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Love Jab tak tum hum mile na the - 21st June 2014, 09:18 AM

Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Dil ko koi khushi na thi
Hothon par ye hasi na thi
Jeene ki ummid jo deti
Aisi koi dilkashi na thi
Dil ke zakham sile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Chamka hai yu naseeb ka taraa
Mil gaya humko pyar tumhara
Har waqt rahun saath tumhare
Ek pal tum bin nahi gawara
Gulshan mein gul khile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Tumse mila ye taufa pyar ka
Lamha khatam hua intezaar ka
Khushiyon ne hain thame haath
Mausam aaya hai ab karaar ka
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Mile hain ab hum juda na honge
Ek duje se khafa na honge
Rahe salamat pyar humara
khabhi bhi hum bewafa na honge
Hasraton ke ye kafile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the

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21st June 2014, 09:38 AM
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Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Dil ko koi khushi na thi
Hothon par ye hasi na thi
Jeene ki ummid jo deti
Aisi koi dilkashi na thi
Dil ke zakham sile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Chamka hai yu naseeb ka taraa
Mil gaya humko pyar tumhara
Har waqt rahun saath tumhare
Ek pal tum bin nahi gawara
Gulshan mein gul khile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Tumse mila ye taufa pyar ka
Lamha khatam hua intezaar ka
Khushiyon ne hain thame haath
Mausam aaya hai ab karaar ka
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Mile hain ab hum juda na honge
Ek duje se khafa na honge
Rahe salamat pyar humara
khabhi bhi hum bewafa na honge
Hasraton ke ye kafile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the

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Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Dil ko koi khushi na thi
Hothon par ye hasi na thi
Jeene ki ummid jo deti
Aisi koi dilkashi na thi
Dil ke zakham sile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Chamka hai yu naseeb ka taraa
Mil gaya humko pyar tumhara
Har waqt rahun saath tumhare
Ek pal tum bin nahi gawara
Gulshan mein gul khile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Tumse mila ye taufa pyar ka
Lamha khatam hua intezaar ka
Khushiyon ne hain thame haath
Mausam aaya hai ab karaar ka
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Mile hain ab hum juda na honge
Ek duje se khafa na honge
Rahe salamat pyar humara
khabhi bhi hum bewafa na honge
Hasraton ke ye kafile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the

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dili daad kabool karen
radhe radhe

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21st June 2014, 03:53 PM
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Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Dil ko koi khushi na thi
Hothon par ye hasi na thi
Jeene ki ummid jo deti
Aisi koi dilkashi na thi
Dil ke zakham sile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Chamka hai yu naseeb ka taraa
Mil gaya humko pyar tumhara
Har waqt rahun saath tumhare
Ek pal tum bin nahi gawara
Gulshan mein gul khile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Tumse mila ye taufa pyar ka
Lamha khatam hua intezaar ka
Khushiyon ne hain thame haath
Mausam aaya hai ab karaar ka
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Mile hain ab hum juda na honge
Ek duje se khafa na honge
Rahe salamat pyar humara
khabhi bhi hum bewafa na honge
Hasraton ke ye kafile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


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22nd June 2014, 10:43 AM
Wah Praneeta ji ,

Mohabbat ke samandar mein prem ki lehron ka baar baar aa ke
dil ko takrana aur kehna ki han han mujhe tum se ishq hai ..
Ek aisi sundar bhavna ka chitran kiya aapne apni nazm mein.

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Wah Praneeta ji ,

Mohabbat ke samandar mein prem ki lehron ka baar baar aa ke
dil ko takrana aur kehna ki han han mujhe tum se ishq hai ..
Ek aisi sundar bhavna ka chitran kiya aapne apni nazm mein.

Beautiful and truly romantic indeed.

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Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Dil ko koi khushi na thi
Hothon par ye hasi na thi
Jeene ki ummid jo deti
Aisi koi dilkashi na thi
Dil ke zakham sile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Chamka hai yu naseeb ka taraa
Mil gaya humko pyar tumhara
Har waqt rahun saath tumhare
Ek pal tum bin nahi gawara
Gulshan mein gul khile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Tumse mila ye taufa pyar ka
Lamha khatam hua intezaar ka
Khushiyon ne hain thame haath
Mausam aaya hai ab karaar ka
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Mile hain ab hum juda na honge
Ek duje se khafa na honge
Rahe salamat pyar humara
khabhi bhi hum bewafa na honge
Hasraton ke ye kafile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


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Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Dil ko koi khushi na thi
Hothon par ye hasi na thi
Jeene ki ummid jo deti
Aisi koi dilkashi na thi
Dil ke zakham sile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Chamka hai yu naseeb ka taraa
Mil gaya humko pyar tumhara
Har waqt rahun saath tumhare
Ek pal tum bin nahi gawara
Gulshan mein gul khile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Tumse mila ye taufa pyar ka
Lamha khatam hua intezaar ka
Khushiyon ne hain thame haath
Mausam aaya hai ab karaar ka
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Mile hain ab hum juda na honge
Ek duje se khafa na honge
Rahe salamat pyar humara
khabhi bhi hum bewafa na honge
Hasraton ke ye kafile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the

Wah.. Praneeta ji, namaskar..
Bohot khuub peshkash huyi hai. Bohot he achhi.
Likhte raheiN.
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Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Dil ko koi khushi na thi
Hothon par ye hasi na thi
Jeene ki ummid jo deti
Aisi koi dilkashi na thi
Dil ke zakham sile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Chamka hai yu naseeb ka taraa
Mil gaya humko pyar tumhara
Har waqt rahun saath tumhare
Ek pal tum bin nahi gawara
Gulshan mein gul khile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Tumse mila ye taufa pyar ka
Lamha khatam hua intezaar ka
Khushiyon ne hain thame haath
Mausam aaya hai ab karaar ka
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the


Mile hain ab hum juda na honge
Ek duje se khafa na honge
Rahe salamat pyar humara
khabhi bhi hum bewafa na honge
Hasraton ke ye kafile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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