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Wo.. - 26th July 2002, 04:40 PM

Hi to all of you,

this is other phase of my poem, hope you all enjoy it.
and please... your most welcome for suggestions.

Thanks,


Choo jaati hai meri seemaeN
wo aksar mere kareeb aakar,
muskurakar nikal jaati hai wo
sholoN ko hawa dikhakar!

Shaayad wo hamaari umroN ke
daayare se bhi anjaan nahi,
sochta hooN shayad wo apni
shoch se bhi naadaan nahi!

Uski ye sharaarat hi sahi
meri to uljhaneN badhati hai,
or taaqat de mere Imaan ko, ey Khuda
insaan hooN dil me khayaal -e-mohobbat,
uski taraf le hi jaati hai !!



Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

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Thumbs up Kya Khub.... - 26th July 2002, 05:51 PM

Bahot Acche,


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Pasand Aayi.

Likhte Rahiega


Tute Hue Dil Ke Tukde....

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20th September 2005, 01:10 AM

Ati soundar lekh hai...Chaand Ji !



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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hi - 22nd September 2005, 07:11 PM

hello

nice poem

koi aapke dil ko cho jaata hai aur aapki shayri yaha majood sabhi logo ke dilo ko cho jaati hai

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Re: Wo.. - 7th April 2006, 06:05 PM

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Originally posted by Chaand
Hi to all of you,

this is other phase of my poem, hope you all enjoy it.
and please... your most welcome for suggestions.

Thanks,


Choo jaati hai meri seemaeN
wo aksar mere kareeb aakar,
muskurakar nikal jaati hai wo
sholoN ko hawa dikhakar!

Shaayad wo hamaari umroN ke
daayare se bhi anjaan nahi,
sochta hooN shayad wo apni
shoch se bhi naadaan nahi!

Uski ye sharaarat hi sahi
meri to uljhaneN badhati hai,
or taaqat de mere Imaan ko, ey Khuda
insaan hooN dil me khayaal -e-mohobbat,
uski taraf le hi jaati hai !!

Adaab Chaand Saheb
kya baat kahi hain aapne. maja aagaya
aapki shayri ka kaayal to main suru se hi hoon aur woh baat aaj tak barkaraar hai Janab.
meri daad qubool kariyega chaand saheb

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Hi - 8th April 2006, 10:13 AM

Hi Chand

Choo jaati hai meri seemaeN
wo aksar mere kareeb aakar,


Tum etna achcha kiyon likhte ho ?

thanks


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8th April 2006, 11:41 AM

acchi hai...


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8th April 2006, 12:19 PM

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