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main kalla rehna chaonda (my first poem)
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Angry main kalla rehna chaonda (my first poem) - 4th November 2011, 12:27 PM

[COLOR="rgb(85, 107, 47)"][COLOR="rgb(85, 107, 47)"][/COLOR][/COLOR]main kalla rehna chaunda haa dukh saath mera na chad de ne eh nauh mere ne ungla de main wad deya mud jamde ne main mansarowar ja baitha uss jheel ch gotey la baitha iss jagg toh doori paoni si ban moti sipi jaa baitha par bhul baitha si hansa nu jo firde moti labhde ne main kalla ............. main pathar hoya dareya da ik weham ke ho kathor geya par weg pani da tej wada mainu reta karke khor gea hun aan kinare baithe haa kanda wich loki bharde ne main kalla,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, main boond akhiri khooh di hoya tall te jake rehan lagga pae peyas na muki lokan di khoo nu vi soka pain lagga main boond akhiri kyon hoya mainu peen nu loki larde ne main kalla,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
   
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10th December 2011, 12:43 PM

kaim aa bai g...i loved it...bt thoda thik tra post kro..... really liked ur first poem...keep it up... u gonna rock soon..
   
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