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musaafir ke raste badalte rahe... (Bashir Badr ji) -
2nd September 2006, 12:08 AM
musaafir ke raste badalte rahe
muqaddar me chalna tha chalte rahe
koyi phoul sa haath kaaNdhe pe tha
mere paaNv sholon pe chalte rahe
mere raaste me ujaalaa rahaa
diye us ki aaNkhon ke jalate rahe
wo kya tha jise hamne Thukara diya
magar umr bhar haath malate rahe
mahobbat adaavat wafaa beruKhii
kiraaye ke ghar the badalte rahe
sunaa hai unhe bhii hawaa lag gayii
hawaaon ke jo ruKh badalte rahe
lipaT ke charaaGon se wo so gaye
jo phoulon pe karavaT badalte rahe
-- Bashir Badr ji
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sar pe saaya sa... -
2nd September 2006, 12:14 AM
sar pe saaya sa dast-e-duaa yaad hai
apne aaNgan me ik peD tha yaad hai
jiss me apnii parindon se tashbiih thii
tum ko skuul kii vo duaa yaad hai
aisaa lagtaa hai har imtahaaN ke liye
zindagii ko hamaaraa pataa yaad hai
maikade me azaaN sun ke roya bahut
is sharaabii ko dil se Khudaa yaad hai
main puraanii havelii ka pardaa mujhe
kuchh kaha yaad hai kuchh suna yaad hai
dast=hand
tashbiih=comparison
azaaN=call for prayer
-By Bashir Badr ji
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bhul shaayad bahut baDi kar li.. -
2nd September 2006, 12:17 AM
bhul shaayad bahut baDii kar li
dil ne duniyaa se dostii kar li
tum mahobbat ko khel kehte ho
humne barbaad zindagii kar li
uss ne dekha baDii inaayat se
aaNkho aaNkho me baat bhi kar li
aashiqii me bahut zaruurii hai
bewafaayii kabhi kabhii kar li
hum nahii jaante chiraaGon ne
kyon andheron se dostii kar li
dhaDakane dafn ho gayii hongii
dil me diiwaar kyon khaDii kar li
- By Bashir Badr ji
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3rd September 2006, 08:19 AM
parul ji
aapne bashir sahab ke itne nayab sher yahan per post kiye hain ki bus poocho mat
main bashir sahab ka likha pasand karta hoon ...
aaj aapke karna mere collection me bashir sahab ki kuch or anmol moti shamil ho gaye
thanks for the share it
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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4th September 2006, 02:23 PM
Dilip ji,
Aap ko pasand aaya jaan ke achha laga. apni collection bhi share karna, ok?... keep writting.
take care!
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18th September 2006, 06:54 AM
are parul dd kaisi hain aap??
na koi khoj na koi khabar.bhul hi gayin aap hume lagta hai.
waise aapne bahut hi pyari sharings daali hain dd.khaas taur se pehla kalaam bahut behtar laga.dil ko cheer sa gaya kaafi hadd tak.darkhwast itni hi karunge dd aapse ki aap bas aage v yunhi aati rahiyega in yahaan mehfilen sajane ke liye.
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18th September 2006, 10:20 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
are parul dd kaisi hain aap??
na koi khoj na koi khabar.bhul hi gayin aap hume lagta hai.
waise aapne bahut hi pyari sharings daali hain dd.khaas taur se pehla kalaam bahut behtar laga.dil ko cheer sa gaya kaafi hadd tak.darkhwast itni hi karunge dd aapse ki aap bas aage v yunhi aati rahiyega in yahaan mehfilen sajane ke liye.
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Aaisa to nahi ki main bhul jaau, to yeh kaise maan liya tumne... main to theek hun, hope you are fine too. bahut din baad apni didi ki yaad aayi, khair jo bhi hai achha laga ki tumhe bhi yeh ghazal's pasand aayi. parhte rehna aur likhte rehna...
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19th September 2006, 09:48 AM
mahobbat adaavat wafaa beruKhii
kiraaye ke ghar the badalte rahe
Waah Waah....
Waah Bashir jee Waah....
Kyaa soch hai... kuchh sabse aalag.
Aur Paruljee aapne to hame Bashirjee ka kadradaan bana diya.
Thanks alot. I hope ye silsila yaha nahi rukega.
Aap hame aur hum aapko yuhi In fankaaro ki khoobsoorat soch se waakif karwaate rahenge.
Dilip jee... Ap bhi Bashirjee ki koi gazhal post kijiye na.
Once again Thanks Parul.
Take Care.
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dil ko chhoo gayee har baat -
27th September 2006, 03:38 PM
jo baad dil ko na chuye bashir ke eho nahee saktee itne pyara lafzon se milwaya shukriya tumhara
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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3rd October 2006, 09:44 AM
Parul dear....
Bahut hi aachi post hai ye........shukriya ada karna chahonga ise hum sab ke ru-b-ru karne ke liye.....
tc.......
**(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)**
*·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·*
**(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)**
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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
AMAN RAHI
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9th October 2006, 01:42 PM
lovely work. keep it up
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8th November 2006, 12:56 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by bazm_e_bashar
mahobbat adaavat wafaa beruKhii
kiraaye ke ghar the badalte rahe
Waah Waah....
Waah Bashir jee Waah....
Kyaa soch hai... kuchh sabse aalag.
Aur Paruljee aapne to hame Bashirjee ka kadradaan bana diya.
Thanks alot. I hope ye silsila yaha nahi rukega.
Aap hame aur hum aapko yuhi In fankaaro ki khoobsoorat soch se waakif karwaate rahenge.
Dilip jee... Ap bhi Bashirjee ki koi gazhal post kijiye na.
Once again Thanks Parul.
Take Care.
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it's my Pleasure Aman ji,
Nice to know you like it... here is one more ghazal of Bashir badr ji
udaas aaNkhon se aaNsuu nahii nikalte hai
ye motiyon kii tarah siipiyon me palate hai
ghane dhue.N me farishte bhii aaNkh malte hai
tamaam raat khajuuron ke pe.D jalate hai
main shaah raah nahii, raaste ka patthar huN
yahaa savaar bhii paidal utar kar chalate hai
unhe kabhii na bataanaa main unkii aaNkhen huN
woh log phoul samajhkar mujhe masalate hai
ye ek pe.D hai, aa is se milakar ro le.n hum
yahaa se tere mere raaste badalate hai
kayii sitaaron ko main jaantaa huN bachpan se
kahii bhii jaauN mere saath saath chalate hai
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8th November 2006, 04:52 AM
kayii sitaaron ko main jaantaa huN bachpan se
kahii bhii jaauN mere saath saath chalate hai
-BAshir Badr
Sahi hai...
Kuchh shayar sidha dil pe dastak dete hai....
Once again, Parulji...
Shukriyaa aapka....
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hai hausla -
11th November 2006, 11:17 AM
mana ki koi sath nahi
tanha hun is waqt
tuti hunN par bikhari nahi
na hua hausla hi pastt
sach hai ki dagar kathin hai
aashan nahi safar
na hi koi rahnuma hai
jo bane mera humsafar
achcha hi hua tune mujhe daga de diya
soye hue junun ko phir se jaga diya
nadaN thi tere ishq main khud ko fana kiya
ho bhala teri bewafai ka jisne fir humeN zinda kiya
fir se wahi junoo hai bulandion par hai hausla
tere har gunah ka mai khud karungi faisla
Bhavna
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I Like It -
12th November 2006, 06:32 PM
Bhavana I Thought U R A Good Poeter.
Proceed It . Never Came At End . When Ur Near A River .
Go Proceed .
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Just For U -
13th November 2006, 10:12 AM
Badi hasin aur khubsurat hoti hai Yade,
Bhulanese bhi nahi bhulai jati yeh yade,
Insan ko palbhar ke liye Muskandeti hai yade,
Kabhi rulati aur kabhi hasati hai yade,
har zij mit jati hai lekin nahi mitati yade,
hum rahe ya na rahe per hamesha rahengi hamari yade,
Akele me tanhai ko dur karegi hamari ye yade,
Ek din hum nahi rahenge bus rah jayengi hamari yade.............
Apke hone wale dost :- RAJ
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22nd November 2006, 08:05 PM
wahhh... kya ek se badhke ek ghazle post kii hai aap ne. bashir ji ka main bahut bada fan huun.. aur unme kuchh aur baat hai jo muze unke kalaam acchhe lagte hai... really nice. keep it up.
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Bashir Badr ji ki ek aur ghazal... -
23rd November 2006, 10:02 AM
Ye chaandanii bhii jin ko chhute huye daratii hai
Duniyaa unhii phoulon ko pairon se masalatii hai
Shoharat ki bulandii bhii pal bhar ka tamaasha hai
Jiis Daal pe baithe ho woh tuut bhii sakatii hai
Labo.n me chingaarii jaise koyii rakh de
Yun yaad terii shab bhar siine me sulagatii hai
Aa jaata hai khud khench kar dil siine se patarii par
Jab raat kii sarahad se iik rel guzaratii hai
Aansuu kabhii palakon par taa der nahii rukte
Uud jaate hai ae panchhii jab shaakh lachaktii hai
Khush rang parindon ke laut aane ke din aaye
Bichhade huye milte hai jab barf pighalatii hai
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Bhut achee Gazal likee hai parul ji -
24th November 2006, 09:52 PM
Hello parul ji Aap ki Gazal mujhe bahut achee lagi, aap use me rah ker bhi itnee saaf or hindi me gazal likh letee hai mujhe tajjub huaa, aap isee trah likhte rahen mujhe aapki gazal ka intezaar rahega
Shukeriya
Aap ka Dost SHAAN
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Tuti-si-kashtii -
18th December 2006, 09:55 PM
wow Bhavnajii bahot hiii achcha likha hai aapne..aa f r ee n.
Ek choti se peshkash..not mine.
"Woh Bichda is Ada se -k-Root-hi badal gayii..
Ek shaqs -jo- saare -shehar- ko -viraan- kar gaya."
" Hasne wale meri tuti-si-kashti-ko na dekh..
-k-honsla-ab bhi bahot hai -tufaan-se takrane ka."
i hope shayad aapko pasand aaye..
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9th January 2007, 05:26 PM
sach main parul ji apne Bashir ji ki nazme yahan par post karke bahut hi
nek kaam miya hai.
Bashir ji mere pasandeeda shayar hai, agar apke collection main kuch aur ghazalen ho Bashir ji ki to post kijiyega.
Thanks very much
-Dheerendra
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9th January 2007, 10:56 PM
kisi ke paas udaybhanu hans ki rubaaiya ho to plz post kijiyega.
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10th January 2007, 01:11 AM
Parul ji..
Behad khoobsoorat collection hai ye... Thanx for sharing!
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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26th February 2007, 04:58 AM
mahobbat adaavat wafaa beruKhii
kiraaye ke ghar the badalte rahe
ek dum sahi baat ...aaj feel bhi ho gaya ...
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1st July 2007, 07:32 PM
waah waah! Parul jee aap ne to motiyaaN hi bikher daali.. Shukiya, inaayat,karam, mehrbaani,....
Mayank
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3rd July 2007, 09:13 PM
Na ji bhar ke dekhaa na kuchh baat ki
Badii aarazuu thi mulaaqaat kii
kayii saal se kuchh Khabar hi nahin
kahaan din guzaaraa kahaan raat ki
ujaalon ki pariyaan nahaane lagin
nadi gungunaaii Khayaalaat kii
main chup thaa to chaltii hawa ruk gayi
zubaan sab samajhte hain jazbaat ki
Sitaaron ko shaayad Khabar hi nahin
musaafir ne jaane kahaan raat kii
muqaddar mere chashm-e-pura'ab kaa
barasti huii raat barasaat kii
Bashir Badar
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3rd July 2007, 09:20 PM
Khush rahe yaa bahut udaas rahe
zindagii tere aas paas rahe
chaand in badaliyon se niklegaa
koi aayegaa dil ko aas rahe
hum mohabbat ke phuul hain shaayad
koi kaanaa bhii aas paas rahe
mere seene mein is tarah bas jaa
merii saanson mein terii baas rahe
aaj hum sab ke saath Khuub hanse
aur phir der tak udaas rahe
Bashir Badar
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thank you all... -
1st December 2007, 11:13 AM
waqt-e-rukhsat kahi taare kahi jugnuu aaye
haar pehnaane mujhe phuul se baazuu aaye
bas gayi hai mere ehsaas mein ye kaisi mahek
koi khushbuu main lagaau terii khushbuu aaye
maine din raat khuda se ye duaa maangi thi
koi aahat na ho dar pe mere aur tuu aaye
us ki baaten ke gul-o-lala pe shabnam barse
sab ko apnaane ka us shokh ko jaaduu aaye
un dinon aap ka aalam bhi ajab aalam hai
shokh khaaya huaa jaise koii aahuu aaye
us ne chhu kar mujhe patthar se phir insaan kiya
muddaton baad meri aankh mein aansuu aaye
waqt-e-ruKhsat : time of departure
gul-o-lala : flowers and tulips; shokh : cheerful
aahuu : deer
- By Bashir Badr ji
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1st December 2007, 10:31 PM
Dard ka ehsas janna hai to pyar kar ke dekho
Apni aankhon main kisi ko utar kar dekho
Chot un ko lage gi aansoo tumhein aa jayein ge
Ye ehsas janna ho to dil haar kar dekho
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3rd December 2007, 11:02 PM
Pyaar ki aanch se to patthar bhi pighal jata hai,
sache dil se sath de to naseeb bhi badal jata hai,
Pyaar ki rahon par mil jaye sacha hamsafar,
To kitna bhi gira hua insaan bhi sambhal jata hai.
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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4th December 2007, 09:53 PM
Kyun pyaar karne ki hadein hoti hein,
Kyun dil dene ki waje hoti hein,Kyun jazbaaton ko dabana padta hai,
Kyun iss dil ko samjana padta hai,
Kyun har dil ko ye mehsoos nahin hota,
Kyun sabko ye manzoor nahin hota,
Kyun dil se dil nahin milta,
Kyun pyaar ka phool nahin khilta,
Kyun dil ke naghme dil nahin gaata,
Dil mein kya hai ye keh nahin pata,
Kya dil dene ki yahi saza hai,
Kya pyaar karne mein yahi mazaa hai?
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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