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Kabhi door tumse na jaya karenge - 5th August 2014, 05:19 PM
kabhi door tum se na jaya karenge
eh wada hamesha nibhaya karenge

pada gar kabhi door jana bhi humko
bohut jald ghar laut aya karenge

hamen kam se kam apni tasweer dedo
isi se gham-e-dil bhulaya karenge

hansi khushbu, rukh chand, madmast aankhen
kisi aur men hum na paya karenge

sada saath chalne ki rah-e-wafa men
jo bhi shart chaho lagaya karenge

tere saath waqt-e-khushi ho ke gham ho
bade pyar se hum bitaya karenge

kabhi dono aag-e-judai pe chal kar
nahin ek duje ko jalaya karenge

hain apas men lipti hui do kaliyan
oh lab jab khulenge hansaya karenge

muhabbat se jo pesh aya karenge
oh sab ki nigahon me chaya karenge

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Waah bahaut khoob Mujeeb sahab ! Barjastagi zinda bayaan !!

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bahot hi khub ghazal hai..
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kabhi door tum se na jaya karenge
eh wada hamesha nibhaya karenge

pada gar kabhi door jana bhi humko
bohut jald ghar laut aya karenge

hamen kam se kam apni tasweer dedo
isi se gham-e-dil bhulaya karenge

hansi khushbu, rukh chand, madmast aankhen
kisi aur men hum na paya karenge

sada saath chalne ki rah-e-wafa men
jo bhi shart chaho lagaya karenge

tere saath waqt-e-khushi ho ke gham ho
bade pyar se hum bitaya karenge

kabhi dono aag-e-judai pe chal kar
nahin ek duje ko jalaya karenge

hain apas men lipti hui do kaliyan
oh lab jab khulenge hansaya karenge

muhabbat se jo pesh aya karenge
oh sab ki nigahon me chaya karenge

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बाकी एक बेहद खूबसूरत ग़ज़ल पर दाद क़ुबूल फरमाएं

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kabhi door tum se na jaya karenge
eh wada hamesha nibhaya karenge

pada gar kabhi door jana bhi humko
bohut jald ghar laut aya karenge

hamen kam se kam apni tasweer dedo
isi se gham-e-dil bhulaya karenge

hansi khushbu, rukh chand, madmast aankhen
kisi aur men hum na paya karenge

sada saath chalne ki rah-e-wafa men
jo bhi shart chaho lagaya karenge

tere saath waqt-e-khushi ho ke gham ho
bade pyar se hum bitaya karenge

kabhi dono aag-e-judai pe chal kar
nahin ek duje ko jalaya karenge

hain apas men lipti hui do kaliyan
oh lab jab khulenge hansaya karenge

muhabbat se jo pesh aya karenge
oh sab ki nigahon me chaya karenge

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Mujib ji.........bahut pyari rachna padne ka mokka diya hai aapne, aik aik lafz meiN pyar chalak rha hai...duaa karte hai aapki zindgi meiN hamesha yu hi pyar ka mausam rhe.

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Bohut bohut shukriya Sunita ji.

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kabhi door tum se na jaya karenge
eh wada hamesha nibhaya karenge

pada gar kabhi door jana bhi humko
bohut jald ghar laut aya karenge

hamen kam se kam apni tasweer dedo
isi se gham-e-dil bhulaya karenge

hansi khushbu, rukh chand, madmast aankhen
kisi aur men hum na paya karenge

sada saath chalne ki rah-e-wafa men
jo bhi shart chaho lagaya karenge

tere saath waqt-e-khushi ho ke gham ho
bade pyar se hum bitaya karenge

kabhi dono aag-e-judai pe chal kar
nahin ek duje ko jalaya karenge

hain apas men lipti hui do kaliyan
oh lab jab khulenge hansaya karenge

muhabbat se jo pesh aya karenge
oh sab ki nigahon me chaya karenge

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