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Baad Muddat ke mera pyar aya hai -
17th November 2014, 03:40 PM
Baad muddat ke koi mehfil me aaj aya hai.
Mera hamdam hii nahi vo mera hamsaya hai.
Badli bahar chaman phir yuN mehkane laga ,
Milne aaj khaksaar ko phir uska yaar aya hai.
Bus mein nahiN jazbaat aur dil hai bekaaboo ,
Kaliyan bhi mehak uthi gule gulzaar aya hai.
Sajda karuN isko ya pehle rab ko yaad karoon .
Aaj barson ke baad chehre pe nikhar aya hai .
Roko nahin jee bhar ke use dekh lene do mujhe,
Aaj laut ke phir se mera khoya hua pyar aya hai.
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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17th November 2014, 06:33 PM
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Originally Posted by Hamdam
Baad muddat ke koi mehfil me aaj aya hai.
Mera hamdam hii nahi vo mera hamsaya hai.
Badli bahar chaman phir yuN mehkane laga ,
Milne aaj khaksaar ko phir uska yaar aya hai.
Bus mein nahiN jazbaat aur dil hai bekaaboo ,
Kaliyan bhi mehak uthi gule gulzaar aya hai.
Sajda karuN isko ya pehle rab ko yaad karoon .
Aaj barson ke baad chehre pe nikhar aya hai .
Roko nahin jee bhar ke use dekh lene do mujhe,
Aaj laut ke phir se mera khoya hua pyar aya hai.
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waaahhhh kya baat hai Sanjay saahab....... mazaa aa gayaa aapke is taaza kalaam ko padh kar...
behad roomani kalaam hai aur muhabbat se labrez ..... likhte rahiye
Shaad...
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17th November 2014, 08:52 PM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob, dheroN daad.
Dekho mera chehra, ye aqs-e-sadaaqat hai
Iss duniya meN meri, pehchaan sharaafat hai
Duniya ke rasmoN se, anjaan meri duniya
Allah ka banda huN, Allah se nisbat hai
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17th November 2014, 09:04 PM
Waah waah ...sanjay jee...kya khubsurat kalaam likha h aapne.....daad kubul karein
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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17th November 2014, 09:51 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Hamdam
Baad muddat ke koi mehfil me aaj aya hai.
Mera hamdam hii nahi vo mera hamsaya hai.
Badli bahar chaman phir yuN mehkane laga ,
Milne aaj khaksaar ko phir uska yaar aya hai.
Bus mein nahiN jazbaat aur dil hai bekaaboo ,
Kaliyan bhi mehak uthi gule gulzaar aya hai.
Sajda karuN isko ya pehle rab ko yaad karoon .
Aaj barson ke baad chehre pe nikhar aya hai .
Roko nahin jee bhar ke use dekh lene do mujhe,
Aaj laut ke phir se mera khoya hua pyar aya hai.
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Very nice Hamdam................................
last one was really good ..............
ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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18th November 2014, 01:03 AM
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Originally Posted by Hamdam
Baad muddat ke koi mehfil me aaj aya hai.
Mera hamdam hii nahi vo mera hamsaya hai.
Badli bahar chaman phir yuN mehkane laga ,
Milne aaj khaksaar ko phir uska yaar aya hai.
Bus mein nahiN jazbaat aur dil hai bekaaboo ,
Kaliyan bhi mehak uthi gule gulzaar aya hai.
Sajda karuN isko ya pehle rab ko yaad karoon .
Aaj barson ke baad chehre pe nikhar aya hai .
Roko nahin jee bhar ke use dekh lene do mujhe,
Aaj laut ke phir se mera khoya hua pyar aya hai.
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Waah,Sanjay Ji, Kya khoob likhaa hai aapne...!
Iss khuubsurat kalaam ke liye hamari taraf se bhi dher saare badhaaiyaN...!
Khush raheiN
DuaaoN ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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Aazam -
18th November 2014, 11:40 AM
bahut khoob.....heart touching lines
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18th November 2014, 12:01 PM
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Waah waah ...sanjay jee...kya khubsurat kalaam likha h aapne.....daad kubul karein
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Aru bhai,
lagta hai sohbat ka asar hone laga hai,
Ye dil aap ke khayalon mein khone laga hai
Shukriya janab
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18th November 2014, 12:05 PM
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waaahhhh kya baat hai Sanjay saahab....... mazaa aa gayaa aapke is taaza kalaam ko padh kar...
behad roomani kalaam hai aur muhabbat se labrez ..... likhte rahiye
Shaad...
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Sameer Shad bhai ,
Apki itni lambi waah dekh ker thora dar lagne laga hai , ki jab daad itni bdiya hai tau galtee karne per daant bhi itni lambi paregi ..
Khair abhi aapki daad ser mathe per,
Sanjay Sehgal
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18th November 2014, 12:06 PM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob, dheroN daad.
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Iftakaar Sahib yeh aapki zaranazaji hai jo aap itna samman de rahe rahe hain ..
yuN hi aate rahiye and hum sab ka hausala badate rahiye .
Sanjay sehgal
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18th November 2014, 12:08 PM
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Very nice Hamdam................................
last one was really good ..............
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Thanks Mayoos sahib for liking the spirit behind the statment made by me .
Sanjay sehgal
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18th November 2014, 12:12 PM
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Waah,Sanjay Ji, Kya khoob likhaa hai aapne...!
Iss khuubsurat kalaam ke liye hamari taraf se bhi dher saare badhaaiyaN...!
Khush raheiN
DuaaoN ke saath
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Danny Sahib ,
Mera pyar bhara namaskar..
Aap humare SDC ke bahut purane aur sayane ( age wise/ seniority wise)
member haiN. Apko apke kalaam pe dekh kar mujhe kitnee khushi hui , ye main bayan nahin karta sakta ..
Abhi tau bahut kuch seekhna baaki hai shayree meiN .. Bus aap yun hi aate rahiye and hum logon ko apne aashirwaad se nawazte rahiye ..
Thank you so much Sir
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18th November 2014, 12:14 PM
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bahut khoob.....heart touching lines
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Azam Bhai ,
Main apka apne doston ke saath SDC pariwar mein swagat karta hun aur
umeed karta huN ki aapka sath aur pyar humein milkta rahega .
Duaon ke Sath .,
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18th November 2014, 04:36 PM
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Baad muddat ke koi mehfil me aaj aya hai.
Mera hamdam hii nahi vo mera hamsaya hai.
Badli bahar chaman phir yuN mehkane laga ,
Milne aaj khaksaar ko phir uska yaar aya hai.
Bus mein nahiN jazbaat aur dil hai bekaaboo ,
Kaliyan bhi mehak uthi gule gulzaar aya hai.
Sajda karuN isko ya pehle rab ko yaad karoon .
Aaj barson ke baad chehre pe nikhar aya hai .
Roko nahin jee bhar ke use dekh lene do mujhe,
Aaj laut ke phir se mera khoya hua pyar aya hai.
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Kya baat hai, bahut khoobsurat ehsaas, sabhi sher tareef ke Kabil hai
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19th November 2014, 01:45 PM
Bahut hi khoobsurat jazbaat aur nazuk ehsaas...
bahut sari daad...sanjay ji.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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Kya baat hai, bahut khoobsurat ehsaas, sabhi sher tareef ke Kabil hai
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sunita ji ....jo apko humara kalan pasan.aya.
Der se reply kerne ke liye maufi chahunga.
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26th April 2015, 04:18 PM
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Bahut hi khoobsurat jazbaat aur nazuk ehsaas...
bahut sari daad...sanjay ji.
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Shukriya Janab Madhu ji ....jo aap ne humari ghazal ko saraha.
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