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Arrow mere kuch jajbaat........ - 14th May 2004, 09:05 PM

Hi friends....
Aaj jo mein likh rahi hoon wo koi shayri nahi koi gazal nahi....bas mere dil ke kuch jajbaat hai.....jinhe kuch lafjo mein jod kar aapke saamne pesh kar rahi hoon.....apne ghar se bahut door hu isliye bahut udaas hu.....per yahi udaasi aapke saath baant rahi hu......shayad kam ho jaaye...


wo gujra hua har pal dil ko bada rulaata hai
jab bhi mujhe apna watan yaad aata hai

wo baarish ki boondon mein sadkoN pe chalna
wo gir ke sambhalna wo doston ka hasna
na jaane kyu wo waqt tham sa jaata hai
jab bhi mujhe apna watan yaad aata hai

wo bhai ka gussa wo behan ka ladna
wo kuch der baad hi phir se pyar karna
na jaane kyu dil ko bada tadpaata hai
jab bhi mujhe apna watan yaad aata hai

wo college naa jaake picture mein jaana
wo doston ke saath dinbhar picnic manana
na jaane kyu chupke se hasa jaata hai
jab bhi mujhe apna watan yaad aata hai

wo jab bhi kabhi khud se gamgeen hona
wo mummi ki godi mein sir rakh ke rona
na jaane kyu mujhe har apna waapis bulata hai
jab bhi mujhe apna watan yaad aata hai....


aapki ,
pari


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14th May 2004, 11:10 PM

Yeh daulat bhi lelon yeh shohrat bhi lelon bhale chheenlon mujhse meri jaawani magar mujhko lautadon bachpan ka sawan woh kagaz ki kashti woh baarish ka pani...

Dear Pari Jee, likhha bohot khub hai aapne. By the way, woh Chaand ka jawab main baad mein dungi lekin main bhuli nahin abhi tak...I thought you were so sad so I came here instead. Yaad tou aata hoga lekin keya kijiye...itne sare dost hai aapke yeaha par...mujhe dekhiye na aap sabhi tou ho jo mere aapne hai aur isshi mein hi main khush hun.......Main samajhsakti hun, it isn't easy...keya kahun...ek gana: Bachpan chala gaaya te jaawaani chali gaayi Zindegi di keemti nishani chali gaayi...singer: Gurdas Jee. ha ha ha ha...bachpan ko hi dekhiyega aur kuch nahin...ab yeh gana hai maine thodi hi na gaaya...ok now another one which I really like...Zamane mein sabhi ko milte hai gham tum na ghabrana yeaha haar raat ki subha hai humdam tum na ghabrana...Churalon tum khushi ke pal Muqaddar ke khazane se bhala kab dur hote hai yeh gham aansoon bahane se tumhare sath ho na ho yeh alam tum na ghabrana...Hariharan Jee ki aawaaz mein hai yeh...suna hai aapne? I really Love to listen to this one...Dilki gehraion se shukriya qabul kijiye aur muskura dijiyega, ok? Khush rahiye yeh Duwaon ke sath izazat chahungi. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.

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hi - 14th May 2004, 11:25 PM

Zamane mein sabhi ko milte hai gham tum na ghabrana yeaha haar raat ki subha hai humdam tum na ghabrana..
.Churalon tum khushi ke pal Muqaddar ke khazane se bhala kab dur hote hai yeh gham aansoon bahane se tumhare sath ho na ho yeh alam tum na ghabrana

shimul ji waqui behad khoobsurat geet hai ye......maine pehle nahi suna tha per ab jaroor sunugi....
aapne sahi kaha..ki yaha itne saare dost hai ki jo sabhi apne hai...phir bhi man kabhi kabhi bhatak jaata hai un purani galiyon mein.......kya karein dil to paagal hai......
magar aaj aapka reply padh kar bahut achha laga...sakoon sa mila...
bas aapse yahi aasha ki aage bhi kabhi jab ye kadam dagmagaae to aap yahi rahiyega mujhe sahara dene ke liye...
take care....
with a bigggggggggg smile...
aapki dost,
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14th May 2004, 11:40 PM

Dear Pari Jee, main rahungi sath sath baas Uparwala ki marzi ho tou.......aapko sukoon mili hai jankar dilko bohot achha laga...yun hi muskurate rahiyega. My blessing always with you. Waise tou sabhi ke liye hi hai aur hamesha rahegi. I know it's not easy but that's why we friends are here, hai na? Khush rahiye yeh Duwa hamesha rahegi. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.

Keep smilling.......


*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
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hi - 14th May 2004, 11:52 PM

hi pari....
kuch din hwe wapis lotehwe...ghar to yad aye ga na ...
magar...achakiya jo bant li yeh udasi aap ne ham se..
lafzon ka yehi to maza hay na yar...
koi sun ne wala nahi bhi mile to apne aap se
bant liye jatehain.....lekin yahan kitne hi dost hain
jo aap ki is udasi main aap ko hansane or
khush karne ki koshish karte hon gain......
acha likha hay aapne...jazbaat ..majboriyon ki kahan sunte hain..
ainda bhi likhti rehna..
or pana khiyal rakhna..apni studies ka bhi..
take care..


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Re: mere kuch jajbaat........ - 15th May 2004, 10:16 AM

wo bhai ka gussa wo behan ka ladna
wo kuch der baad hi phir se pyar karna
na jaane kyu dil ko bada tadpaata hai
jab bhi mujhe apna watan yaad aata hai


Pari ji
aap ki gazal ki pratham pankti ne hi mujhe bhawook kar diya...poori gazal to jaise dil ka aaina hai...dil ko choo liya aapne.....mein baakhoobi samjhta hoon us dard ko jo apni jamin se door rehne par hota hai.,,,,aur behad samaan karta hoon aapki is khoobsurat rachna ka ,,jiske dwara aapne apne mann ki bebasi ko jabaan di hai....pardesh mein paisa hai,,har tarah ka aisho- aaram hai,,magar apni maa ka aanchal aur apni jamin ki soundhi soundhi khushboo nahin hai....apne log nahin hai ,,apni jabaan nahin hai aur apni tehzeeb nahin hai....ek geet ke bole yaa aa gaye(film: kabuliwala)...
"e mere pyare watan....e mere bichde chaman ....tujh pe dil qurbaan.............tere daaman se jo aaye un hawaon ko salaam,,choom loon mein us juba ko kis pe aaye tera naam...............sabse pyari subha teri sabse rangee teri shaam ,,tujh pe dil qurbaan..........."
aapki khubsurat rachna ke liye meri dil se nikli daad kubool kijiye.....saath hi yeh dua bhi hai ki aapko apne watan aur apne logon ka pyar hamesha milta rahe.aapki yeh rachana sada dil mein mehfooz rahegi....apna khayal rakhiye...
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16th May 2004, 09:00 PM

Pari Ji,

Kaise haiN aap? bahut hi pyaar ke saath aap ne apne matubhumi ke prati apne ehsaas ko jubaaN diya hai. Bahut hi achhaa likha hai aap ne. Hame behad behad pasand aaya.. Aap ki qalam padh kar hamaare jubaan par bhi kuch aa gaya likh rahe haiN.

wo college naa jaake picture mein jaana
wo doston ke saath dinbhar picnic manana
na jaane kyu chupke se hasa jaata hai
jab bhi mujhe apna watan yaad aata hai


<wo Bimaari ka detention wo time ka bahana
wo dusre ke project ko apana batlaanaa,
Na jaane kyun dil ko hasa jaata hai...
Jab bhi mujhe apna watan yaad aata hai..>

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Love hello - 16th May 2004, 11:36 PM

Hello pari

bahote hi khube likha hia. tume hare dil ke jajbate pata nahi kitne logo ke dil maie base hia kai ladkiyo ke dil ke jajabate hi jo pardesh maie basi hai apnasabe kuache chode ke. hum bhi unme se eke hai. bahoteh i acha laga pade ke aje hume bhi yeh pade ke eke min. ke liyelaga jaise ki hamaredil ke jajbate kise se labzomei dhale diye hia. nice work.

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16th May 2004, 11:51 PM

Dear Pari ji...

Aaj aapne hamare jazbaat kaagaz pe utaar diye hain...Ji main bhi apne watan ko utna hi miss karta huun jitna ke aap aur woh sabhi log miss karte hain jo apne watan apne relations ko pyaar karte hain aur kabhi unhe bhula nahin sakte..

Aapne bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aur sach maaniye aankhon mein aansoo aa gaye aapke is alaam ko padkar..

Thanx a lot

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17th May 2004, 06:59 AM

aslaamaaleikuum namaste and sat sri a kal

parijee ,

gustakhee maaf , watan kee yaad woh bichdah bachpan woh college keh deen woh maa kee god mein sar koh rakhna woh bhai behen kah pyar ,,

aghe kiya kahoon aapkoh kuch toh nahe nah

aapke har post mein jadoopan sha hota hain

apnee dua mein shameel kijiyegha


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