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Love Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari - 30th March 2009, 10:44 AM

SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,

AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....


AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................


Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari

har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari

Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari

Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari

Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari

Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari

Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari


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30th March 2009, 11:57 AM

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SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,

AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....


AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................

Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari

har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari

Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari

Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari

Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari

Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari

Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari
Wow! Oye Purvi tussi to bade romantic ho yaar ............wo spcl. person to tumhari is ghazal se ghayal hojaega .........bht hi khoobsurat ghazal hai........anythng related to romance is very appealing to me........ths is the best one KEEP IT UP
   
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30th March 2009, 12:17 PM

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SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,

AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....


AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................


Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari

har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari

Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari

Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari

Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari

Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari

Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari
well..........before appreciating, i wud love to ask "kaun hai woh khushnaseeb"


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30th March 2009, 12:31 PM

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SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,

AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....


AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................

Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari

har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari

Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari

Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari

Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari

Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari

Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari
All i can say is........

Mujh ko na apna hosh na duniyaa kaa hosh hai
Mast hoke baithaa hoon tumhaare Khayaal mein


Taaron se puuchh lo merii dastan-e-zindagii
Raaton ko jaagataa hoon tumhaare Khayaal mein .....
   
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wah wah dear bahut payri ghazal likhi hai keep it up



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SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,

AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....


AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................

Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari

har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari

Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari

Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari

Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari

Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari

Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari



it's really a romantic one ............. kon hai jo sapno me aaya , kon hai ko dil me samaya..........keep it up............


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SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,

AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....


AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................

Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari

har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari

Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari

Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari

Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari

Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari

Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari


it's AWESOME.............PURVI diiii....................very romantic.....keep it up


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Wow! Oye Purvi tussi to bade romantic ho yaar ............wo spcl. person to tumhari is ghazal se ghayal hojaega .........bht hi khoobsurat ghazal hai........anythng related to romance is very appealing to me........ths is the best one KEEP IT UP
Hi naaz,

Are yaar abhi tumne muje jaana hee kitana hai... mein to bahot hee ****ntic hoon ................

thanks a lot for appriciation.

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well..........before appreciating, i wud love to ask "kaun hai woh khushnaseeb"
......................................, Raaz ki baatei.N raaz hee rahe to accha hai..................


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......................................, Raaz ki baatei.N raaz hee rahe to accha hai..................
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Purvi dii Aap sach me bahot romantic hai, aapki romani gazlon ne itna bata diya.
Thanks for sharing such a good "Gazal". Keep up. Keep sharing.

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Hi naaz,

Are yaar abhi tumne muje jaana hee kitana hai... mein to bahot hee ****ntic hoon ................

thanks a lot for appriciation.

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All i can say is........

Mujh ko na apna hosh na duniyaa kaa hosh hai
Mast hoke baithaa hoon tumhaare Khayaal mein


Taaron se puuchh lo merii dastan-e-zindagii
Raaton ko jaagataa hoon tumhaare Khayaal mein .....

Thanks for reading and appriciating this Baqtiarjee,

Meine to yeh ghazal kisi khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai.... par aap ne yeh sher kiske liye likhe hai????

waqyi bahot acche hai....

yunhi likhte rahiye

khush rahiye

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Pyaari Di,
Ghazal ki ehesaas to lajawab hai ...main to ehi soch rahi hun gar Di abhi aise ghazal kahne lagi jij se to jij ka kya halat hoga ..Hi re

ghazal bahot hi achhi hai ...aap pahle se behtar ghazal kahne lagi ho ...mujhe to aapki har thread achha lagta hai

apna khayal rakhiyega
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Nice work,

So romantic, Best wishes, keep writing,

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SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,

AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....


AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................

Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari

har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari

Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari

Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari

Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari

Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari

Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari



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wah wah dear bahut payri ghazal likhi hai keep it up
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superb purvi ji................


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it's really a romantic one ............. kon hai jo sapno me aaya , kon hai ko dil me samaya..........keep it up............
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meri ghazal padhne aur sarhane ke liye aap ki shukra guzaar hoon

aage bhee yunhi padhte rahiyega

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it's AWESOME.............PURVI diiii....................very romantic.....keep it up
Hi, Lamha

Thanks for appriciation Dear...

It has to be romentic, I've written for someone sp.

keep smiling

God bless you

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6th April 2009, 02:59 PM

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Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari

Oye Hoye Di.. How romantic and chooo chweeet..

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Purvi dii Aap sach me bahot romantic hai, aapki romani gazlon ne itna bata diya.
Thanks for sharing such a good "Gazal". Keep up. Keep sharing.

Suna hai pyar me nind ud jati hai,
koi humse bhi pyar kare Kambakhat
Hume nind bahot aati hai
AAdab,

Ghazal padhne aur housla afzayee ke liye aap ki shukra guzaar hoon.

Yunhi saath dete rahiyega..Khush rahiye

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Are yaar is ghazal ko dekhkar to koi gunjaish hi nhi bachti ki tum kitni romantic ho
HUmmmmmmmmm......... Accha hai.... aur abhi bhi koi shaq ho to.......Next ghazal mei.N woh bhi dur kar dungi......

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Pyaari Di,
Ghazal ki ehesaas to lajawab hai ...main to ehi soch rahi hun gar Di abhi aise ghazal kahne lagi jij se to jij ka kya halat hoga ..Hi re

ghazal bahot hi achhi hai ...aap pahle se behtar ghazal kahne lagi ho ...mujhe to aapki har thread achha lagta hai

apna khayal rakhiyega
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Pyaari Diya......

Yeh tumhara pyaar hai jo meri har koshish ko pasand karta hai....

apna pyaar yunhi banaye rakhna

Hamesha khush raho

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SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,

AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....


AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................

Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari

har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari

Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari

Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari

Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari

Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari

Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari
Bahot Khoob likha hai aapne Purvi jii.....................So Romantic.............
Aise hi likhti Rahiye

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Nice work,

So romantic, Best wishes, keep writing,

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Smile Thanks a lot - 11th April 2009, 12:17 PM

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superb purvi ji................


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aap ki comment se mera housla aur bhee badhta hai, shukriya dost... aise hee apna saath dete rahena

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Glad to know that u like this..........

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Bahot Khoob likha hai aapne Purvi jii.....................So Romantic.............
Aise hi likhti Rahiye

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Fezan jee

Housla afzaayee ke liye tah-e-dil se aap ki shukraguzaar hoon...

Yunhi saath dete rahiyega

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