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28th August 2012, 10:42 AM
Namaskaar dosto...arse baad kuch likha hai aur aap sabki nazar kar rhi hu....!
Sitam es dil par ab aur nahi hai uthana, Roz nahi marna, jee kar hai dikhana..! guzra waqt hasaye, kabhi rulaye muje, zindgi tera yeh kaisa hai taana-baana..! na tu na teri koi hasrat hai ab mujko, safar zindgi ka tanha hai ab bitana..! tootne ke baad sambhal rahi hu maiN, ab zamane ko kuch bankar hai dikhana..! sajja milli ensaan ko khuda maan lene ki, ‘Sunita” phir nahi es galti ko dohrana...!  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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28th August 2012, 02:16 PM
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Pranaam aapki koShiShoN ko paDhe huye na jaane kitna waQt beet gayaa ... bazm mein aapki nayii koShiSh deKh kar KhuShi bhee huii aur Ghazal ke ehsaas paDh kar aaNKhen nam bhii huii..aik aisa ShaKs jiske dil mein baDaa hi dard aur taqleef chhupi huii hoN kahiiN aise ehsaas the.. ba-Khoobe peSh kiyaa aapne... aapko paDh kar hameshaa hi sukooN miltaa hai...! dil se daad aur duaaeN KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN aapka ChooTu |
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28th August 2012, 03:58 PM
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path par kaante bahut hain tere par manjil par jaana too.ne dar na jatilata se jeewan ki isko saral banana too.ne pasat na hone paye honsle khud ka sahas khud hi juta le 
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29th August 2012, 12:32 AM
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mere paas to aapki likhi hui rachna ki tarif karne ke liye shabd hi nai hai, aur agar me kuch likhu b to wo suraj ko diya dikhane wali baat hogi. bahut arse baad aapko padha, padh kar fir se dil ko sukoon mila. khush rahe, aur apna dhyan rakhe. aur aarzoo meri sirf usko paa lene ki. |
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8th September 2012, 05:44 AM
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time to prove ourself rather than staying shattered with shattered dreams dheroo daad kabool karen kafiir mai dobne lagta hoon samnder uchal deta hai Us Mukaaaa pe mera junon aajaye tujhe pukaroon mere muh se khoon ajaaye ...nm |
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8th September 2012, 05:17 PM
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Good Expressions ... Asar Angez PeshKash !! Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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2nd September 2014, 05:28 PM
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Chottu, maiN to khud bhool gye thi ki maine kab last poetry likhi thi, aaj kuch search kar rhi to yeh poetry saamne aa gye....arsa ho gya hai esko likhe hue...! mere ahsaasoN ko tumne samja...bahut bahut shukriya bahut sare pyar ke saath teri sister .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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2nd September 2014, 05:33 PM
tootne ke baad sambhal rahi hu maiN,
ab zamane ko kuch bankar hai dikhana..! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh! Sunita baaji, Dil-soz ehsaasaat se bharpoor aap ki yeH ghazal dil ka hur koona pur-num kar gayi...... Be-misaal soch aur adaaigi nazar aayi! DherooN daad ka nazraana pesh-e-khidmat hai, qabool kejiye ga! Apna khayaal rakhiye ga, DuaooN ke saath, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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2nd September 2014, 05:57 PM
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Pehli baar Apko padaa aur ismein likhe ek ek akshar se niklte aasuon ko mehsoos kiya. I hope aapke saath sab theek ho aur Apko dher Saari khushiyan milen. Ajeeb si kavita hai jisme apni kamzori ka bhi zikr hai aur har insaan ke andar chipi shaktiyon ka bhi. Bohut khoob. Apki sarika |
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2nd September 2014, 09:26 PM
Sunita ji ,
Namaskar ...Aaj pehli baar aap ki rachna pardne ka mauka mila . Yakeen maniye bahut achche lage aap ke ehsaas. Aage bhi aapko per payeinge , isi kamna ke saath.. Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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3rd September 2014, 10:37 AM
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Shukriya bhai...aapne en ahsaaspN ko pasand kiya Quote:
Rashmi ji Namaskaar...aap ab phir se out of touch hai, so pls aati rha kijiye, aapke bina bhi yahan virana nazar aata hai, har member ki apni alag pehchaan hai aur ronak hai...aapne hamare ahsaasoN pada aur saraha...dil se shukriya. regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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3rd September 2014, 11:10 AM
very nice poetry sunita dii.......arse baad aapka kalaam padne ko mila......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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3rd September 2014, 11:24 AM
Bohat khoob di........................
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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3rd September 2014, 01:21 PM
Sunita ji ... bahaut pur soz aur pur asar ehsaasaat rahe ... ghazal par dheron daad aap ko !!
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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3rd September 2014, 07:54 PM
Pranaam Sunita Ji
aapki panktiyon ko parhna sukhad raha. Yunhi likhtey rahein... aabhaar 
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4th September 2014, 12:38 PM
Sitam es dil par ab aur nahi hai uthana,
Roz nahi marna, jee kar hai dikhana..! Bohut Khoob Sunita ji...kya baat hai !! Likhte rahiye. Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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5th September 2014, 09:31 AM
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Kafir ji.......................dil se shukriya .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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aap sabhi dosto ka bahut bahut shurkiya, jo aapne mere ahsaasoN ko samja...! .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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8th September 2014, 03:55 PM
Sunita dee... bahot acchii ghazal pesh ki hai aapne..... aur shukriyaa jo itne waqt baad aap ise hamaare saamne lekar aayeeN...... ise padh kar mujhe mujhe meri taazaa ghazal yaad aa gayee, jispe haal hi me aapak taaza comment mujhe naseeb huaa hai..... bahot acche jazbaaton ko dekhne milaa is kalaam me... likhti rahen
Shaad..... |
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21st November 2014, 10:37 PM
hi didi m backkk :P aapki nazam parrhi bht ache se ahsasat ko bayan kia hai
apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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23rd November 2014, 04:51 AM
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23rd November 2014, 05:05 PM
Sunita ji....aapke ehsas seedhe dil ko lage...aur kya kahun..bas itna hi kahunga
Har kisi ke gam ka bhojh apne jahan pe na uthao Jo tumhe bhool gaya behtar use tum bhi bhool jao mera kya hai main to deewana hu kya bataoo tumko baare mein apne mein to khud se hi begaana hu ...................vinaydahiya |
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25th November 2014, 08:12 AM
Dii pranam,
Duniya me dard kam hota to shayroon ki jamat me itni bheed na hoti... Peshkash me apka dard dikha...par usse jyada umeed dikhi......umeed par hi duniya kayam hai Jis khushi ki firaq me, humne jindagi bita dali... Aaj humen maloom hua,ki vo apna hi saya thi Kush raheen Apka apna Bhushan |
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27th November 2014, 08:20 PM
Sunita Ji
After a long time read your poetry its beautiful.guzra waqt kabhi hasaye kabhi rulaye Kitni sahi baat kahi hay aapne. take care |
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24th April 2015, 06:13 PM
tootne ke baad sambhal rahi hu maiN,
ab zamane ko kuch bankar hai dikhana..! sajja milli ensaan ko khuda maan lene ki, ‘Sunita” phir nahi es galti ko dohrana...! namaskaar dii.. Bahut khoob jazbaat aur bayangi..dheron daad is kamaal ki peshkash ke liye.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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dosto maiN likhti bahut kam hu, aur na hi muje technically likhna aata hai, par jab aap sab es tarah housla badatey hai to lagta hai ki ham bhi shayad shayar hai  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th April 2015, 07:02 PM
Bohat hi khubsurat aur positive peshkash Salaam pesh hai
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Madhu Bala...........hame accha lga ki aap jaisi umda shayra ko hamare ehsaas pasand aaye Quote:
Bahut bahut shukriya housla badane ke liye .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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