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This one is one of my favourites here
 Gazal- bahoot pyaari si meri ek bhabhi hai bhaiya se jyaada mujhpar pyaar lutati hai palako par baitha, rakhati khayaal mera Gudiya kahkar mujhe wo bulaati hai Koi na puchhe unaka naam mujhase Wo bahoot hi sharmaati hai Dekh unka pyaar mere liye Meri ye aankhe bhar aati hai Nazar na lage unako kisi Ajanbee ki Yehi duwa har baar dil me samati hai Garima ki bhabhi hai sabse niraali Kaise bataoon mujase kitna pyaar jatati hai Laakho me ek, is dil dhadkan Meri bhabhI bhabhi mujhase kehlaati hai Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd July 2005, 04:10 PM
This is the BEST writing of this competition for me... Expressed marvelously well...!
English Poem : Traditional Cinquain. A five lined poem consisting of first line 2 syllables, second line 4 syllables, third line 6 syllables, fourth line 8 syllables and finally the fifth line returning to 2 syllables. Stranger… Come near to me Hold my hand and sit down Tell me of the wonders you see Please, do… It’s true… I am born blind I feel you in my mind But can’t see your smiling eyes I know… Gently… Open your heart let me behold your soul I long to hear a sincere call Of yours… Oh, God… What a bliss when with joy in love we meet As words in some poetry sweet You, me… Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd July 2005, 05:16 PM
My Dear Pulkit, Congratualations My Love
**Lots Lots Of Flowers & Many Songs(I will be sending soon...lol...**) & From The Deepest Of MY Heart~Shukriya Bhi Kuboul Karon **Are Haan, Daad Bhi**Keep up the good work**Khush Rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**God bless You. Keep smilling....... **Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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23rd July 2005, 05:34 PM
Dear Pulkit,
Wow too good...congratulations!!! Sahi hai tumne comptetion jeet hi liya...so proud of you...Pehli baar tumhe itti gazalssssssssss ek saath likhte dekha...bata do hume kaun hai aapki inspiration...Chalo abhi jaldi se chocolate to khilao...comp jeeta hai yaar tumne...comeon me waiting...  palak =========================================== Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai ================================================== ================================================== ================ "Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." ================================================== ================================================== ================= |
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23rd July 2005, 05:42 PM
Dear Shimul,
Tumhari wishes ke liye shukriyaa...Tum to meri best frnd ho naa yahaan par.. so phool to tumse main loonga hai... and send some dosti waale acche se songs..... TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd July 2005, 05:45 PM
Dearest Palak,
Thanks sooo much for ur wshes yaar... Tum to jaanti ho naa kiski vajah se aaj yahaan hoon.. My inspiration, my muse.. my life... Usi ne to mujhe propel kiya, and she supported me 2.....she helped me sooo much...! I won this for Her.. Sirf aur sirf usko saara credit jaata hai.... Saocha na thha.. ejk copy-paster bhi kabhi competition jeetega.. Her love has made me better in everyhting.... Tum aise hi saath deti raho...Khayal rakho... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd July 2005, 05:50 PM
Pulkit,
Bhagvaan kare tum dono ka pyar hamesha uhin bana rahe...kabhi kisi ki nazar naa lage tumhare pyar ko... Take care buddy!!! Enjoy ur life to the fullest... Palak =========================================== Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai ================================================== ================================================== ================ "Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." ================================================== ================================================== ================= |
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23rd July 2005, 05:53 PM
Haan,
Ab to radiations bhi milne lage hain.. u know.. Aura Pyaar saccha hai to nazar kaise lagegi....Tum apna khayal rakho... TCLagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Keep it up -
23rd July 2005, 05:54 PM
141...Oommmmm maaa.......
 Congratulations....n....jubilations!!!!! GOOD GOOD!! ab kaam ki baat ......humari treat Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye, Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon, Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color] |
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23rd July 2005, 05:58 PM
Hey Bhaiya...
maine bola tha na ki aap ab mat likho I want to win.. par aap maane nahi.. not fair. dekho dekho mai kitani udaas hoon   heheheheh just kiddingCongrates Bhaiya mai jaanti thi ki is baar aap jeetoge.. wo isliye kyunki meri bhabhi aapke pichhe thi na.. so aapko unake liye hi jeetana tha.. bolo sach hai na.. haan aapne to ye pahale hi maan liya.. abhi mai dance karoon... hurray mere bhaiya jeet gaye.. dhinak dhin dhin.. bas bas ab mujhase nahi hoga.. as u know I m not well.. again congrates.. |
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23rd July 2005, 06:31 PM
Chote Bhaiya...!
I congratulate you from the depth of my heart...! I am proud of you...! 'Where there is a will, there is a way'...and you have proved that this quote is true...! and I am very happy!Meri ashirvaad hamesha toumhare saath hi hai...aur Uparwale se meri prartha hai ki toum zindagi ke har daur main vijayi ho...! Three cheers to you...! Apna khayaal rakhna...thik hai ? Bhaiya... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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23rd July 2005, 06:43 PM
I would like to thank all those who have encouraged us to
participate in the contests...and have been with us all through the way...! A special thanks to Rohin for organizing this competition and I would like to encourage more members of our family to take part in this initiative...! Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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23rd July 2005, 07:01 PM
Yes We Are Greatful To Rohin
Thank You Very Very Much For Starting This Thread Rohin **Khush Rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care**God bless You. Keep smilling....... **Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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23rd July 2005, 07:07 PM
Pulkit bhaaii..
Badhaayi ho.. Muqabala jitne ke liye..Mayank |
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23rd July 2005, 07:17 PM
oh ho, this was a very old news for me
 .lolzzzzzzzzzz. i knew it very before tht this time my buddy is gonna win this competion. hey pulkit congrats. i knew it u gonna win it.my dear friend at last i wud love to say ur hard work has actually paid off n it has brought about a realisation that devotion n faith are the real keys to success. keep it up. ab to tu gaya. abhi to tu aapni life patner ke kehne par jeeta. let me check the next topic first phir tujhse mein kahunghi , hey pulkit win this for me n i hope u wud keep my words too. lolzzzzz i m so happy for u but ya ek baat hai this news was old for me n know to make me happy u shud gv me treat. n i mean this time.congratulations n may u succed in every path of ur life. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitter.three cheers to my buddys success.hip hip hurrah. aaj mein upar, aasmaan neeche, aaj mein aage zamana hai ppeche. just want to dance n be happy for u. god bless u  mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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23rd July 2005, 08:21 PM
Dear Judwaa..
U shud be proud to be my judwaa.. dekho kitni tarakki kar raha hai tumhara bhaii.. 141... Record hai ab tak ka dare to try me... Lolz.. am blowing my own trumpet.... Part ka to aisa hai... aap delhi aaiye to sahi.. party bhi mil jaayegi Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd July 2005, 08:23 PM
Gudiya
I cud have let u win... but mujhe itne blean padhte ke ginti nahi thhi... next competition is urs pakka Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd July 2005, 08:26 PM
Bhaiya...!
Am proud to be ur brother...bahut kucch seekh hai aapse is competition me.. and hope that u will always keep teaching me like this Aaapk pyaar aur aashirwaad saath hai.. to i will succeed evrywhere Aap bhi khayal rakhiyega apna... I will Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd July 2005, 08:28 PM
Mayank bhai...
Thanks for the wishes Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd July 2005, 08:31 PM
Dear Jas
Ab kisi ne itne pyaar se ek request kii thi.. so i wanted to fulfill it.. Tum bhi pyaar se kahogi to tumhaare liye bhi jeet loonga... Thou shield aali baat yaad rakhna Lollzzzz....Aise hi saath rehnaa... I will keep fighting Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd July 2005, 10:39 PM
hey pulkit brother
hey yaar congratulations!!! u won, we won i am so happy duniya ki har kameyaabi tumahre kadam chumey ur sis luv u a lot...u r the best mubarak ho keep the spirits up much luv Priya DD ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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24th July 2005, 08:44 AM
Didi,
Till the time, this spirit of love is prevailing in our hearts, It will kep giving us confidence to carry on.. and our team is the Best.... Keep sprinkling your love and wishes on me... I Love alot too.... Apn acche se khayal rakhnaa Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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24th July 2005, 05:02 PM
Pulkit jitnaa to tumne thaa hi par tumne to follow on bhi bacha liyaa...log das das pe out ho gaye bhai ne century maar di..
khushi hai mujhe kyunki run tum maaro ya koi aur team to aapni hi hai na..lol Yunhi likhte raho aur khush raho.. Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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24th July 2005, 11:16 PM
pulkit bhayya...congrats....u deserved it....n even danny bhayya did deserve.....but u had to do it for some one special na
take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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25th July 2005, 10:04 AM
Dearest Anu bhai!!
Well.. Main to 40 points banakar hi araam se baithha thha...Amanush b made me fight harder and harder.... and becoz of him I got learn so much.... Aur team to humari hai hi...all of us in this family are one team.. yeh to pyaar se kehle khel lete hain Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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25th July 2005, 10:18 AM
Dear Karthik,
Yes.. I had to win this one for sure.. but really no one of us is a winner or loser as we all put in our 100%...I learnt a lot....and thats most important... Its good to see u around.. saw u online yesterday.. thot to leave a messgae but got Dc... neways.. hope u r taking good care... Do TC.. keep smiling Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Khush Rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**God bless You. Keep smilling....... **Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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