera khuda jane!


hi akshara ... welcome to shayri dot com... aapki pehli hi koshissh bahot laajawaab hai... maine aaapke dil ke jazbaaat aapki shaayri me dekhe aur yaqeen maaniye ye aapki ye koshish sacche sone si khari hai... bahot sunder .. likhti raheN... bazm me raushni failaaati raheN...

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17th February 2014, 10:45 AM
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tu kehta hai....

tu kehta he tere yadon me mera zikr nahi
phir kyu roj mere ashkon me tera aks nazar aata he?

tu kehta he tughe mere fikr nahi
phir kyu bewajah mere kwabon me satane chala aata he?

tere yad me har katra aansu ka pi gayi hun me
ye nadan log samajhte he tughe bhula kr jee gayi hun me

na samajh he ye,samajhte nahin
k tere aks ko bhi tut k bikharne dena mughe tha gawara nahin

mere pyar ke peymane ka pemana tu jane,bhara ya khali?
pr sach kehti hun me,ayetbar kr ya na kr,
mere wafa ko to bs me or mera khuda jane!
Waah... Waah.............
Kya khub soch bayaan kee hai, Akshara..................
Aate rahiyega, Likhte rahiyega.............


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shukriya sameer 'shaad',masoom pyar aur aadeil meri koshish ko tareefon se sjane ke liye....yakinan apke ye shabd zaya nahi honge!!!
   
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18th June 2015, 10:20 AM
Hello akshra..

Waaah!Bahut achcha likhti hain aap....aage bhi aapki peshkash ka intzaar rahega...

Aati rahiye.....
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18th June 2015, 10:22 AM
meri kalam se ek aur poetry.....
zurrat teri he kabile tareef dil-e-gustakh
is bewafa aalam me mukkamal muhobatt dhoondne chala he..
tere ashkon se ye khudgarz zamana..
apni tapan mitayega!
tughe bikharta hua sametenge bhi to...
ek foonk se udane ko...
tughe denge tassaliyon k nuske ye...
kahenge waqt pade to tere kam ayenge...
aye dil meri na mane to azma k dekh lena..
tere jaise khilaune inhone khele aur tode bahut he...
he elm he mughe k tu he subhah ka bhula ....
sham ko mere hi dar pr ayega...
pr aagah krti hun tughe isliye me..
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18th June 2015, 10:26 AM
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meri kalam se ek aur poetry.....
zurrat teri he kabile tareef dil-e-gustakh
is bewafa aalam me mukkamal muhobatt dhoondne chala he..
tere ashkon se ye khudgarz zamana..
apni tapan mitayega!
tughe bikharta hua sametenge bhi to...
ek foonk se udane ko...
tughe denge tassaliyon k nuske ye...
kahenge waqt pade to tere kam ayenge...
aye dil meri na mane to azma k dekh lena..
tere jaise khilaune inhone khele aur tode bahut he...
he elm he mughe k tu he subhah ka bhula ....
sham ko mere hi dar pr ayega...
pr aagah krti hun tughe isliye me..
k tughe toota dekh mughse na raha jayega!!!
Bahut khoob ehsaas akshra...par aapse guzarish hai ise aap new thread me post karein jisse sabhi ki tawajjo hasil ho sake.....


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18th June 2015, 10:27 AM
shukriya madhu tareef ki khatir umeed he me apni kalam se apko aur tareefon k lafz bunne ka mauka dun!!!
   
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shukriya madhu tareef ki khatir umeed he me apni kalam se apko aur tareefon k lafz bunne ka mauka dun!!!
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15th July 2015, 09:54 PM
Akshara jee

Koshish ke ehsaas pasand aayen... likhte rahiye ... dil se daad

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