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Question saaha nu alvida - 4th November 2011, 02:41 PM

saaha nu alwida keh challe hun khaurey kider jawange par ehna sajna maan kari asi fer vi tehnu chahwange tere layi mudkey awange ban full kidre khid jawange ik wari laike mehak wekhi wich saaha de bas jawange saaha nu,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, tere dil nu peed je sadegi ban hanju naini aawange tu unjal bhar bhar pee jawi tere dil di agg bujhawange tere dil nu haula kardange fir mud asmani jawange saaha nu,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, koi raat kaali je tang karu asi ban taara chad awange tu sanu tukk tukk wehndi rahi ban neend naini sao jawange sari raat guzarke tere naal din chad de hi mud awange saaha nu,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, yadan di dhup je sek dawu asi vi rukh ban jawange tu aakey chaanvi beh jawi pateya di pakhi jhlawange saah tere naal watawange har saah naal ishq kamawage saaha nu je tere tan nu pyas laggi kaniyan di paudi lahwange tere tan de kothe utrange asi teri pyas bhujawange wich leel tere ho jawange fir mudke na jawange saaha nu,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
   
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10th December 2011, 12:45 PM

sohna likhia..bt plz commas te proper spacing kria kro...... keep up the gud work..
   
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